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By : kissherdraco

From ANON - 0o0itzNiteLite on January 27, 2006
WOW... DAT WUZZZ A GREATT LONGG CHAPPIEEE... I REALLLYYY LOVEE ITT...
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From ANON - Anon on January 27, 2006
*sobbing* they have no one but each other, not really. beautiful.
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From ANON - Stacy on January 27, 2006
Wow! That chapter was just so fantastic! After reding one of them, I always think, man, that chapter was awesome everytime. But, seriously. I thought their first time was brilliant. Kind of erotic, but thats what made it all the better!

While reading this I was really dejected, beacause I thought it mwas the end of the story. Thank gosh it's not!
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From ANON - anon on January 27, 2006
.......breathe out.........i dont think i was breathing during ch12 ....holy shit........thats the best one yet......they just get better.......not just cuz they finally get together.......but everything was just great.....everything everyone....even pansy....so perfect.....dam woman.........i thot the situation was wonderfully done......they can do it better (without so much pain for herm later) but this first time (cuz therell be more rite? haha) was bloody brilliant.....BRILLIANT!
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From ANON - mistress meo on January 27, 2006
Deep breaths. Deep, deep breaths. I had to read it again. The ending. So powerful. So brilliantly written. So unbelievably passionate, hot. White hot. You're killing me slowly with every word you write. I don't even have words to say how wonderful this chapter is. I think I may need to completely re-read this story while you are on your break and honestly try and figure out which is your best chapter. Right now, I think this one is BY FAR your best and not just because this was the chapter where they finally did it. I really do wish my writing could even come close to what you put in this last chapter. The descriptives were amazing. I know you say you like my writing and believe me, I DO appreciate it. But my God, woman. Brilliant. My heart was clenching in its chest when Draco kept saying he was sorry and sobbing and totally losing it. Killing me. God, I love it. I fucking love it. I think I need a shower and then I think I need to read it again.

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From ANON - Anon on January 27, 2006
awesome! what a great transition chapter, now you can take this in any direction you want! i can't wait to see were it goes from here! good job on the first time it was perfect for this story! i love your take on the characters it's intense, i love it!
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From ANON - Anon on January 27, 2006
this is honestly one of the best D/Hr fics ive ever read. seriously. i love the way you write and i love the way you incorprate a perfect balance of angst and need. there were times when you get so involved in the story, you want to be part of it. please please please dont stop writing this and please update soon. ill be checking regularly for updates!
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From ANON - Philomel aka moonystone on January 27, 2006
Wow. This was intense.
I found myself getting wet eyes when Draco sat sobbing in the bathroom. All this pain and need and duties. Your way of describing it is moving and beautiful. (Though I stumble over your punctuation every now and then) I must say, I even understood Pansy - not that it makes her behaviour forgivable.
The sex was hot. Not really romantic, but that would have been totally out of place in this fic. I found it perfect, their raw need and feeling of belonging.

Get done what has to get done and then please write the next chapter!
I'll check your LJ
Thanks for posting, moonystone
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From ANON - Amelia on January 27, 2006
That chapter was AMAZING! Truly a fantastic piece of writing! The pain and the anguish and the bone-deep desperation was so...i can't even describe it, it was that good. I think it was the perfect first time for Draco and Hermione, only when they are both at their lowest would they allow themselves to let go and just be. I love this fic, like many have said i think it may just be the best i've ever read! I can understand why you need a break but please don't make it too long, i can't wait to see where you take WATER from here.
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From ANON - D on January 27, 2006
Fantastic, simply fantastic. I thought the sex scene was perfect for their situation, overwhelming emotions and that basic need for human comfort. Well done!!
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From ANON - Phebes on January 26, 2006
One of the best chapters I've read so far in 'Water'!! You made my day with this update,
i just came home from hard exams... so this story really helps me feel happier.
Wow wow wow wow! The emotions are displayed amazingly! Hehe, Draco and Hermione's first time! =D
I'm sure you've already heard possibly every complement there ever is...
but just so you know,... you're a spectacular writer! Well, I'm just going to re-read the chapter again now. ^^
And yeah, what's going on in your life comes first, so take your time writing. :)
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From ANON - Anon on January 26, 2006
AMAZING.
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From lckarlsson on January 26, 2006
I guess I took too long writing that and I got logged out or something lol! I've never posted a review as Anon before... not my style... >.
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From ANON - Anon on January 26, 2006
Once again, you've left me speechless! This was so insanely beautiful and intense! I'm sure you haven't let anyone's expectations down! The smut was just as amazing as the rest of this story is... no need to worry about that at all, you're doing great!

For a moment there I was just as worried as Draco when she wouldn't let him in... I kept thinking about what they had done to her... had they done more than just beat her up...? And thankfully they hadn't.

How tragic it is that Draco thinks of himself as becoming more like his father by hitting Pansy. I have to congratulate you on how well you describe his inner battle! He can't tell the difference between wife battering and - plain - hitting someone who has been a HUGE fucking arse and definitely deserves it (girl or not)... and this shows us just how neurotic he truly is; how much damage his father has done to his mind... to Draco everything seems to be black and white... there is no middle course, and this inner battle between his ideals and his rage is probably what pushes him so far that he's - for a very short moment - intending to actually truly kill her.

It's so hard for him to come to terms with the whole Pureblood/Mudblood dilemma, because if he choses to disregard his father's beliefs, then EVERYTHING that used to matter to him will turn out to be WRONG... LIES... and there will be NOTHING left but the meaningless emptiness that he is so clearly feeling in this chapter.

Again, there is no middle course... and he cannot handle acknowlegding that he's at the moment wavering somewhere between his old beliefs and the terrible nothingness that seems to be the only alternative - this is of course only because he has absolutely NO idea about what the alternatives there might be, because he's been so thoroughly brainwashed by his father.

Perhaps because of his fragile state of mind, he thinks that admitting that he just doesn't know what to think anymore would push him those last few inches over the brink and into insanity. The irony is that admitting this would probably do the exact opposite to him... bring some sort of mild relief... perhaps that is what happens there on the bathroom floor, when Hermione comes to him... because what he needs to realize is that there is more to life than he thinks there is... there is more than what he has been told and taught... there are things more important and more rewarding.

I really liked the part where he wonders if Lucius has actually somehow managed to store parts of himself inside of Draco's mind by the use of dark magic... this describes very - heartbreakingly - well how deep Lucius' influence on him runs, how REAL it is to Draco... also, I liked the fact that they were both bruised and battered and not caring about it during their first time - this is somehow a physical reflection of how much pain this thing has truly caused both of them, and how much both of them sacrifice by being together.

Have your break! You deserve it! I hope you get back on top of everything in real life, and then I'll be looking forward to your next chapter... thanks for not making this one such a cliffhanger :o)

Love Leonora.
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From ANON - complexemotion on January 26, 2006
It is ridiculous how much I love this story. It's so beautifully painful. I just wish that they could have one moment of relief where they can see that it's not all bad. But I guess that would go against your plan. haha I can see how this story can be draining. So take your break and rest but come back soon! I actually look for this story. Excellent job.
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