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By : AraLuna
  • From ANON - Kris on January 07, 2006
    Just found this and read it in one go. I would have reviewed chapter by chapter but...well, I got caught up in the story (which is a credit to you for just making me want to skip ahead without expressing my thoughts on each part individually).

    This story is absolutely wonderful. You've managed to keep them in character (explaining any OOCness by emphasizing that they've both gone through experiences in life that have forced them to grow up) and still realistically portray a budding romantic relationship between them. That alone is truly a feat for this ship.

    I also like the reoccuring themes of heartbreak and skittishness in Hermione's character. That she's not willing (or wasn't initially willing anyway) to jump into any kind of relationship with Draco because of what happened with Bill is very fitting. It's common behavior in people who have been hurt so badly not to want to be hurt again and adds another element of realism to the fic that it might not have if you just had her throwing caution to the wind from the get go. That said, I'm also pleased that she's starting to open up a little more in regards to the possibilities with him now. Emotional pain can hurt forever, but she doesn't seem like she'd be one to dwell in it for the rest of her life when other options have presented themselves.

    I must say though, you've really made me dislike Bill in this fic, and usually I like him in fanfic form (in the books, he's just a little too cocky and not in a good way). You have me wondering if we'll hear any more details into what happened with the breakup or if you're just going to have Hermione move on and be happy, rubbing his nose in the fact that he could have had her and ended up going for the flashy, superficial trophy wife instead. Or maybe that's just my own sadistic imagination running away with me. Still, it would be entertaining to see Bill's reaction to someone else so openly favoring Hermione.

    All of that aside, you did splendidly with the erotic portion in this last chapter. It had just the right amount of build-up leading into it and the lust coming from both sides to make it work. Well done.

    By all means, add me to your update list. I'd love to know when new installments arrive. :)


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  • From ANON - Faith on January 07, 2006
    This is SUCH A GOOD CHAPTER! But I NEED to see what happens at the Weasley's house- what happens when they see the hickey.... dum dum dum dum.........
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  • From ANON - Darian on January 07, 2006
    Update soon..I really love this story!!!
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  • From ANON - anon on January 07, 2006
    beautifully erotic, well done

    update soon!
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  • From ANON - KelleysSweetpea on January 07, 2006
    This chapter was just perfect
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  • From ANON - Krystyn on January 07, 2006
    Ooooh! I love this chapter. Not only was the carriage scene perfect, but all the literary references really impress me. Please continue to update regularly...it's a great story.
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  • From ANON - --- on January 07, 2006
    This was an awesome chapter! And I love this story! Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Meg on January 07, 2006
    oh my god...definitely not rubbish...u portrayed the passion b/t them perfectly...dont think for a second that its even remotely bad...the story as a whole is great!!
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  • From ANON - Pam on January 07, 2006
    Great post, please post again soon. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - hope on January 07, 2006
    Awesome, finally some naughtyness.

    and no you are definitly not a virgin, in fact i almost think that you did some research before writting this.
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  • From ANON - Inspire on January 07, 2006
    You're doing wonderfully. I love their banter (and the sex was good too). I'm looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 07, 2006
    Oh I LOVE this story!

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  • From ANON - sheedy on January 07, 2006
    OK well I'm at a loss for words. I LOVED it. How's that for a start? The whole carriage thing was great. And that was a wonderful choice of poetry ( now I have to go look it up).
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 07, 2006
    Excellent! That was definitely not virginal, 12-year old smut. It was so hot and romantic, but that REALLY sexy edge came when you ended with Draco's self-gratification moments after she leaves, whilst in a carriage. Highly erotic stuff, I can't believe it's your first time writing that!

    Thanks heaps for the wonderful chapter, and can't wait till you write more!
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  • From ANON - FreakWave on January 07, 2006
    Oh wow... is it hot in here or is it me? *swoons*
    Your Story is one of the best Dramione-fics and on my top-favorite-list (and believe me, there are not so much good ones out there).
    Keep up the good work and don't worry, no one will think you're 12 years old after THAT scene...

    Sincerely yours
    FreakWave
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