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By : kissherdraco
  • From ANON - Lady St.Vire on December 21, 2005
    Wow, That was really amazing! Nicely worded foreplay. I really adore your story, I've been neglecting my X-mas party guests because of you. But I suppose it's fair, if we've been ruining your nights you have every right to ruin my social life. One thing I will say is that, and please don't take this personal, and I know that's really hard, but I felt like in the beginning of chapter eight you were a little heavy handed on the...big words. You had a bunch of really stunning imagrey, that was really great in conveing the tone and feelings of the characters but I felt like they kinda got lost amongst eachother. But I really love your story and if my comments make you feel like not writing, please disregard them for I am a crazy person. I really liked the violence and hatred that you put in to the "sex scene," because you are really being true to the characters, perhaps a tad more intense than how we got introduced to them, but you've already owned up to that. And frankly, I like that, it feels like you've lifted the veil of the "children's(I know it's not just for kids)" book and given us a picture of what a real co-ed boarding school out in the middle of nowhere would be like. Brava!
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  • From ANON - gabriela on December 21, 2005
    i need a cold shower...and my vibrator.

    amazing story. though could you have produced MORE of a tease? bravo!!!
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  • From ANON - Karmen on December 21, 2005
    Wow! I LIKED IT SO MUCH! It was wonderful! And this is not the end now is it? I want more! It is awesome!
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  • From ANON - Lorretta on December 21, 2005
    Oh my gosh. I haven't reviewed this whole story but I have to now. This is great(great being an understatment). I mean this is frigging awesome I can't imagine how you can end this. I feel so sad about the Trio how will they end up? But I want Draco to be happy(can I say happy)Well please just update again soon.I 've got to remember to check this story.
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  • From ANON - Nex on December 21, 2005
    Hey! Still got that amazing touch, eh? Lol, the story get even better the more I read. Draco's amazing, no ooc at all. Same with Hermione. Harry's great too. He's the way I would imagine him to be by 7th year, what with the fucked up life he's led. Keep up the fantastical work, dearie!
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  • From ANON - Amelia on December 21, 2005
    Wow...wow, wow, wow. I'm speechless. This fic is an amazing piece of writing. I love the way you convey what the characters are feeling in a sort of disjointed way that it makes you feel that you are there in their mind, feeling it as they are. And that last chapter - awesome. I don't know what else to say other than PLEASE UPDATE ASAP! This is one fic that i will definately be following closely :)
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  • From lckarlsson on December 21, 2005
    Wow! This is possibly the best fanfic I've ever read! I've made it to chapter 5 so far, and I would have reviewed sooner, but you've left me speechless!

    This is so intense and consuming, and I love it! You won't hear me complaining about that.

    The tension has been building up through the first 4 chapters... I read the first 3 chapters in one go, and then I just couldn't take any more!! I loved the scene in chapter 5, where they "tried to talk about it" because it sort of worked as a release for this tension, and you even worked some humour into it, which I think is awesome.

    I probably won't be able to read more of your wonderful story before next year, but I will definitely be back to read more by then!

    Keep up the wonderful writing! You are a truly gifted writer... you have your very own style of writing, and I wouldn't call it messy (it hasn't confused me or left me wondering want you meant with this or that at any point in the story so far), I would call it poetic!

    Best of luck!

    Leonora
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  • From ANON - Roo on December 21, 2005
    Holy fucking shit. That was amazing. I feel like I've been through the emotional ringer and I'm just reading the story. I can't even begin to comment on your work its so good. You must update though. After a chapter like that, you have to update immediately. Wow. I think my brain just exploded a little.
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  • From ANON - swivelchair on December 21, 2005
    Absolutely fantastic. There's nothing more. Just that. I love the angst, the violence and the way both of them interacts with each other. Because it's how I think they would really be had they'd been Heads. Could you email me when you update?

    Cheers!
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  • From ANON - LaLa on December 21, 2005
    Oh WOW!!! What a brilliant story. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Melissa on December 21, 2005
    This story is so wonderful, I barely even know what to say. I love the way you do dialogue and the sort of stream of consciousness thoughts of the characters. The thought processes and actions of your characters really make a lot of sense. This story is absolutely fabulous in every way. I particularly liked chapter 8 and the way it ended. I cannot wait for you to update. Your story has honestly made my day. I've read some really good fics, but I have to say that I've never enjoyed one as much as I'm enjoying this one. Much love!
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  • From ANON - nina on December 20, 2005
    that was beautiful!!!!!!! Please Post More Sooon!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 20, 2005
    OMFG!!! this is your best chapter yet!!!! hurry up and review!!!! hurry!!!! i can't breathe until i have read the next chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 20, 2005
    I haven't been able to read any other fanfic because of this one. You're that good.
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  • From ANON - Lrndng on December 20, 2005
    Whoa that was ridiculously hot
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