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By : firegoddess100
  • From Pegleg-TinStar on July 30, 2020

    Overall, really good.  Brave to take on the "lovers at cross purposes" plot line not once, but three times in one story!  As a reader, I felt like it almost got away from the author once or twice, and that it dragged here and there because it was the same story three times over, but she managed to resolve things appropriately at the end.  Again, the editing in this story was consistently good, which surprised me in a story with this many chapters.  I've read others where the editing has been inconsistent from one chapter to the next.

    I don't think of myself as the 'grammar police', and although I'm a Yank, I do recognize that just because we all speak English, it doesn't mean that the Brits, the Yanks, and the Aussies are all going to understand each other, but certain dialects and speaking/writing patterns I find very distracting.  

    One that really gets me is when an author wirtes "he was sat", instead of "he was sitting" or "he was seated".  Better than all three would be "he sat", but that's a matter of using active or passive voice.  Either omit the "was", or use the appropriate form of the verb you are combining it with.  It might work on a fan fiction site, but it will never get past a real editor.  And alot of the authors here have the creative potential to produce work that will make to a real editor one day, I think this piece demonstrates that.

     


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  • From ANON - Katrin on January 09, 2016
    any new chapter? :)
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  • From fodien on February 25, 2008
    Great story! I'm enjoying it loads! The Harry and Katie relationship was really interesting.
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  • From Isake on August 22, 2007
    YAY!!! This was amazing! The characters and interactions were soooo deep and the whole story was such a big success! Will there be more? PLEASE!!!
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  • From Gwenfrewi on August 13, 2007
    Oh, you got to be kidding me. 18 chapters and you end it with Hermoine interrupting Harry and Ginny having morning sex. It was an awesome story. Heartwrenchingly beautiful at points and hot at others. Please write me. *offers chocolate chip cookies*
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  • From Wiz on April 16, 2007
    u just had to stop at wat is possibly the most embarassing part didn't u?
    well hurry up and update... i like ur story...
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  • From FireLord1 on February 04, 2007
    I just got done with this fic and I love it. Too bad that you apparently haven't updated in a while and most likely won't.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 07, 2007
    when can we expect the next chapter?
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  • From ANON - don't have a name on December 18, 2006
    OOO goood lord...that will be a dreadful sight. Hermione is probably going to be scarred for life. HAHA.....sorry but this was just histarical. I hope that you update soon because I love this story. Please write the next chapter soon.
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  • From ANON - Brittany on November 13, 2006
    I loved your fic. Best Harry/Ginny lemon or any kind of fic, I've read in a while.
    Keep up the good work.

    Brittany
    Ai to Heiwa (Love and Peace)
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  • From ANON - xlx on August 02, 2006
    great story
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  • From ANON - jenny on July 17, 2006
    excellent

    that's all i have to say =]
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  • From ANON - Aubrey on July 07, 2006
    NO! You cannot - I repeat CANNOT - end it there! You need to write more! You can't leave your fans out to die like that!! Ahhh!!! No please please please please please write more soon... That was one of the best stories I've read so far (And I've read some pretty good ones) So please, continue it... and soon!

    Aubrey
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 02, 2006
    bravo. really. i love post-hogwarts adult fics. it's much better when they're adults. teenage sex is so sleazy. i AM a teenager and i think teenage sex is sleazy. so thanks for writing this fic. it's very classy. good on you.
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  • From ANON - imperfecthermione on February 07, 2006
    ohmigosh I love it! so hot!
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