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Reviews for Water

By : kissherdraco
  • From ANON - Anon on December 31, 2005
    Your raw, passionate writing has captivated me. I think with a beta you would be PHENOMENAL! I await your updates with bated breath.
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  • From ANON - NAR on December 31, 2005
    The first time I read it, I read 1-6 and I didn't like it. I don't remember what I didn't like, but I didn't like it.
    After reading all of it again, I realize how wrong I was.
    Water is so intense and moves like a rollercoaster. It's so frenzied and fast and as you put it "so fucked up". It's raw, emotive and powerful. You're right, it is all fucked up, but it's something beautiful. Your prose mirrors their relationship, beautiful and dark at the same time. You have a great deal of talent.
    There's a little thread, a facade of sanity, of stability keeping everything together, and it's tangible. You can see it, feel it, and you can sense the chaos lying beneath it.
    I love the counterpoint and Ron. With Ron, we see what's "normal", with Hermione and Draco we see the extremes; we see something so wrong and twisted.
    I adore how you pushed Hermione's morals aside. You developed it, made it believable and work. Draco is much deeper and much darker character, and you write him so well. You've made all the characters your own- and that is what makes truly GREAT fanfiction. Brava.
    The last chapter was... WOW, your best so far. There are no words to describe what it was. It was so emotional- you can't help but hate and love Draco and you can't help wanting to feel sorry and slap Hermione.
    Please, email me when you update.
    Thank you for writing and sharing something so brilliant!
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  • From ANON - pickletrickchic on December 31, 2005
    I just wanted you to know another wonderful chapter. I really enjoy the agony, and you do a good job of seeming like your in their heads~~ can't wait for the next one!!
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  • From ANON - hil on December 31, 2005
    wow. I actually read the fist nine chapters last night untill 3:30 am becuase it was soo good I couldn't stop! Just to get it out of the way, the only thing i didn't like was the quick changes of point of view in the middle of the scene, it's hard to decipher whose thoughs you're reading with all the tension. This was just soo full of angnst and drama and emotion it just engulfed me and i was captured by the story. Amazing, brilliant, i really don't have the adjective to properly praise this fic and you for writting. Please don't stop, you're too talented and this was too amazing to never be resolved.
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  • From ANON - tenorspaz on December 31, 2005
    Oh. My. Gawd.
    This is one of the best fan fic's I've ever read. Please update soon.
    Spaz
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 31, 2005
    three suggestions.

    1. cut back on the language--you use a LOT and it's really not necessary. the f-word's in there every paragraph, and it's distracting when you're trying to focus on the quality of your excellent work. :)

    2. SMUT!!!! but obviously not too soon, because draco is still somewhat of a mental case.

    3. UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 30, 2005
    FUCKING AHHHH!!!!! not to be selfish but shit i cant wait until the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - MJ on December 30, 2005
    Thank you so much for updating! I was so excited to read the next chapter! I thought chapter 9 was great!

    In addition to the interactions between Draco and Hermione by themselves, I also really enjoy the interactions of Draco and Hermione with Dumbledore, Harry, and Ron. I particularly love Draco
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 30, 2005
    it is sooo good. please put chapter 10 up.
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  • From ANON - kazfeist on December 30, 2005
    Very powerful. Lots of angst. But I always hope for a happy ending! Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Rin-chan on December 30, 2005
    i can't belive it.... *giggles* ...i stayed up al night to read this......
    i love the way you wright about them because.....i don't know... it just seems so real..this anger, hatred, despair.........
    maybe...???LOVE??? :))) just please...*on knees* please..*begging* ...dont't you dare stop wrighting !!!!!!!!!!
    looking forward to the next chapter..... update sooooooon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    ja ne
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 30, 2005
    GAH. AMAZING.
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  • From ANON - Dacia on December 30, 2005
    Absoulutly wonderful, each chapter is a little highlight to my day. Thank you for your energy on such a great story
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  • From ANON - yanga on December 29, 2005
    ..well. When you get passed all the curse words, the plot seems to be a whole lot more enjoyable. I will admit, at first, that I was completely turned off by Draco's blatant disrespect for girls and how the story was unfolding, but .. =/ You've actually portrayed him to be surprisingly sincere, even if his actions say otherwise. Lol.

    But I had a question - why did you name the fanfic Water? I have a theory, but I just wanted to know why you named it what you did and then compare it to my own theory.
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  • From ANON - missmisery on December 29, 2005
    Much anticipated chapter... and it was so much more than I expected..!
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