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Reviews for Tin Angel

By : AraLuna
  • From ANON - jchaser on November 29, 2005
    wonderfully written...the dialogue is just dead on. cannot wait to see where you take your story. original premise and spectacular writing. thoroughly enjoyable!
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  • From ANON - kazfeist on November 29, 2005
    Lovely, so far! Nice language from folks supposedly well-educated. Let me know when you post again. Cheers!
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  • From ANON - Hmm on November 29, 2005
    WOW beautiful writting.Your description of everything going on is so perfect, not too much nor too little to descripe the surroundings, feelings and everything else that makes this story really believable. Hope that you are to update real soon, i can only guess it must take a lot of your time to great such credible fiction. keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - rachel on November 29, 2005
    i enjoyed this first chapter very much, and look forward to getting to know the types of people you make these older hermione and draco be. please update soon
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  • From ANON - Liz on November 29, 2005
    Ahh; good start; reminds me of a summer wine; to be enjoyed at a leisurely pace.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 29, 2005
    this is great i cant wait for more!!!
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  • From ANON - geo on November 28, 2005
    Awesome. Your a real good writer and your style is unique!I loved it! please update. Your writting is perfect and witty! thanks for the story!

    geo
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  • From ANON - Juri on November 28, 2005
    Very well done. I hope you write another one soon.
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  • From ANON - Paranoia on November 28, 2005
    You're making it too formal. Other than that, it seems to be going somewhere. Brilliantly written.
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  • From ANON - Stacy on November 28, 2005
    I like the story so far.
    Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Sunny on November 28, 2005
    I love how the dialogue between Hermione and Draco actually sounds like things that the characters would say!!!! I mean I can actually see them both saying it exactly the way you have it....very good work...can't wait to read the rest....I also love all the quotes and book references (appeals to my true geek form)...neruda is great!!!
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  • From ANON - Claribel on November 28, 2005
    A really enjoyable first chapter. Do take your time with it - I hate rushing a good story! I'll keep an eye out for your updates, and will go and listen to Joni Mitchell again!
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  • From ANON - curlyq2713 on November 28, 2005
    ooh, great start. i can't wait to see what happens next. please update soon! :-)
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  • From BlackxBellax on November 28, 2005
    Oooh! Please update soon!

    One chapter and I'm already hooked! I'm going to have to make space in my Rec. Reading list. This was brilliant!

    Bek
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  • From ANON - Donavon. on November 28, 2005
    I really believe that a slow build up to a story, is really the best was to
    increase the tension within a story. Your first chapter does that in a
    really clever way. I enjoyed their conversation and look forward to seeing
    how their relationship grows. Best wishes,
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