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Reviews for Water

By : kissherdraco
  • From ANON - Katie on December 05, 2006
    You're fucking unbelievable, you know that? I mean... you're incredible. Your writing astounds me. I can't even begin to form the words.

    ""You mean it, Granger," he repeated, "You mean all of it." Because that almost makes you even more beautiful. That belief. That faith. You keep it no matter what. Faith in doing the right thing, in believing that the right thing is out there to do. It makes you beautiful because I can taste those thoughts from you, Granger. It's almost purity. It's half-clean, tainted but real. It's what I'm feeding off. Drinking in. Like water."

    "You've seen Draco Malfoy cry. Well congratu-fucking-lations. I hope it was a good show."

    ""And I'm a pureblood, remember? At least you don't have anything to worry about on that front."
    Her expression cracked slightly.
    Oh don't look so shocked. Did you think I'd forgotten? I was brought up to remember it before anything."

    ""Did anyone ever tell you that sarvasm just doesn't suit you, Malfoy?"
    "Everything suits me, sweetheart."
    "Don't call me sweetheart.""

    "No.
    And that was where her heart stopped.
    That was where Hermione Granger finally realised the truth about herself. That she no longer told it.
    That she was living a lie. Decorating tales and friends and lovers with them. Wasting and spitting on every moral code she had ever set about to uphold."

    I can't even... phenomenal.
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  • From ANON - Olivia on December 05, 2006
    INCREDIBLY SATISFYING YET DEVISTATINGLY NOT.
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  • From ANON - Britt on December 04, 2006
    chapter 18-

    first off, id like to tell you that this is officially the best dramione on aff. I am dead serious.

    second, right now, i think im gunna be sick. that ending killed me. i hope you update soon. or else i'll be completley pissed. i really have a stomach ache right now. that was insanley perfect.

    third, i admire the way not once, NOT ONCE, were any of the characters... um... out of character. It is amazing that you have manage to litterally create the perfect story. you have truly redefined my definition of a good fanfic. (an amazing one, for that matter.)

    also note: I LOVE YOU. obviously not that way, but you get the point. somehow, and i am not being over-dramatic, this story has changed my life.

    yes, i might be insane. ya, just laugh at me, but I'm dead serious.

    LOVE YOU, PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
    -Britt

    blue0_0ink@hotmail.com
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 04, 2006
    Well, I got to about chapter ten or so and had to stop reading because it's all a bit too... emo for me. Very angsty. Although you write angst extremely well! Even though I'm not in love with the story, you are a fabulous writer. I'll bet you make a great poet, because you write like one. Oh, and I love how you have this Mary Poppins bag of insults. Not one of them are the same! LOL Anyways, kudos on your writing!
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  • From ANON - Sara on December 03, 2006
    You are utterly amazing.
    Really.
    You're prolly the best writer on this site and I am in shock and awe.
    Keep updating, I can not wait for the next chapter.
    You made my day.
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  • From ANON - Unspeakable May on December 03, 2006
    oh, how I love this story. "Water" The title is so pure, so perfect for this fic. You write amazing, and the details are superb. I hope if you could update a bit faster, though.
    Anyway, congratulations and keep going. (Sorry for any grammar mistakes, but english is not my first language)
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  • From ANON - Katie on December 02, 2006
    It is so easy to mess up a "my daddy beats me" Draco. Usually, a story with that in it sucks unbelievably. But this. This is different. There are no words for this. It is about the farthest from corny, over done, or cliche as is possible. This is indescribable. This is amazing. This is one of the single best Harry Potter fanfictions... well fanfictions in general... that I have ever read. This is right up there with Afterimage by Gravidy (which if you haven't read you should check out) and God of the Lost which is also by her. This is amazing. I just... god I wish I could find the words. Simply perfect.

    I would try more to tell you how much this got me but I want to read the next chapters.
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  • From ANON - Carino on December 02, 2006
    Okay Sir,

    I've been reading your story for the past two days, and I must say that I think I'm falling in love. Although you're still using the Head dormitory storyline, I love where you went with this story. It's...amazing, to say the least. Not only was everything falling into place, and you gave it just the right amount of drama, but you made sure you didn't fall into all those annoying cliches. The only critique I HAD was that I skipped around a little when you got to be a bit too descriptive and poetic (I'm just a callous bastard, is all). But of course, this is your style, and who am I to bitch? I'm only just one reader. I was happy, however, when you toned it down in the later chapters and I can't wait until you update.

    Keep writing. You're doing great,

    Carino


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  • From ANON - lang on December 02, 2006
    Such an amazing story. I mean it has it all! the perfect balance really! not too dramatic either too raw! just perfect! can't wait for another update! please update soon.
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  • From ANON - SURRIE on December 02, 2006
    Can't wait for chapter 19!
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  • From ANON - Allison on December 01, 2006
    I'm so glad for this story. It's hard to find well written stories, but this is one of the few. You also got me through an incredibly boring day of receptionist temp work. Thanks a bunch.
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  • From ANON - pickletrickchic on December 01, 2006
    another fabulous chapter..how do you do it?? Well keep it up can't wait for the next..happy christmas to you.
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  • From ANON - Know-it-all on November 30, 2006
    I am so happy that you've updated! I absolutely adore this fanfic. This chapter was so heart wrenching! I just wanted Hermione to run into the headmaster's office and explain everything. So not fair... And then maybe Pansy can get run over by a bus... yes that would work I think!
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  • From ANON - Paris on November 30, 2006
    Oh wow i just love this story more and more with every chapter that i read....you keep me on the edge of my seat for most of it aswell. This story is very powerful! I love the detail you use and the depth of the characters you provide, your chapter lengths are fantastic aswell! Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - --- on November 30, 2006
    Oh thank you for updating! This is such a great story and I love it very much.
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