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By : kissherdraco
  • From ANON - Anon on January 26, 2006
    brilliant.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 26, 2006
    about all the language: several people have said that because this is aff.net, language is expected. and it is inside the rules. but my mom used to say, "just because you can does not mean you should." lots of language can tarnish the story and distract attention from your wonderful storyline and plot. that doesn't mean we don't expect draco to swear at all, because teen guys DO swear--it's reality--but it's also pretty certain that someone like hermione wouldn't swear that much, and draco doesn't need to swear as much as he does. the f-word is in every paragraph at least once! i love your story.
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  • From ANON - alex on January 26, 2006
    This was fucking brilliant. Absolutely fantastic- I don't think that Draco and Hermione's first time in this story should have turned out any other way. it was hot, it was full of pain, and it was amazing. Thank you for the chapter :)
    Update soon ;)
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 26, 2006
    I write this with tears rolling down my cheeks. How do you do it? How can you tie lust, love, hate, passion, and angst so inextricably together? This was the farthest thing from a letdown; it was perfect. I sobbed. If Rowling ever read this, she would end the books D/Hr. You've captured Draco's angst, his need to punish himself, and his deep desire not to become like his father, and struggling fiercely when he realizes he's mirroring Lucius. You've captured Hermione's confused, but desperate passion for Draco; and their first time was perfect for them. Beyond perfect. Both lying in a bathroom, wounded, bloodied, and bruised? They're both wounded, Draco very much so internally, and Hermione externally, and if it weren't for Hermione Draco would probably kill himself. Breathtakingly perfect. I say this without regret or hesitation: yours is the best D/Hr fic on the internet.
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  • From ANON - Courtney on January 26, 2006
    hey girl,

    i just wanted to send you a review, which i normally dont do. im lazy i guess. but i just wanted to tell you that you have THE best story ever. i mean that. i have read a lot of Hr/Dr stories, and yours is, by far the best one. please update when you have found your inspiration! i have a couple online as well, and you'd think we me being in college they would be written better, but yours blows mine COMPLETELY out of the water. (Pun intended) hehe. anyway, update when you can.


    One of your biggest fans!

    Courtney
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  • From ANON - courtney on January 26, 2006
    Not a let down at all, it was perfect for this story, it works so well. I'm so glad you arn't taking a brake after chapter 11, i would have tracked you down and made you keep writing:P jj. Hope you enjoy your brake, hope it helps you continue to write so well, adoringly, courtney
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  • From ANON - kazfeist on January 26, 2006
    Wonderful job, again! Good luck on catching up with work, and let me know when you update! Cheers!
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  • From ANON - oetbmalfoysmom on January 26, 2006
    I understand how a story can consume you. The amount of detail that you put into each chapter is amazing. You take great care in describing each characters thoughts and feelings. Your efforts are greatly appreciated. Hopefully, you can step away for a little while and come back stronger for it. Until then, I will patiently await your return. Thanks for what you have shared thus far.
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  • From ANON - di on January 26, 2006
    WOW!! this is the first time I read this story . I just love the way you put all your heart in soul in to this story. after reading Chap. 12 i in shock in how i can actully feel their pain. You are one of the gifted writers i know and just want to appluad you for such a great story.
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  • From ANON - ShortieGirl on January 26, 2006
    That was amazing! My eyes misted over. I totally understand how hard it is to get an update up. We are at the mercy of life.
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  • From ANON - xiaojiang on January 26, 2006
    wow....how should i say this...it was "so bloody brilliant" i stay up all night reading this and i have class tomorrow. i love every moment of it. i swear i could hear my own beating heart going faster and faster by the min. such a great chapter!
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  • From ANON - TheAngelOfSilence on January 26, 2006
    YEEEEEEEEESSSSSSS!!!!

    Love!Not like...love!!!


    Nice one!Great chapter.
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  • From ANON - Mooncroww on January 26, 2006
    Yeah. It was beautiful. I loved it. And the first time thing... yeah... mine was wonderful and at the same time... eurgh. I think you did very well with it. Truth in fanfiction. Keep it up.


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  • From Chavela25 on January 26, 2006
    That was so beautiful. It was so heart wrenching. It never stops, how amazed I get with each new chapter that you can make it even more devistating than the last. To the point where I feel crazy that I have to wait for the next chapter. The whole thing was so like violently tender. I really can never get over how beautiful this really is. One of the best, NO! The absolute best story I have ever read. It ust stops your heart. At least for me when I read it, my chest hurts. I love this story so much and everytime I see it, it makes me happy and and breaks my heart at the same time.
    I love it so much. And whatever you muse that drives you, thanks. I love it. Keep up the awesome work and, really, thank you for creating this in your mind to give to us to enjoy. I love it. And I can't wait for the next chapter. I love it.
    PEACE Isa
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  • From ANON - margaret on January 26, 2006
    that was intensely beautiful. i was crying, it was so sad. though i imagine chapter 13 will be a bit of a reality nightmare.
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