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By : kissherdraco
  • From ANON - cat on January 20, 2006
    What an amazing fic!!! Fuckin' awesome! Hermione has to shag Draco soon or ill go mad!!! You gonna be updating soon becuase i'm desperate to find out what happens next! Cat xxx
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  • From ANON - Bree on January 20, 2006
    They made you get rid of all the f words?? WHY??? Why did they make you waste your time re-writing something that was perfect to begin with when you could've been spending that time writing the new chapter???? I think the fuck words were totally appropriate!
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  • From ANON - Vixen on January 20, 2006
    :O
    **gasps** as if u left it like dat?! I need to no wat happens lol. 4 all ur reader's sakes plz write more quickly! Ur wrk is Fab!
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  • From Jessabel25 on January 20, 2006
    After reading some of your reviews, I felt I needed to post an additional comment. I don't know you or your motivation for writing this story, but it is your story, therefore it's yours to do what you want with it. There is a lot of profanity, but I don't feel that it detracts from the story you're trying to tell. Also, it is clearly marked with an NC-17 rating, so adult subject matter (including profanity) was something I expected to see. Though I'm not a professional or published author, editor, or publisher, I find that if there's a good, strong story with well developed characters and an exciting plot, I concentrate on that rather than tallying up the amount of expletives I see. Besides, I'm rather desensitized to it. One of my favorite contemporary authors, Stephen King, uses a great deal of profanity, and it hasn't seemed to hurt his career, or his storytelling abilities one little bit. Good luck on your next chapter, I'll be looking for an update!
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  • From Jessabel25 on January 20, 2006
    Wow...
    I'm really fascinated with this story. I love the ansty obsession!
    Now hurry up with the next chapter, lol!
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  • From ANON - Faeriewing on January 20, 2006
    OH NO YOU DIDN'T!!! How could you leave us hanging like that!! I usually love a good cliffy, but you took it too far!! LOL I cannot wait to see where this ends up! Uodate this amazing story as soon as you can...for my sanity!! :) Great job...honestly, I love it!
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  • From aurorajm99 on January 20, 2006
    This story is crazy good-please update
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  • From ANON - Witchiepooh on January 19, 2006
    Shitttttttttttttttt! *Pants and gasp for air* -- Oh, I'll comment more on you LJ where you can reply, but you are seriously killing me. I don't think I've ever read something that left me with just such a sense of dread and anger at what's happening to Hermione. Hurry Draco!!!! Damn.
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  • From aurorajm99 on January 19, 2006
    Please update- I love it so far!
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  • From ANON - Lady St. Vire on January 19, 2006
    I apologize for taking so long to review ch. 11, my computer had issues. I really liked this chapter, the ball was everything it had been hyped up to be, though I was sorry that tradition didn't require the heads dancing the opening dance together. In terms of the swearing, honestly, that's the way people talk, especially when emotions run high, it's a pity, but that's how things are. I didn't even notice all the language until you brought it up in you livejournal. The people who are going through and counting how many times you used the "f" word aren't really focusing on your story, so really why would you take their reviews so personally. If you must edit it because it's bugging you then please post that version as an alternative( I don't like reading stories that have had the grit taken out of them.) But, personally, I would rather you put your precious efforts into ch. 12, then going back and editing. That's just my two cents. Plus, if the swearing was really bothersome, you wouldn't have 400+ reviews. A lot of people may have complained about the swearing, but how many haven't?
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  • From ANON - MMiercoles on January 19, 2006
    Yay! Draco to the rescue! Wait... I'm not sure of the quality of rescue he'll provide... well, better than nothing, I guess. Hope. Whatever. Hopefully this mess will straighten up their heads a little bit. Not completely, I'd bet, but maybe make a few things clear...
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  • From on January 19, 2006
    I don't think I've reviewed for the last couple of chapters and I must say I'm revolted with myself. I absolutely love this story. I think what draws me to it the most is that it really gets inside both Draco and Hermiones heads, it shows us what they're thinking and that I think is the demise of alot of the Dramione fics on here. That and the fact that they just fuck like rabits, authors seem to forget that they completely hate each other and that Draco has been brought up to be revolted by mudbloods. Keep up the good work. And don't worry, not all your readers are sexually frustrated with the smut/or lack there of, I personally think a story is better is the smut doesn't some till later. Smut to early in a story can ruin it. Keep up the good work, and update when you can.
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  • From ANON - Jana on January 19, 2006
    omg this story is so good. update faster please i cant take the waiting
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 19, 2006
    To Mena: Oh, great and wise 'published' author, please forgive us ass kissing, masterbating, ignorant peons. We bow to your superior knowledge of all things that make a story enjoyable. Never again shall I read a piece of smut with taking out my bible and thumping it in the face of profanity. It is so kind of you to police the fictions on AAF for us, for we are not wise enough ourselves to judge a good piece of fiction.
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  • From ANON - Julz on January 19, 2006
    Great story!!!!! I cannot wait to read more!!
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