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By : kissherdraco
  • From ANON - Lil Tiny Bee on December 29, 2005
    OMG, I've been on the verge of tears reading this story. There's just so much emotion in it. I can see things totally happening this way. It's very real and very sad. Please continue!! I'm dying here!! Write more :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 29, 2005
    i just finished reading this!!! it's amazing!! this is one of the BEST d/hr fics EVER!! the angst is superb...just the right amount. update soon!
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  • From ANON - Heleen on December 29, 2005
    I'm such a dope. I kind of reviewed over at your LJ, huh? Next time I'll do it here. Like the rest of the cool people XD

    BUT! This is, like I said, the tryout for the email thing. Let's see, let's see - if it's hidden, then it's the site. If not, then I haven't the slightest. Either way I'll ask about, see what other authors know of it :)
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  • From ANON - mistress meo on December 29, 2005
    *sigh* I don't know what to say. Your writing floors me. I think you do some of your most brilliant work during the wee hours of the morning. I know it's a strain to stay up so late pouring the essence of three hearts out onto the page (yours, Draco's and Hermione's), but your brilliant at it. So angsty, so emotional, so glorious. I check everyday for an update, please don't keep us waiting too long for chapter 10.
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  • From ANON - jack on December 29, 2005
    oh gods, i read the entire story straight through and right now it's 4:56 AM and i just finished and all i can say to myself now is..."oh gods please don't let it end there"
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  • From ANON - Tanny on December 29, 2005
    Tres bien. It's late, but I've been meaning to read the update for days, and have only just gotten around to it, so you'll have to forgive me for my short-windedness (or be thankful for it, whichever you prefer ^_^). I really have to commend you for the emotion you convey in your story, because the more you write, the more real it becomes. Your characters aren't doing a bunch of crazy things without the reason clicking for the readers, and when a character does make a sporadic action, it's still a logical one for that person at that time.

    A few grammar/spelling mistakes, but none too bad. The only one that I really paid much mind to was you used "their" when you meant "there." A few other simple typos, but that's about all. I'm still loving your writing style, it helps to keep the story moving and exciting even through the long "talking/explanation" bits of story.

    You have a wonderful way of showing human thought in writing. It's quite magical how you do this, and it is something I hope you don't ever lose, because it is refreshing, as well as attention-grabbing, to feel as if you are reading the thoughts of characters in a story, as they think them.

    I also like how you've realized the next step of Draco and Hermione's relationship is far above what they have experienced so far. It's also nice how you make sure neither of them have any idea where their relationship is headed, simply because it's such an odd one. Hehehe, it's all so deviously exciting!

    I want to tell you that you did an excellent job with Dumbledore. Usually when fanfiction writers have Dumbledore speak, it reads nothing like how he speaks in the books. However, when reading what your Dumbledore had to say, I couldn't help but feel as though he was saying things JK would have him say. I especially loved how he had an "unfortunate knack for impromptu meetings." TRES, tres bien.

    Well I'm off. Must work in 5 hours.

    damn fanfiction, it shall be the death of my beauty sleep.
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  • From ANON - unknown on December 29, 2005
    man..this fic is so good its unnatural...thnx 4 the update.....its been driving me insane! i read this chapter last night when it was posted and i thought it was pretty dam good despite your warning (on your lj notes) .... basically.....even when your bad your good....dyamm....update soon! :)
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  • From ANON - kurtcouper on December 29, 2005
    I can't even say any words on how fucking amazing this story is. This is going to be fatal. Taste that way. And I like it.
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  • From ANON - Amelia on December 29, 2005
    Once again you have left me emotionally exhausted. The way you write just pulls you in and it's like you experience all of the characters feelings personally. Hermione is just so broken and Draco so helpless and confused. I love how you have been portraying Ron, it's refreshing to see him written as more than the ignorant best friend. Anyway, please update soon, i can't wait to see how things progress!
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  • From ANON - Olivia on December 29, 2005
    oh wow... so many words can describe how im feeling right now.. but only one can truly fit: amazing... i cant believe the power that radiated off all of those words... it was beautiful.. i cryed, im not trying to be cute (like those weird ass crack-heads that say (Oh! how cute;D)) it was very powerful.. you probably have a whole grip of reveiws to read but i do hope you get to read mine and that u understand how well you write... i am inspired to be a writer and i came to this website looking for other writers-in-progress and how well they write, and you write really well its almost scary. what country are you from? England i presume. well if you can write me back, i would like some advice and your choice of words and dialoge and plot and setting... almost everything. lol well good luck on your other stories. i hope they are as good as this one.
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  • From ANON - Brett` on December 29, 2005
    I can not wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Know-it-all on December 29, 2005
    Lovely new chapter! I particularly liked this one. It seemed like a nice transition between a lot of the anger and now into some of the loving! Yay! It was brilliant and totally believable. Moving along at a nice pace! Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - sparkle on December 29, 2005
    i think my heart just got ripped out of my chest, and i can't breath ... great job! :) wow great emotion it's so not over, i can't wait for the next chapter somethings building i can feel it!!! update as soon as you can!
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  • From on December 28, 2005
    OHHHH i just sped read this so i only got half of it but DAMNIT!!!!!! Ohh ohh ohhh *bounces* going to read this again cause damnit this is so freakin OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
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  • From ANON - Roo on December 28, 2005
    I know this is a throw back to Chapter 8, but I like the disconnected writing. I think it adds to the emotion and really makes you feel what the characters are feeling. It gives the feeling of being in the middle of friggin whirlpool of emotion and I love it. However, I like how you balance it out by writing a chapter like 9 where it is less frenzied and more of a drained, resigned tone. Cause lets face it, no one can withstand that much emotional turmoil without spontaneously combusting. So, I think you're writing style is perfect pretty much and I just wanted to let you know. Great Chapter 9 by the way (as if you couldn't figure that out already) I basically went into caradiac arrest I was so happy to see you updated...But I'm back into normal functioning heart rhythms, and am eagerly awaiting your next chapter.
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