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Reviews for 6th Year Surprises

By : Sunshine20016804
  • From ANON - Kat on December 27, 2005
    Awwe! It's so sweet, and Hilarious! I just LOVE IT! Harry Is SO sweet in this one! Okay. I am done..Okay I loved it. Now I'm done! :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 17, 2005
    Well um, fine story so far. I actually have only one gripe about it. Your emotions, are like overplayed. I realize you want to state how pure their love is and how much they love it each other but constantly drilling it into the readers heads becomes somewhat annoying. Your description of love was nice, but after reading it 7 times within the same scene I ended up scanning. Just a suggestion, dont overplay so much, you can get a point across by just saying it twice, and once if its powerful enough.
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  • From ANON - DarkKitty311 on December 14, 2005
    I know that song gunther is so funny !!!! love it and soo funny i would have died if i woke up and Ablus and Lupin where standing next to me and harry and we were naked !!! I would have crawled into a hole lol !!! any way awsome story i love the 100 percent smut lol
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  • From ANON - angel on November 30, 2005
    ~lol~ great story please more ..please update soon ...later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - angel on November 29, 2005
    i like your story please update soon

    angel
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 29, 2005
    Not a bad story, and you have decent skills as a writer. I can tell you worked hard on it. BUT the characterizations are horrible. For example, like in this last chapter, you had Snape, Pomfrey, McGonagal, Dumbledore and Lupin standing around like a bunch of silly teenagers discussing Harry and Hermione shagging and the size of Harry's "shlong". Not to mention the bit about Hermione's thong. (Hermione in a thong???) In what universe would this actually happen?
    Perhaps you should list this as a humor or parody fic so people won'y be thrown off by the... well, weirdness of it all. This really isn't meant to be a flame, I'm just saying.

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  • From Sunshine20016804 on November 29, 2005
    lol...ok ok, i'll work on the dialogue lmao
    that review was hilarious lol
    "Your great Harry" "No you're great Mione"
    "You've got great abs, Harry" "No, you've got great abs Mione"
    lmao lmao
    Yea, that kinda needs to be worked on... thanx... i didnt even notice it lol

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  • From ANON - dumbledorefan on November 29, 2005
    yeah. i agree. you need to work on the dialogue.nevertheless,it was funny.the way lupin and dumbledore continue their normal conversation in that room...and the discussion the staff had about potter and granger. its insane,but hilarious.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 29, 2005
    OMG- not a bad story but c'mon... "You're great, Harry." "No, you're great Mione" "You've got great abs, Harry" "No, you have great abs, Mione." "You're sexy." "You're sexier." "I you love." "I love you more." You need to work on the dialogue hon.
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