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Reviews for Look What You've Done To Me

By : writerbynight
  • From GML on February 06, 2006
    *eyes wide* Shit, who did he see? I doubt it was Ron and Hermione, I mean, there would have been a confrontation or somethingif that was the case. *tilts head* From his reaction it must have been really bad. *grin* Well!? Who was it!? More Please! ASAP!
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  • From ANON - Remi on February 05, 2006
    Sorry I didn't review in the last chapter, its been a busy year! I love this story and can't wait for more of it!
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  • From MasochisticAngel on February 02, 2006
    How could you stop there? OMFG! WTF!! You have to make your chapters longer. They are just too damn short. There, I said it. Your chapters are short and you need to lengthen them. I did like this chapter though. I was so ready for Harry to go back to his own compartment and go down on Draco, but sadly you just dropped it off. Shame...

    Kyle

    p.s. MAKE YOUR CHAPTERS LONGER!!! I feel like I barely get into them and then they are over. So update soon, and it better be long or you're going to get a nasty review from me. And I make grown men cry, so you better do as I say or else... LOL! J/k
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  • From MasochisticAngel on February 02, 2006
    I have a few problems with chapter five. You really screwed up your geography. The Three Broomsticks and The Hog's Head are both in Hogsmeade. The Leakey Coldren is the bar in Diagon Alley. You might want to go back and try to fix that. But I did like this chapter. Please tell me this is a Bottom!Draco and Dominant!Harry fic. It seems like it's leading in that direction, and I love it when Harry tops Draco. That was really hot when Harry approached Draco in that predetory saunter and whispered in his ear. Totally rocked my socks off, and then some. LOL!

    Kyle
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  • From MasochisticAngel on February 02, 2006
    Okay, just read chapter four and... HOW ON EARTH CAN THEY POSSIBLY GET TOGETHER IF YOU ARE MAKING THEM WRITE NASTY THINGS TO EACH OTHER?! Alrighty, I feel better now. LOL! Going to read the next chapter.

    Kyle
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  • From MasochisticAngel on February 02, 2006
    Wow! Really great story. I really like this chapter. Of course, I know the letter came from Draco since this is a H/D fic. Can't wait to read chapter three, in fact, I'll do it now. LOL!

    Kyle
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  • From on January 29, 2006
    I only come back to this site for this wonderful story :)
    It makes my day when you update! Haha

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  • From ANON - cyn on January 25, 2006
    oooo harry's upset. This upset will just drive him straight into Draco's arms, won't it?
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  • From DevilnBlue on January 24, 2006
    gyah poor Harry is now traumitzed T_T good story though^^; Just poor Harry... And Draco needs to get his head out his arse and just admit he's daff for the bloke already >
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on January 24, 2006
    Need chapter 7! Why didn't they tell Harry? Doesn't make sense. What happens next?
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  • From ANON - Chi on January 24, 2006
    Oh no, he didn't just do that!
    Harry didn't just walk in on Ron and Hermione! Ewww....! >.
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  • From ANON - galaksia on January 24, 2006

    hey just wanna say great story so far and i'm looking forward to the harry/draco action :P

    "He was going to get to the bottom of this" intentional pun? :D it made my perverted self laugh!
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  • From ANON - muziyi on January 24, 2006
    what exactly did harry see? Hope things will get more romantic later.
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  • From ANON - Alison on January 24, 2006
    Poor Harry... No one to love him now. Any volunteers? Draco? Anyone? =o)

    Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Chi on January 19, 2006
    Oh, Harry was so sexy! ^^ He should remain like that, perhaps he could make Draco blush. ^-~
    This story is getting on with it, although I guess there hasn't been any spectacular reveals after the letter.
    And we should be thanking you, for writing this! ^^
    More, as soon as possible!
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