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By : kissherdraco

From ANON - Rosei on November 29, 2006
Absolutely beautiful! Well worth the wait. I'll
gladly wait another 8 months for the next great
installment. We will all still be here.
Thank you.
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From ANON - superscar on November 29, 2006
This is my favorite story ever. You have no idea the joy I had when I saw you updated it.

Draco's inner anguish is so real and perfect, it makes me want to run back and re-read it all over again just to enjoy it again.

I love the perfect pacing of the story, how he only moves a degree at a time and has like 0 control of his emotions. And it is so beautiful that Hermione sees him and wants to save him. I do too.
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From ANON - Lrndng on November 29, 2006
PLEASE let Draco say the words ... PLEASE!!
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From ANON - LiYan on November 29, 2006
Oh Draco, poor messed up Draco. If only Dumbledore knew why Draco did what he did, but I doubt Draco is going to tell him any time soon. I'm curious what Hermione will think about it all, and what will happen to Pansy, who I thought was the one that took the potion, alas she was smart and got someone else to do it knowing Draco would probably beat "Harry" in a pulp. Anyway another fantastic update!!
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From ANON - 2bfoundwanting on November 29, 2006
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! YEs I am so glad you updated. And I dont even know what to say. You know your story is amazing, you know its the reason why somepeople LIVE. I just wanted to say thank you for writing it. AND that ending is unbearably like a cliff hanger and I dont know if ill be able to wait so long for the next chapter! I need more! But I will wait, because your story is so amazing it is worth it.
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From ANON - me on November 29, 2006
OMG you are soooooooooooo goooood. i can begin to tell you how good of a suspence your keeping me(us)in. thanks so much for the update and can't wait for more.lots of love
4rm a fan
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From ANON - Fiona on November 29, 2006
God, Harry never seems to get a break does he? =(
I hate the way Harry has to suffer through this as well. Extremely unfair of Hermione/Draco to do this to him.
Sorry, but the way I read this chapter gave me a complete sense of sympathy to Harry, and none to Draco/Hermione. In fact, I really hated them both in this chapter.. I realize all the lies, and cover-ups, it's all too cruel. At first I thought it was necessary for Hermione to hide it all, but now I finally see she's just being a stupid immature girl. =/ Heh... glad to see an update though.. and still looking forward to see where things will go from here I suppose.
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From ANON - Raamiah on November 25, 2006
oh wow...i dont think i have ever read a fanfic that was written so well before. there is so much emotion and tension that it's over-whelming, but then at the end, it's not. and its like that for every chapter. i love it! i stayed up all night trying to finish it. lol...i ended up drifting to sleep, and finishing it in the morning.

please update soon!
~Raamiah
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From ANON - anononon on November 23, 2006
this would be such a great fic if it wasnt so f-ing repetative and used the f word every other sentence. there's so much potential but the conversations are so slow and repetative. and they must say the f-word in every other sentence. there's just so much potential... gee. do you get my point? at first it was absolutely enthralling with all the depth of emotions but they have become completely one-sided and every character is angry all the time that the only way they can express themselves is with the f-word apparently. if you plan to even finish the story (it hasnt been updated in forever) plan the whole rest of the thing out that way the moment doesnt carry away the content. the sheer redundency of the conversation is asinine and really detracts from the plot which is starting to crumble. take a step back, look at it, and finish it because its so good and well written by someone who has more than a 9th grade grasp of the english language for once! its exciting and suspenseful and interesting except for the repetative and slow quality of every conversation. go back and read JKR and you'll see that she doesnt often waste an entire page of print on monosyllabic conversation. and time never seems to pass. by chapter 17 they've barely gotten to x-mas. just write out the main happenings for the rest of the story and then fill in the blanks around it so you can complete this. hardly anyone completes anything and it would be so nice to see this great fic finished. continue but improve yourself also. thats what reviews are for right? so you know how and what and where to improve. hardly anyone on this thing uses constructive criticism and i hope i havent been too harsh and hurt your feelings. please keep writing but dont get stuck in a rut or let the moment take off with the story. good luck.
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From ANON - looneyp on November 19, 2006
That is one great storie your writting. please bring up to next chapter i'm dying to know what happens next!!!!!i just hope it's a happy emding for them both, you seem to put them through a lot of trouble.haha ok write write write!!!!!! Thank you
from a fan
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From ANON - anna on October 27, 2006
great story
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From ANON - Ally on October 26, 2006
I am so in love with this story but I hate it as well. 16 chapters of the same thing 16! It is a bit extreme. I am not one to throw Hermione and Draco together immediatly..no no but their relationship is so fricken twisted and now you are going to throw in the complication of Draco being blamed for Hermione being beat up. It is just too much. Seriously you need to give them a respite. Not for one second do I believe Hermione would let him into her bed with the things she has been thinking to him. It is just too unbelievable, Draco has gone insane and Harry has just gone over the edge with the violence. It is not a believable premise, plot and you are drawing it out far too long.

That said, I still cannot get enough. The bathroom scene where Draco finally lost it was POWERFUL. It had me close to tears and I could believe that as their first times. Things had come to a head and BAM...and well i never expected things to be easy between them but GOD you are a sadist. lol

Like I said I have a ton of problems with this fic but it is like a drug...addictive. You are an amazing writer and your style is breathtaking. I do hope you do not get the wrong impression from my review. I just felt being anything less than honest would be a discredit to this work. The fact that you elicit such a strong response from me proves the worth of this fic.

Love, Ally
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From ANON - Anon on October 14, 2006
Brilliant! Thank you.
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From ANON - Anon on October 12, 2006
an update is on the horizon, just give her a bit more time (check her lj)
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From ANON - TiffANY formally known as 'T' or 't' on October 01, 2006
Argh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You are killing me!

I have been waiting months for more chapters to this story and I decided to seek it out again only to find that you have not UPDATED after all this time!

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE!

You need to do more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I love this story sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much and I need to read more of it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AGAIN
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AND SOON!

Love TiffANY

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