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Reviews for Tin Angel

By : AraLuna
  • From ANON - Karen on January 07, 2006
    I'm glad you're introducing Hermione to Draco's friends. In a lot of Draco/Hermione stories, his friends completely disappear or are met much later.

    Your love scene was very erotic and HOT, especially with the poem.
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  • From ANON - georgina on January 07, 2006
    You don't have to worry, your an amazing writer and that was perfectly written. You have such a wonderful flow with your words that it can together really well. They are such a perfect match especially in this story because you make them so intelligent. Thanks, don't worry, it's great.

    geo
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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on January 07, 2006
    Oh no - it's far far far from being rubbish! ;-p Hehehe... well done, and I look forward to the next chapter - I hope you can update soon!
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  • From ANON - danielshortland@gmail.com on January 07, 2006
    Please add me to your email list, update soon!

    I love this story and ill do a better review in a couple of days, because its past midnight and I have uni in the morning.

    DSL
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  • From ANON - csckim2001 on January 07, 2006
    For a first timer that was excellent! I eagerly await the next chapter from you.
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  • From ANON - angelathene on January 07, 2006
    i love this story. it is so well written and interesting to read. please add me to your e-mail update list cause i always can't wait for your next chapters. good job and keep doing what you've been doing cause it works.
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  • From ANON - Jadziadaxx on January 07, 2006
    Hey, I really like this one so far! It's added to my favorite stories list.
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  • From ANON - butterflyhigh on January 07, 2006
    you have managed to portray the feelings and emotions of someone in the early stages of falling in love. the first date, the second date at the library and now the first sexual experience. you are doing wonderful. it is a sweet, beautiful story.
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  • From ANON - Experience My Dreams on January 07, 2006
    I like the whole chapter!!!! I would also love to be on the update list please!!!
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  • From ANON - Jess on January 07, 2006
    Lovely chapter. Can't wait for the next!
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  • From ANON - ashleigh on January 07, 2006
    oh my god.
    how could u be a virgin with such a perfect perception of sex? i usually like the stories where hermione and draco are intense and angry and horny as hell, but holy freaking crap this was perfect. especially the poem. ohhhhhh man. the poem was like sex alone. they were so passionate and calm and well versed, just.... wow. you should get an award. i've not only become more drawn to draco and hermione, but to alot of the works of literature that you are quoting.
    keep it up~ and update more!
    ~ashleighb.
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  • From ANON - Vicky on January 07, 2006
    UGH I LOVE this story!! It's so classy and beautiful! Update soon!!
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  • From ANON - ashling on January 07, 2006
    amazing! i do not think you are a 12 year writer, if you are, you have fantastic vocabulary and i have never known of a 12 year old who knew so much about literature and poems. great job! i am awaiting more chapters , please keep going! this is extremely well done story and am hoping for another chapter in the following week.
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  • From ANON - Kristina Malfoy on January 07, 2006
    Amazing. That was amazing. The erotic scene was hot and well written. I love your literary references through out the story. Can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - dramioney on January 07, 2006
    WOW!!! what a mind blowing that was. Everytime i read your fiction i keep wondering how/where you find the right quotes you use. This is why Draco and Hermione should be together. Great minds think alike.

    Love how you wrote chapter 5 in Draco's p.o.v; really showed us how much desperate he was in needing her. Weaving the poem in between the "coupling" ;) I must applaude you for that.
    How do you know what quotes to use? do you plan before hand!? This is why i would never think of writting, best leave it to talented people like you.


    Just excellent.. cant wait to read more.


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