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By : AraLuna
  • From ANON - di on January 07, 2006
    please please e mail me when the next chapater is up thank up.
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  • From ANON - Hanna Delacour on January 07, 2006
    Your first erotic scene was absolutely perfect! I loved it! I can't see anyone finding an error in your beautiful writing... and the characters interaction is some of the best I've ever read. Hermione and Draco would have much intellectual quips to hurl at one another and you have mastered it! This is turning into one of my all time most treasured Draco and Hermione fics! Love, love, love it!
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  • From ANON - Chavela on January 07, 2006
    Breathtaking and so damn erotic. That was beautiful how you interwove the poem with the touches.
    Wonderful chapter. Can't wait for more.
    PEACE Isa
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  • From ANON - megan on January 07, 2006
    u shouldnt be nervous cause that chapter was frickin awesome!!! and I can't wait until the next chapter which better be commin up soon'!!!!
    -megan
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  • From michelline on January 07, 2006
    ohmigod! that chapter was HOT! I loved the scene in the carriage... I'm so jealous :)
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  • From ANON - Kathy on January 06, 2006
    What a absolutely delightful story! I'm so glad it was recommended to me. I love the slow buildup of their relationship and the whitty banter....although I have to admit to being impatient for them to get to the "next step" -- we all know Draco won't wait that long now, will he? >>wink, wink
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  • From ANON - Emma on January 05, 2006
    And you know, I was just thinking. Someone mentioned that the dialogue is too formal, but it's obviously all said in a lighthearted, teasing manner. It's not really that formal, but at the same time, it sort of is, which feels appropriate to me, as they were never close back in their school days. Anyway, one more comment I thought of is that your style reminds me of Jane Austen, especially in Pride and Prejudice, just the way they talk and exchange thoughts makes me think of Elizabeth and Darcy... Oh Darcy.... Anyway.... Ok, great story, and I absolutely love it.
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  • From ANON - Emma on January 05, 2006
    I am absolutely loving your story! Rather lighthearted, but at the same time, somewhat serious. I greatly enjoy the number of references you put in here, because, even though I haven't read many of the novels in which they reference, I think it adds much character and depth to the story. Keep going with this, I hope to see an update soon!
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  • From ANON - Me^^ on January 04, 2006
    I really like this story. ALOT. Lusty Draco is a sexy Draco especially when he has great taste in witches^^ *yeah Hermione* I feel awefully bad though about her relationship with Bill, did he have an affair or Are Ron and Harry mad at him because he hurt their best friend? Anyway Great story^^ I hope you update soon^^ really soon...
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  • From ANON - swivelchair on January 03, 2006
    Perfect. I loved it! Email me when you update. Cheers! :)
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  • From ANON - Miya on January 02, 2006
    I love your story! The way you do not rush into your plot hooks me more and more and has me definitely waiting for the next chapters to see how their unfolds. It's very rare to read a Draco/Hermione fanfic that takes it sweet time. The tone and the pace of your story actually reminds of those romantic comedy-dramas in the 70s and 80s where the leads banter with each other and not jump at each other's bones at the very first chance that they get.

    One thing that also hooked me into your story was your incorporation of various literary works (Draco really seems to be the type to gravitate towards some of the books that you mentioned). As a literature major I had the grandest time naming where you got your references. Thank you thank you for quoting Neruda in your first chapter, that poem makes me cry every time I read it. Although to be honest, I still haven't finished Unbearable Lightness of Being, which you also mentioned. It's not fun when your trying to analyse it.
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  • From ANON - megan on January 02, 2006
    oooer I totally love your story and can't wait until the next chapter!! I will be looking for your update like a fanfiction junkie and will be awaiting ur update!
    -megan
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  • From ANON - iceberri on December 31, 2005
    I've recently discovered the beauty of Neruda's love poems and I was so excited when I saw it being referenced -- in a HP fanfic no less! Although my spanish is a little lacking, they're so beautiful to read aloud. :) Anyhoo, I adore the many references to literature and I've copied a few of them down to read in the future. I'm not a literature junkie, but I loved the quotes you referenced so now I have to read the books. The fic itself is wonderfully well-written, a tribute to the trait I love most about Hermione and Draco: their brilliance. Besides the obvious "opposites attract" I have always loved the Her/D shipping because they'd simply inspire each other intellectually... which is why I'll probably shudder if J.K. Rowling puts Ron and Hermione together. >_
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  • From ANON - Kim on December 31, 2005
    I must say that this story has to be the best Hermione/Draco fic ever...well along with Pansy's Volcano. But wow!!!

    I have never taken the time to review the numerous stories that I have read since I'm a consummate lurker but i just had to stop and give you your props, if only to encourgae you to write more.

    I've never had anyone write Draco the way I see him in my mind's eye so perfectly. I'm sure everyone has their idea of a perfect Draco but you just enabled me to read about mine. Thank you! Your Draco is the absolute best. Suave, well-read, a wicked sense of humor...i could go on and on! Once again thank you and keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - mugglemom on December 31, 2005
    Wow!I have read MANY d/hr fic. I am really intrigued by your first four chapters. Please put me on your email update list. This story is one I would love to follow.
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