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Reviews for Careful Courting

By : xavier82
  • From ANON - piper-tolkien on November 15, 2013
    Please update soon :)
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  • From StillHorny on August 08, 2010
    I love vella stories. Please continue.
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on December 12, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - amber on December 02, 2006
    please continue the story i love Hermione/Draco stories
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on September 21, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on July 10, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - ichigo on February 04, 2006
    if you cant update offen post a lot....as soona s i post this...ok? ready...and....GO! POSTPOSTPOSTPOST!....where are the posts ? :(
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  • From ANON - mona on December 12, 2005
    update when u can i like it
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  • From ANON - Donavon. on December 11, 2005
    Your story as quite a good beginning. There are a lot of spelling and the dreaded Grammar mistakes.
    However there was also a lot of good points. I like the fact that LUCIUS is a spy already. That Narcissa
    is caring, and your Dumbledore is a bit nutty.

    Get a beta, or just someone to read through your chapter. Space to bars between paragraphs.

    Harry Potter has a number of helpful, factual and spelling sites, my favourite is
    http://www.hp-lexicon.org/index-2.html which should take you right to it. Floo powder and Flooing is the right spelling,
    you see even reviewers can get it wrong.

    Look forward to reading your next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 08, 2005
    do us all a favour and burn your computer


    if you dont wish to burn it i suggest you find a beta who can fix your errors. You have really bad spelling and Grammer.

    What may i ask is a vella? I am sure you mean a veela
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  • From ANON - intcrimgrrl on December 07, 2005
    This story seems very rushed thus far, although the premise is a good one, overall. You also really need to work on your spelling. It's a flue network, not a flew network. Draco's father's name is Lucius not Luscious, and Dumbledore requests people's presence not presents. Those are a few of the glaring errors. A beta would be a good thing, particularly with the spelling, but a beta might have some suggestions to slow things down and flesh it out. I was intrigued by the twist you put in Hermione's character, with her parents' attitude, but it wasn't really explored at all. I'd be interested in reading more about it - don't be afraid of detail.
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  • From ANON - Avanell on December 07, 2005
    Do we also get a jealous Ron in this story? And I hope Draco gets a peek at her muggle life. Looking forward to their dialog. Please post again soon...but also please break up your paragraphs. Makes for easier reading.
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  • From ANON - TNgirl on December 07, 2005
    I like your beginning, but I would suggest you putting more space(paragraphs) between things. I look for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - kelly on December 07, 2005
    its a good start, but you might want to think about getting a beta it always helps to have someone to check your work for spelling mistakes.
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