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By : kissherdraco
  • From ANON - ShortieGirl on January 24, 2006
    Please Update this cliffy is going to kill me!
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  • From ANON - ShortieGirl on January 24, 2006
    Okay it was touch and go for a while there but you have me now. I see a spark of humanity in him.
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  • From ANON - ShortieGirl on January 24, 2006
    Okay it was touch and go for a while there but you have me now. I see a spark of humanity in him.
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  • From ANON - lestat on January 24, 2006
    You've gotta finish this story, please, please, pleazzzzzzzzzzzzeeeeeeeeee!!!!
    I'm almost desperate. Who am I kidding...... Desperate!!
    Absolutely fucking brilliant.
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  • From ANON - Naomi on January 23, 2006
    Very, very good so far. I'm liking the tension and the way that Draco and HErmione don't magically love each other instantly. I also liked the way Draco stopped during their first...I suppose you could say, encounter? As a suggestion, I think that the time they kiss "for real" it should be Hermione that initiates it. After all, the other times has always been Draco very much forcing her and it would be a nice touch for a real kiss to be initiated by Hermione. Anyway, I'm really liking where you're going with this - and I am by no means easily pleased! Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Kayla on January 23, 2006
    "I read the whole thing and it's a really good story -- you can obviously WRITE, but man the cussing is just really out of character and you just way overdo it. Even IF Draco and Pansy cussed a lot, I don't see why Hermione would, too. And IF she did, she probably wouldn't cuss often because educated people like Hermione would have a broader command of her language and the vocabulary to choose more appropriate words with which to express herself. At one point she even says to Draco, "Is [fuck] all you ever say?" I was asking the same thing! I analyzed the 11 chapters and found this breakdown of words and how many times you used them:

    Fuck 555
    Shit 26
    Bitch 63
    Whore 22
    Slag 21
    Damn 15
    mudblood 61
    twat 11

    You actually use the word "fuck" five hundred and fifty-five times! That's got to break some kind of record somewhere. It is really becoming almost comical because no matter what happens, we know that everyone's going to react by saying "fuck" a lot. If you changed some of the language, the story'd be very very cool.."

    That is the most ridiculous thing I have ever read. As other people have said, if this Mena girl actually spent her time counting how many times you've used some type of profanity in the story, she musn't have been concentrating on the beautiful story itself. Isn't this site called ADULT Fan Fiction, and isn't this story rated NC-17?? Obviously there's going to be obscenities, it's unavoidable with all the emotions running high. And the whole Hermione-shouldn't-swear thing is just stupid. Ugh.. this really makes me mad.

    Well, I personally don't think you should have gone back and changed it for one person. If they can't handle it, then perhaps they shouldn't be on this site at all. I'm impressed at your determination to please your fans, but maybe you should slow down a bit xP.

    Anyway. I love your story. Aside from Indago, by LdDurham, it's the best fic I've ever read. It's beautifully written, and it's such a heartwrenching story.. I'm obsessed =D I also love how your chapters are so loooong
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  • From ANON - Kayla on January 23, 2006
    Wow. Just incredibly wow.
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  • From ANON - Rosei on January 22, 2006
    I have read and re-read your story many times. This is a testament to your talents!
    Thank you for being alive and a writer! Now! Fingers back to the keyboard because now, and I'm not sure when this happened, but your story has become like water to me.
    Love, Rosei
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  • From ANON - passion on January 22, 2006
    You are Bloody Genius!!! This fic is absolutely Brilliant!! This is the BEST Draco/Hermione fic i have read so far!!
    Great story! keep it up! Your story is getting even more interesting as chapters go by. I can't wait to know what happens next. Hope you post a new chapter soon!!

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  • From ANON - Lady St. Vire on January 22, 2006
    I wanted to add to my previous review of ch. 11, because I forgot to mention a few things, first off, aside from this sentence, I won
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  • From ANON - a person on January 21, 2006
    i love this story and i hope u update soon!!
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  • From ANON - Triana on January 21, 2006
    Oh, I forgot a few things...

    First, sorry for any spelling or grammar mistakes...
    I'm from Chile, and my birth language is of course, spanish.
    Although I feel pretty confident writting in english,
    I love it =P

    And second...Mmmmm... I can't remember, so that's it xD

    bye
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  • From ANON - Triana on January 21, 2006
    I've been up all night reading your story...
    It's amazing, just blody amazing.

    The way you write makes me feel,
    deep within me, all the stuff they're going through...
    al the hatred, passion, etc...
    I felt it all.

    You've left me aaalmost speechless,
    'cause I really wanted to review your story.

    I read that some people told you that the way you wrote was confising...
    well, I think it's just fucking perfect. It gives the story a whole new level of... credibility,
    reality...and, I don't know, it just get's to you so much more this way.
    I trully loved your story.

    I'm actually a H/H fan, yeah, shocker...
    but yesterday I started reading a D/H fic,
    and after one... I couldn't stop.
    I mean, I always thought that the whole hate/love thing could work,
    it works in almost every pairing... but actually reading a D/H,
    it's just amazing... and this fic is incredible!
    I read a few, and they were cute and all,
    some very good. But not nearly as good as this fic.
    The way their feelings are evolving it's just perfect...
    simply and fucking perfect...



    This is one of my longest review ever xD
    I'm sorry if you got bored reading lol
    Anyway... please update asap,
    I really can't wait...

    I'm going away for a while...
    so, if you could pleeeease, pretty please
    send me an email when you update...
    it'd really make me happy,
    you don't know how much.

    take care
    happy writting xD

    bye
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  • From ANON - superscar on January 20, 2006
    This is an outstanding story - one of the most poignant and realistic stories I've read as far as the way they relate to each other.

    I find it absolutely soulwrenching and I love that! Of course I want to beat him with a floor lamp for being such a racist moron, but it wouldn't be interesting otherwise, so yay you! And continue, I can't wait to read more. I hope it is in like four minutes.

    This is pure greatness.
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  • From ANON - Bluemidget on January 20, 2006
    I love this story. The whole 'I hate you but I can't resist you' thing is my favourite kind of Hermione/Draco tale. I am eagerly awaiting their next bout of denial. Checking on you every day!
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