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Reviews for Water

By : kissherdraco
  • From ANON - Laura on July 13, 2006
    Ok i just wanted u to know, i read the reviews and I get it now......its someone else polyjuced.... ha ha silly little old me. i feel so silly...ha ha. plz update asap.
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  • From ANON - laura on July 13, 2006
    ok really good chap, but i don't really understand.... did draco find them? was the last paragraph after or before harry tried to attack hermione? ohhh maybe im just a dumbass? please update soon i really need answers 2 the questions!!!! your story is one of my favs by the way!!!!
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  • From ANON - Malinda on July 13, 2006
    Let me start off by saying that I am a huge fan of your story. I found it about 3 months ago and have been not-so-patiently awaiting an update; so you can imagine my utter excitement to have seen that chapters 16 & 17 were up last night. But, what's the deal with chapter 16? A bit fluffy and VERY random. I was a bit lost, especially because it was about a 1/4 of the usual length and seemed to have come at me from nowhere; weird. It just felt awkward to me. Chapter 17 was better, but I don't feel that ineer struggle/turmoil/angst that made me love your story to begin with. I guess at some point it does have to progress past the whole"I fucking hate you so much that I can't live without you" stage, but I love that stage! It is nice to see Draco at least coming to terms with his feelings for Hermione. Hopefully, she too will realize her own feelings. Ha Ha, that's how I know you are a great writer! I am usually soooooo pro Harry/Hermione, but your story has me rooting for Hermione/Draco! AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH! I was almost disgusted with myself at the end of chapter 17, when 'Harry" was coming on to Hermione. I was thinking "she's Draco's, leave her alone Potter!" What is wrong with me? You are just too damn good. Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter. I do hope it will have more of the inner monologue and self-consuming battles of will that I felt were so abundant in the first 15 chapters, but were definitely missed by me in 16/17. I'll leave with a few lines from one of my fav. Coldplay songs...

    LIGHTS WILL GUIDE YOU HOME
    AND IGNITE YOUR BONES
    AND I WILL TRY TO FIX YOU...
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  • From ANON - Courtney on July 13, 2006
    this just keeps getting better and better. update when you can! love your story and i hope you can write more Hermione/Draco whenever inspiration comes to you! You're fantastic! :)
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  • From ANON - behindgreeneyes on July 13, 2006
    this fic is incredible - it's so well written and the way you describe the feelings of the characters is so clever and makes the reader empathise with all of the characters' feelings. i was completely immersed in this story! update soon
    behindgreeneyes
    xx
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  • From ANON - T on July 13, 2006
    OH MY GOSHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    HOW COULD YOU STOP THERE!!!!!!!!!!!!

    I DON'T BELIEVE YOU, YOU ARE SOOOOOOOOOOO UNBELIEVABLE!!!!!!!!!!!

    I have to find out happens!!

    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write the rest and QUICKLY!

    LOVE this story by the way and can't wait until you do more.

    I will be checking ALOT!

    KEEP UP THE AMAZING WORK!

    LOVE T!
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  • From ANON - Rinova on July 13, 2006
    wow, this is the first story I ever reviewed on aff. Wow, well... I just noticed teh review button. lol.. BUT ANYWAY, I LOVE THIS STORY> I've been checking up on it every now and then. I almost died when i looked in my favorites to see if you updated Water2.. and it wasn't there. Something in me told me to type the fic in in Search.. and whoo, I found it. With two extra chapters. (I was so happy.)

    WEll, NOW i"M DYING... YOU GOTTA UPDATE!!! SOON AND FAST!!!

    Cuz, I'm loving it. And I love how they stay in character... I mean... they don't just go... from hate to love... but... slowly move into the love thing. ya know? It's more... real?

    MAN, I LOVE THIS FIC>..
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  • From ANON - FIONA on July 12, 2006
    so it's pansy right, she is harry at the end with hermione? i think it is, i wonder how this will play out. this is great please update soon... also i love the fact that draco is realizing what is happening to him, i am glad to see them become a bit softer it's time for that. this is by far the best chapter so far!
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  • From ANON - --- on July 12, 2006
    NOOOO!! Such a captivating chapter..but too captivating an ending!!! You MUST continue!! SOON!! >.
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  • From ANON - darian on July 12, 2006
    omg this is getting more and more interesting!
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  • From ANON - Ava on July 12, 2006
    Talk about a cliffy! Yipes. Every time I read a new chapter of this story, I just feel awed by your talent, and the beauty of this story. I hope there's more soon, but either way I'll be waiting anxiously.
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  • From ANON - Nicole on July 12, 2006
    OMG! THAT WAS A CLIFFY. PLEASE OH PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I AM DYING TO FIGURE OUT WHO IT IS. PLEASE UPDATE! THANKS.
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  • From ANON - ocardsienim on July 12, 2006
    i adore .....adore adore. this writing. you are amazing and wonderful. raw emotions are so spectacular. the cliff was a little sadding. but just makes one anxious for the next. thank you
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  • From ANON - kazfeist on July 12, 2006
    Yup, all's real tense. Great couple of chapters, and glad to see you're back writing it....are you going to put it up at Contraveritas, as well? I hope so. It's easier to find it there. Great Job!
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  • From ANON - zara on July 12, 2006
    I don't know what your ambitions in life are, but as a writer you would have great future....Please understand that my English is not too well, so excuse my mistakes...Your writing is brisk and clear and soooo strong and totaly consuming. You have amzing power of gluing people to their seats and...um...screens. I know you get it all the time, but I said it anyway. I realy love your story....and there is only one more fic that can be compared to it...in it's graetness ( Pansy's Volcano) even though it is a bit lighter and, well, kind of different. Anyway...please don't make me wait this long for the next chapter....and I think they had enough of tearing one another apart....so, go easy on them both ^___^ zara
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