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By : CerberusSky
  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on January 03, 2006
    Need chapter 22! Draco was hoping Harry would see. He can't. The addiction has started. *sigh* I had hoped that he would be the strong one. Guess even the hero has a weakness.
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  • From ANON - Answers on January 02, 2006
    I say write whatever feels best. I agree that i dont really like the thought of Harry falling into the same bad habits as Draco, but i understand why youv'e done it and the importance and relevanve it has with the text and the characters. I like your story, and i like how youre not smoothing over the affects of alcohol as a drug, an addictive drug to placate your readers. Like you said if they dont like it, why keep reading it? I think it's cause your a really good writer, and their so engaged with the plot that they have to keep reading. Dont take all the reveiws on the subject as critisim, some are just people expressing their veiws on the subject and giving you feed back that you want.
    When it comes down to it, you have the power, it's your story to write however you want.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 02, 2006
    amazing. this really is a veerrrry good story. i love how real you are making it. please continue to update! don't listen to stupid mean reviewers that judge you. i think this story is going very well, so keep up the great work!! and happy new year

    :)
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  • From ANON - Chris on January 02, 2006
    To start with,
    THAT WAS SO COOL! You can really write and continue with what you're doing. i dont know what else to say.
    Ummmm.... can u help me, i need some ideas, but the story really tore me away from reality and i felt as if i was there. When i saw the title, i was interested, and started to read the first few paragraphs. i hope that one day i could write as good as u. my favorite part is when malfoy and harry were in the train and he saw the scars. it showed me that harry had feelings for draco from the begining. You are a great writer, and the fic is great. Very interesting
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  • From ANON - Nattie88 on January 02, 2006
    OMG!!!!!!!! Okay I just read all of that at once which is why I never reviewed before and it was realy awsome!! so wow, lol, speachlees and i think ill re-read it...well see but yeah fucking great job!! keep it up. realy need more.
    lol.
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  • From ANON - blindedbytheblood on January 02, 2006
    i loved it
    hottness:P
    but i must say i like may other readers r... desturbed with the drinking
    but then again
    what in life isnt disturbing?
    so i c where ur coming from
    i hope that by writing this that u get something out of it
    maybe even help with ur addictions
    we can only hopw
    tho there is a reason they r called addictions
    anyway
    i wish u luck
    ive been there and it takes alot
    back to not being so personal with u
    im looking forward to how they can over come their addictions
    ...and if they do
    thanx for spending the time to write this
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  • From ANON - juicy on January 02, 2006
    Good chapter . plz update soon :):D
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  • From ANON - Lady_B on January 02, 2006
    oh my god, your story is so good! please update soon!!
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  • From ANON - Karen on January 02, 2006
    I on't know what people have been saying about your writing, but I really like the whole realism of it all. I understand about the whole partner becomes alcoholic too thing because my sister is engaged to a man who used to be, and they've both said to me so many times that it was so difficult facing it for the both of them, because when my sister's fiance was tempted to drink, my sister would too, but then he got help and now he's off it and making his way back to recovery. He has had a few relapses since then, and belive me, he's been in so much pain and anger because of them, and my sister has really helped him through it all.

    It so good that you can put real life experiences into your writing, and it often does tend to improve it. If someone who didn't have an alcoholic background tried to write this story, it'd probably turn out to be over exaggerated and in a bad light, when the way you've written it is so true and isn't at all like "they had drank so much that they passed out. When they woke up, they drank again" you go into a much deeper level of it, and I love how you've made us see how Harry is slipping, when he doesn't realise it himself. It amkes me start to wonder which one of them's gonna save who. But now you've got Hermione back in there....who know??
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  • From ANON - songbird on January 02, 2006
    Hi... It's my first review to this fic because I just came over it and read the whole 20 chapters in one.
    I have to say, that I really like the story, so don't let yourself go crazed by any reviewer who doesn't know what he's talking about. Not that I knew... *shrugs*
    I like you being a realist because even though it's just fic it should still be at least believable! And it is, you do a good job. I'm content, that you know what you're talking about. And though Harry is getting an alcoholic (I see, that it is nearly impossible to stay sober while your partner is drunk all the time *nods*) there is eome progress, we (the readers) have to see: He's not cutting since they are together! And that's really positive, I hadn't expected that to be so constantly. (Well, he gt's his pain in a little more enjoyable way...)
    To cure an addiction takes its time! So I'll give you all the time you think is needed because everything else would be ridiculous. And I'm waiting for Hermione to see what they are doing and start to set up the first AA-meeting at Hogwarts *g*
    Write on, I'm excited to read the next chapter and don't listen to any flames, ok?
    Bye, Read you soon, songbird.
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  • From ANON - murasaki on January 02, 2006
    I don't really see there a reason why you should have to defend your story so much. actually I think your reasoning is quite logical and I like your view which is indeed quite realistic and not so desperately moralistic. just keep up your work, most of the ones that critizcise you are most probably too young or too sheltered to know what you are writing about.
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  • From ANON - TabooDesire on January 02, 2006
    Certainly not a bondage club but hot! That sex scene really was unreal. Can you consider them going to a bondage club in later chapters? It really would be awesome.
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  • From TabooDesire on January 02, 2006
    Aww. They made up. I don't know if I would have done the same thing. Harry's a good man. I wonder where they're going. I hope like...somewhere naughty. Like a bondage club.
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  • From ANON - cyn on January 02, 2006
    You are still doing an AWESOME job. Granted it is starting to hit close to home and become more angsty than I like, BUT I know that it all fits in with the story. I am not going to leave you. Just sitting on the outside you want to cry and say, "Don't you see what you are doing?" and then there is the part of you that is saying, "You have been there, too. Hindsight is 20/20."

    So, in other words, you are doing an amazing job capturing both of them and making it very realistic. If Draco had been cured overnight I would have been a bit upset. I am now at the point of waiting for the two of them to sober up and for Harry's feelings to still be there and Draco questioning what they are suppose to do together while they are sober, since the drinking seems to be the one thing that they have in common. Granted, the clubbing is awesome, but falls under drinking. I hope that just made sense.
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  • From ANON - Narcissa Black on January 01, 2006
    I understand the realism that this story represents, but I also understand the recriminations that you have probably gotten from other readers. I have not read them, so I am just responding to the A/N. When I was in my twenties, I went out with my friends with the express purpose of getting drunk, although I still would say that I didn't have a drinking problem. Other substances, well, let's just say that I wasn't as lucky. We all find whatever it is that gets us through the night. Does that make us weak? Of course, it does. It's all part of actually being human. Even the people who seem so in control and on top of the world have their crutch, it's just hard to find. I think this is a marvelous story, and I will read it until you stop writing it. At least they have each other. Co-dependent? I say, good for them, that they are not alone in their darkness.
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