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Reviews for Transfiguration of the Heart

By : Losille
  • From 0blivion on June 16, 2008
    i cant even tell you how addicted i am to this fic! please continue!!
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 10, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - mk on August 16, 2006
    very enjoyable snape/hermoine story so far. the only problem w/ aff, is that you can't ever tell how long ago something was written. it could be the last chapter was written last week, or last year.

    well, I am enjoying your story and hope to see more added to it in the future.
    happy writing.
    mk
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on July 25, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Bek Allen on February 06, 2006
    Ooooh! Please update soon! I've just foregone sleep to finish reading these fifteen, wonderful chapters. You had me absolutely hooked within the first three paragraphs that I had to read to see what happened. I can't wait to see Viktor and Minerva's responses... and Snape and Hermione's for that matter.

    Please update soon as possible, I really would like to see how this all ends up.

    Bek
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  • From ANON - lemonade on February 04, 2006
    Actually, if she doesn't want Victor, I could take him off her hands.... ;D

    Well, it looks like she has a chance with Severus, as unlikely as it seems. He's quite the challenge. Hope he offers her something warm to wear. Maybe like his sheets.
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  • From Shanastay on January 30, 2006
    Ok, I'm going to sound like an obsessive freak but here goes... That's IT??? GAH! That just whetted my appetite for an update. All kidding aside I am still very intrigued to see how this unfolds.

    Here's the constructive criticism: I noticed several spots where the autocorrect in Word fixed a misspelling and inserted the wrong corrected word. A quick read through (5 minutes tops) will fix the problem.

    I impatiently await further installments in this very engaging series.
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  • From ANON - Shanastay on January 28, 2006
    I just finished reading your entire fic in one sitting. I consider myself a rather harsh critic, but other than the occasional typo (we ALL have them) I found nothing worth criticizing. Excellent story. Very well written and clearly thought out. I am especially impressed by the evolution of the central relationship as it is utterly believable. Bravo! Thank you for taking the time and effort to grace us with your talent. I certainly hope you have not given up on this story. I will keep checking back for updates. Happy writing!
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  • From ANON - Evelynn on January 25, 2006
    Great job so far! I can't wait for the next update!
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  • From VermillionRhodes on January 23, 2006
    Very intriguing. I'm not sure who she'd be better off with, actually. I usually don't like Victor ... too neaderthal for me ... but he's becoming quite a sympathetic character in your hands. Great story. Can't wait for an addition.
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  • From ANON - ShilohDarke on January 19, 2006
    Oh... Man! I have ONE complaint! I want chapter 14 NOW! Talk about nasty cliffhangers!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Moyra on January 16, 2006
    What a cliffy! You are such a tease! I can
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  • From ANON - Shampoo on January 16, 2006
    Yes, you go Snape! Finally he's stopped playing around (I hope) and has made a freaking move. Well, anyway..love the story. It's really addicting.
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  • From ANON - Applekissis on January 16, 2006
    Grrrr!!!!
    Y didnt they kiss dammit......lmao
    great chappy
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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on January 16, 2006
    Oh dear gods! You cannot do that! Leaving us there like that.... it's torture! A crime against human kind! You must update immediately to rectify this situation!
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