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Reviews for Water

By : kissherdraco
  • From xxtrianaxx on January 25, 2006
    OMG...you trully are somethin'...
    I loved this chapter, I think it was just perfect.
    Pain was going to be a part of their first time, not just because of Hermione,
    but because of who they are, together...
    Those who never should've met,
    who never should've seen,
    who never should've touched.
    It was just perfect.

    I don't know what else to say.
    I couldn't stop reading it...you write just so.. right
    everything fits, every little word next to the other...every single detail.
    Every word has it's purpose, every single word makes you feel something they're feeling
    something you're feeling as you write, something we're feeling as we read.
    'Cause that's one of your best qualities as a writer...
    you really make us FEEL

    not like we're inside the story,
    but like the story is inside us,
    within us...

    like it's our story,
    our life

    and we have to do something about it
    we have to feel it,
    think about it,
    live it.

    Again, sorry for the long update...
    But I just... I dunno, I really love the way you write.
    It reminds me a little of the way I like and try to write...
    (but you're so much better than me)

    Take all the time you need
    we all understand you have responsabilities...
    a life to get back to, beyond this words,
    this walls...

    I shall return to that life soon.
    I'm starting college on March, mi first year.
    It's going to be long...
    it's going to be hell...

    So take care

    bye!


    Please let me know again by mail when you update again =)
    'Cause I really can't check your lj everyday...
    and checking it, and finding no updates
    would be the death of me.

    triana_titi@yahoo.es
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  • From ANON - Liason on January 25, 2006
    This story is fucking incredible. And this Draco Malfoy is exactly the type of character I imagine him to REALLY be. How you have unrooted his true persona and unmasked his past is fucking brilliant. I'm so in awe, so in love with this story that it's heart-wrenching to even think about it ever ending.


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  • From ANON - LiYan (bluebear_74) on January 25, 2006
    Magnificent chapter! This would have to be one of my favourite chapters so far because it
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  • From ANON - Juvi on January 25, 2006
    What an overwhelmingly emotional chapter. My eyes started to water when you described Draco crying. And don't you worry! That Draco/Hermoine scene was perfect and unbelievably so. I enjoyed reading it because of the content and found that what each character felt was more important.

    And it left a very strong impression on me.

    You are an amazing writer. And don't ever forget that.
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  • From ANON - bookworm on January 25, 2006
    After all those days of agonized waiting i can happily say that the ending was incredible, there was so much emotion going on i was completly hooked on every word. i sincerely hope you don't lose inspiration for this story because i love your writing, you have definetely become my favorite D/HG author, congratz! lol :)
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  • From ANON - Bree on January 25, 2006
    Okay I can forgive you in any late delays b/c you gave us THAT... That chapter (12) was amazing. The fact that they had sex where they did and when they did was so much better than any hot bed scenes... It truly shows that they NEED each other... Wow.. It's so good. I hope that Hermoine is able to love Draco and vice versa. They need each other and I hope that they realize that - more than just sex more than just now. I LOVE THIS STORY!!!
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  • From TragicFantasy on January 25, 2006
    That was NOT a let down at ALL. That was by far my favorite chapter in the whole story. In-fucking-credible.
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  • From ANON - georgina on January 25, 2006
    That was the best written chapter I've ever read, no joke, it was amazing. The words and the characters were so perfect and accurate. It was fucking amazing and you need to know that. I loved it. Loved.

    Thanks, for writting this,

    geo
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  • From ANON - jadziadaxx on January 25, 2006
    god I love this story, it's like water, I so fucking need it, I could drown in it ever moment of life. Update when ever you can! I love it!
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  • From ANON - FreakWave on January 25, 2006
    Oh wow. Words fail me... you must be absolutely drained after writing all of this... I mean, I feel drained after reading it, what more is needed to get into it and write this stuff... wow again. I understand your need for a break. Intense, extremely intense...
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  • From ANON - miko on January 25, 2006
    I enjoyed this chapter.... but I thought that her giving her virginity to hm in such a way was sort of scary...after all he had gone there to heal her, not to bash her up evenmore, even if it was not like Pansy had. I like thisstory a lot, but I wish their first time had bee a bit more romantic and seductive.
    Still nonethe less, she did save what was left of his sould and humanity.
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  • From ANON - b-chan on January 25, 2006
    amazing chapter. really... wow. and take a break if it's what you need, you sure deserve it! i'll still be here.
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  • From ANON - givemeurcash on January 25, 2006
    update soon!!
    your doing great!
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  • From ANON - Brynner on January 25, 2006
    What a great story...I hold my breath while I read each chapter. Just my opinion...but I personally really don't mind the swearing, it adds to the angst of the story. Keep up the good work! :D
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  • From ANON - rangerbabe on January 24, 2006
    Keep the chapters coming! Finish please!
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