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By : AraLuna
  • From ANON - Petalsoft on January 07, 2006
    That was VERY erotic - have no doubt! I simply love this fiction. Please give us more.
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  • From ANON - jess on January 07, 2006
    amazing. i loved it.

    add me to the email list? x0miszjess0x@aol.com
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  • From ANON - Truth44 not logged in on January 07, 2006
    Ah! I'm sorry I haven't reviewed in so long, but I thought I must break my non-reviewing streak here.

    Oh. My. God. This was fucking AWESOME! I cannot believe that you've never written anything erotic in your life. Absolutely CANNOT. This was beautiful. I mean, didn't expect anything less from you--you're an awesome writer--but I was still in shock when I read this. I think that Draco's struggle not to touch Hermione at first was great. You portrayed his desire for her very well. And also, you added to his character with describing how he wanted to take it slow, and how scared he became at the thought of losing her. It showed how deep into their relationship he really was.

    And I, for one, thought that Draco's recitation of the poem whie they were doing the dirty (that was still somewhat clean, seeing as they didn't go all the way), was soooooo sexy. I mean, God! I was all hot and bothered just from reading what he was doing; when he started saying the poem--Jesus Christ, I nearly drooled! I sooooooooo need a shower right now.

    I had suspicions before that this was set in Chelsea in the first chapter (the Mermaid Cafe sounded so familiar, but I have a bad memory so... yeah.) I think the fact that it's set in a place that I'm familiar with--a place where I am nearly all day Mondays through Fridays (my school is on 18th st.--makes it more enjoyable for me to read. I know where everything is going on this way (my friend and I even went down Bleecker street looking for said book store. We'd been to one on Bleecker before--the one found when we went looking again--but it was smaller. So either we totally missed it, or I leave it to you own creative license. Either way, it was still reallly good!)

    Anyway, I'm sure I'm getting annoying, so I'll end this here. Once again, you did a fabulous job with this. My body is jumping from this.

    Awesome work!
    Truth
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  • From ANON - Kristal on January 07, 2006
    omg...i love it..
    please update!!
    the sex thing was fine...i dont think ur a 12 yo virgin as u put it...lol
    :)
    mucho luv...
    kristal
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  • From ANON - firewall on January 07, 2006
    Part 2 - I forgot to mention above how much I enjoy Luna here. She is so matter of fact and true to Hermione. I love her here.
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  • From ANON - firewall on January 07, 2006
    Ch 5 - LOL You described their first sexual exploration beautifully. This was a very hot chapter. I'm just wondering if the Prophet got pictures of the subtle foreplay that was going on at the opera, hmmmm? I am totally enjoying this story, update soon please.
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  • From ANON - oetbmalfoysmom on January 07, 2006
    Well, I'm back. After recovering from my smut-induced coma this morning, I realized that I completely forgot to review the rest of the chapter. My bad. Anyway, I just wanted to let you know that your characterization of Luna is priceless. She's a true friend to Hermione and she's just quirky enough without being too-far out there to really set the comic relief in the story. Love her, love your Draco and Hermione, love your book quotes, LOVE this story!
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  • From ANON - whatever on January 07, 2006
    i feeling hot hot hot are u sure u never wrote anything like that it felt like i was reading a beautiful love story when the two characters at the end or middle make love you are such a great writer so this is why i have to ask u to update soon
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  • From ANON - nadia on January 07, 2006
    hi I just readed your fic,and all I can say is..... When are you going to update! WoW I really loved how you wrote this fic so far.
    And I hope you are going to finish this fic. I can't wait to see what happens nexts.
    Nadia!
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  • From ANON - Little Tiny Bee on January 07, 2006
    OMG, that was so hot. Veeeeeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrrrryyyy well done, indeed!!!!!!!! Next chapter please :-) I'm dying here!!!!
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  • From ANON - mandy shades on January 07, 2006
    I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Bree on January 07, 2006
    Oh I love it! You don't sound like you don't know what you're talking about! I've loved this story from the beginning and I cannot wait for more ;)
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  • From ANON - Juri on January 07, 2006
    Holy Crap, I need a cold shower. That was hot! Very sensual read. And I love Luna being in the story as a confidant for Hermione. Overall, another brilliant chapter.
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  • From ANON - Kittie Renee' on January 07, 2006
    Oh wow, I can't belive i waited until this chapter to post my first review. Your fic is absolutely amazing. Your writing is so unique compared to all the other fic authors I've read, and I would VERY MUCH appreciate it if you could add me to your email update list.I must have read your fic at least three or four times in the past couple days ... its so good. I neverr get tired of the way you write, and your manipulation of the characters ... wow. Update soon please!
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  • From ANON - Karen on January 07, 2006
    oh yes--Luna's a delightful character in your fic.
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