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Reviews for She Would Always Love Him

By : SchtzFrytls
  • From ANON - l'etje on December 20, 2005
    wow keep going and post soon
    bye bye
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  • From ANON - Ashley on December 19, 2005
    amazing details and great plot lines. i love how you added original characters to an already great story and twisted it to be your own. keep on writing and ill keep on reading!
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  • From ANON - l'etje on December 17, 2005
    let amer have the baby and then they can destroy voldermort
    bye bye and posts soon
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  • From ANON - l'etje on December 17, 2005
    this was very very good keep going and post soon and please don't let voldemort take her baby away
    post soon
    bye bye
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  • From ANON - Emmie on December 16, 2005
    Voldy shows up soon and harry and amber fight him, but something should happen to someone. ie, someone should be hurt or die. then go from there. but i like amber and Draco together. they make a nice couple.


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  • From ANON - Neith on December 12, 2005
    Well...


    To be contsructive with my comment. ^^

    I just find that you seem to be over doing it. Like, you're trying to make her totally perfect in every way- Three different forms she can take, she's better than Hermione, she's better than everyone, she's smarter, she has a more tragic past, she's more powerful because she can survive a Voldemort curse, ect. And everyone likes her.

    It's just, fanfictions are counted as good when a character is realistic. Are you as good as Amber? Or are you like the rest of us, you're great at some things thing and terrible at other things? You do have some people who don't like you, right?

    Fanfiction sometimes ends up being the writer's fantasy of what they WANT for themselves, not what they think would be cool for the characters to experiance. I'm not saying that Amber shouldn't exist in the story! But you seem to put her on a pedistal above everyone else, and even Hermione is affected. She's now as crap at potions as Neville.

    How did she not die? And if she didn't die, she'd be as famous as Harry Potter. If it was the same spell as Harry's spell from his mother, it would have rebounded off her and back onto Voldemort, turning him back into what he originally was.

    And oh my gosh, what have you done to Hermione? She's now as bad at potions as Neville?


    You should write more! Seriously, the plot has potential and I'd like to see how it goes. Just remember that people have faults, enemies, and are mortal. Amber shouldn't be any different to anyone else. It's the people who are normal, but experiance strange and totally un-normal things that are the most interesting, because we can relate to them the best.
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  • From MidnightLilly on December 08, 2005
    Good Fanfic, my name is Amber.
    I hope you write more.
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