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Reviews for Water

By : kissherdraco
  • From ANON - Karen on February 07, 2006
    Personally, I like the way you right. The whole stream of consciousness thing works well. I don't find it hard to follow at all and actually prefer it to some of the more structured stories I've read. Loving it so far and I think you're right...this does seem far more plausible of a relationship
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  • From ANON - Karen on February 06, 2006
    WOW! This chapter was unbelievable! This fiction is vastly climbing to the top of my favorite, right now it's right behind Pany's Volcano and Adamo Fidelites. What the hell, you can bump Adamo since she hasn't updated in over a year. Promise you won't take a break like that! Well, I am so pleased with the way you brought about their first time. I'm so sick of reading fic's that have Draco turning into some gushing romantic, however, I would like to see him become a bit softer, if only in the sense that he works through his demons somewhat. I hope this story ends with them together, however that may come about but as I said in my other review, I have no idea where you are going with this but I'm along for the ride. Please don't make us wait too long...no preasure. LOL
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  • From ANON - Janelle on February 05, 2006
    You know this is fantastic.
    Perfect.
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  • From ANON - superscar on February 04, 2006
    No, it was perfect. Everything it should have been and so incredibly beautiful in the rawness of it.

    I loved it, can't wait to see more.
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  • From ANON - Shimmeree on February 02, 2006
    I have only one thing to say:

    NEW CHAPTER NOW!!!!


    I am loving this story. :D
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  • From ANON - Malena on February 02, 2006
    I don't know if this is real angst or just Draco's psycopath mind, 'cause, really, he's a bit scary in the latest chapters. I couldn't concentrate very well in this "first time" ... I was worrying too much of Hermione! I don't think a normal person could take that beating and a first time all in a anight but...anyways, the fic looks very interesting!
    (I was wondering how a beating like that could happen in the school with no one noticing it.... )
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 02, 2006
    about harry's character.... very different from what I usually see authors choose to do in that you seem to have swapped the typical ron and harry personaiities. not a bad thing by far and it mixes it up some. that said, harry seems pretty far from being emotionally stable. something about everyone he cares for leaving him makes him that much more not only protecting but also demanding of hermione. at some point he needs to be able to look at the situation rationally and realize that hermione would only abandon him if he smothered her to the point where she had no other choice. I'm also wondering if perhaps he's mistaking his possive nature for romantic feelings for her. He doesn't strike me as being particularly attracted to her and yet he seems desperate to keep anyone else from taking his place in hermione's life, which of course no one could ever do. I'm just curios what it will take for him to realize all this or if he even ever will. great chapter and I could gush about it for pages but you wanted harry specific responses so there you go.
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  • From ANON - dracosbitch on February 02, 2006
    Fantastic story so far, raw and emotional.
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  • From ANON - tashi on February 02, 2006
    That was AMAZING I am in love definitely so far. The build up to chapter 12 was KILLING ME!
    I understand how college can take time from writing, I write H/Dr stories too on FF.NET and I know how it can get frustrating to write and keep up in school, work, and social life at the same time, so as one author to another, take your time but hurry too lol we all cannot wait for Chapter 13!!
    Please email me if you can on your next update!
    Thank you a lot!
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  • From ANON - Beki on January 31, 2006
    SQUEE!!! Aw, can't wait til the next chapter, but I know all too well about taking time over updates so take your time with it so its the fab quality of the rest of them! 'Water' is just ace with the ups and down of the characters and emotion. Keep it up!
    Lov Beki x x x
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  • From ANON - Darian on January 29, 2006
    I HAVE to say it! FUCKING BRILLIANT !!! Update before I fall apart!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 29, 2006
    thank you for writing this. i don't know how else to put it.
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  • From ANON - joey on January 29, 2006
    OMMGG! that was wonderfull!:D
    really,fully..
    I'm so addicted to it.. All this characteristic analysis are very very thrilling and pure understanable, PERFECT:D
    their 'first time' so cool also;) Some parts were harsh but also
    so tender,soft and melting. When Draco started to cry, somewhere in my heart aching painfully..
    at the end of the episode you said;

    'This isn
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  • From ANON - Leree on January 29, 2006
    Let down? No fucking way in hell! That was probably the best Hermione/Draco first time I have ever read. It was so sweet! It was what I had expected and so much more. Great job. I'll be checking up often to see if you have updated!

    ~Katie :)
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  • From ANON - Omega on January 28, 2006
    Okay, needless to say, this is-

    1) my favorite chapter of any story I've ever read
    2) the best violent love scene ever
    3) um, just plain awesome...!

    No, I don't really like the heated loss-of-virginity scenes that many authors write about. This seems so much better. Seriously. Like, it's real passion. Maybe I'm a closet masochist or something, but the pain was necessary in between all of the emotional turgor happening.

    You're such a descriptive writer, and I love it!
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