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Reviews for Tin Angel

By : AraLuna
  • From ANON - GriseldaMarchbanks on January 10, 2006
    You have no worries, my dear. This past chapter was incredibly and wonderfully well-written, and it fit perfectly to have Draco quote Neruda in his rapture over Hermione and her body. Wonderful! Since you seem to have read the Bronte sisters, I was wondering...which one do you prefer (if you like them at all; I can remember the first time I read them and wished to see my copy of Jane Eyre replacing the logs in my fireplace)? The literary references you easily incorporate are rare in this arena, and it's refreshing and amusing. Adds a bit of depth, I think. The soul cannot thrive in the absence of a garden, no?
    Keep Writing, Happy Reading, and Update Soon!
    GM
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  • From ANON - Karmen on January 10, 2006
    Oh. My. Gods. That was great. I have to say, for beening your first, it was very well writen. I love how you incorperated the poem in with it. Keep up the great work. I would like to be added to the e-mail list please... my e-mail is toga_power@hotmail.com

    once again, great work,

    Karmen
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  • From ANON - Briar (not signed in) on January 09, 2006
    I love how much detail you put into the carraige scene it was quite enjoyable.
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  • From ANON - *rei* on January 09, 2006
    I've made up my mind... your Draco is just the hottest, most, sexiest, loving, Draco of all.
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  • From ANON - sunshinexx on January 09, 2006
    Hi Ariluna, I just came upon your fic today and I am disappointed that I haven't read this earlier. I really enjoyed the balance you have between the literary references and common dialogue. And their relationship developed perfectly - your pacing and reasoning are sound.

    I noticed that Draco has a fixation for Hermione's shoulder/clavicle area - fetish?

    Ron and his eternal love for food. I think that's the real romance story right there. ;)

    Regardless, I can't wait to read more. And hopefully I'll be able to recognize more allusions. (Got the Bronte sisters, Wizard of Oz, R. Dahl... and that's like it.)
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  • From ANON - draco2chexi4u on January 09, 2006
    your fic is the best i have ever read and i have already added it to my internet's favorites list
    i love chapter 5. u have no reason to feel insecure.
    please update soon or i will start to feel the results of
    "tin angel" withdrawls

    much love
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  • From ANON - Jessica on January 09, 2006
    I adore your story. I almost never read Hermione/Draco (i'm more of a HG/SS person myself), but this is very engaging and an enjoyable read. You have nothing to worry about with the erotic scene.
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  • From ANON - L. on January 09, 2006
    This is spectacular! I'm here via one of the D/Hr Yahoo!Groups as it was recommended there and I must say, I'm suitably impressed. I have an affinity for well-written stories and yours is certainly that!

    I am overjoyed at the numerous references to various things (La Traviata is actually one of my favourite operas) and I must encourage you to keep up this excellent work! Well-done. :D

    And yes, please add me to the email alert list of when you update! :)
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  • From ANON - A. on January 09, 2006
    Wonderful! Please update soon! :D
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  • From ANON - LovelyEyes on January 09, 2006
    That last scene of Chapter 5 was sensual. I've had the pleasure of experiencing that minus the carriage and the plot. It was almost like reliving the experience. Hermione's loss of control rang true. Now about the plot...good stuff, no great stuff. I love the story. It's realistic and romantic too. Keep up the good work! Crank them out faster! I love the story!
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  • From ANON - rachel on January 09, 2006
    i thought this chapter was absolutely fabulous! no worries, it was written very well. please update soon cant wait to read what happens next...
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  • From ANON - Libby on January 09, 2006
    OMG!!!! That was just HOT HOT HOT! Very sexy, very erotic. You did a great job. Draco reciting Neruda as he's seducing and caressing his cara mia. My oh my--this is one of my top fanfic reading moments. I am going to share this link with my romance lovin' buddies. Againm FANTASTIC chapter, you've accomplished to write a very sweet and steamy love scene.
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  • From ANON - kazfeist on January 09, 2006
    Lovely job, so far. I emailed you regarding your FF.net concerns. Looking for more...
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  • From ANON - fiona on January 08, 2006
    i love this story it's so full of passion! i loved the erotic scene it was very hot and they haven't even shagged yet i can't wait till they do and i can't wait until you update! lol you do not sound 12 at all so don't worry!
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  • From ANON - moonjameskitten on January 08, 2006
    hi, it's me again. weirdly, my email isn't showing, so, here it is, use it as you please : moon22@tiscali.fr :)
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