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Reviews for Water

By : kissherdraco
  • From ANON - Stacy on December 19, 2005
    Wow! That was soo good!
    Ah... I was so frusteratred,lol.
    I love how you had the tension bulid up gradually, and thanks for writing a super-long chapter!!!
    -Stacy
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 19, 2005
    That ending left me completely speechless- so much build up and then he does something you'd never expect and I loved it! I really liked the parallel between them over how much their head girl and boy posistions meant to them- they're more alike than they think. The long chapters are also a blessing- it's so nice to see an update and know that there'll be plenty there to read.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 19, 2005
    awesome chapter

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  • From ANON - Christina on December 19, 2005
    Great chapter, Draco is finally getting a heart. I love the heated scenes between him and Hermione. Great chapter, and I can't wait to see what happens next!!!
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  • From ANON - blondiexoxo on December 19, 2005
    holy crap u have to continue ... im goinng crazy lol its really good i love it cant wait till u update
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  • From ANON - kazfeist2 on December 19, 2005
    Excellent. Some small grammatical omissions, but I suspect that it happened in the heat of the writing. You do have the language of teenaged angst down quite nicely. Cheers!
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  • From ANON - unknown on December 18, 2005
    aweee....still no update :(...im like hitting up your pg man
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  • From ANON - TheAngelOfSilence on December 18, 2005
    You have my attention!
    Seriously...good work.I'm liking it. It's naughty, it's very readable, and I should very much like to know what happens next!
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  • From ANON - Cybill on December 18, 2005
    I love every word that you spill on your screen. It is exactly like their relationship would look like. No oocness, I love you for that! Update faster, I BEG you!!!! This story gives me the creeps AND makes adrenaline rush through my vains.
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  • From ANON - SpazticClone on December 18, 2005
    Aaaaahhh! ::Stares at the missing "Next Chapter":: O.O ...why isn't there more?! Please write more this is really good! And highly amusing at that...But yes. Must have more...peaaase? Verygoodverygood. Later!
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  • From ANON - unknown on December 17, 2005
    ooooh please update soon...i hate rushing you but im checking like every minute.....can u atleast post sth saying when you'll update ? thnx
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  • From ANON - tanny on December 17, 2005
    Firstly, pardon to the author for wasting a review; however, I felt compelled to defend myself to an ignorant person encountered in this review board. Please don't waste your time reading this, kissherdraco, because I fear it's not a review, but a response to someone else.

    Excuse me milkie, I thought that the author was asking for constructive criticism, but apparently I was wrong. According to you, I should just keep my big fat mouth shut because "this isn't class" and no one cares about a few mistakes, etc. However, as a writer, I find that it is helpful to both be complimented on the good parts of my writing, and learn what parts should perhaps be better. And honestly, it's quite inconsiderate of you to fill half of your review with a response to my constructive criticism (by the way, if I really wanted to "diss" her fanfiction, you really would have been able to tell). If you've got something to say, say it to me, don't waste someone else's time. My email is ea959@yahoo.com. And I happen to think that the author is writing a fabulous story, but I did see some things that could make it even better. That's what posting one's work is about; it's about subjecting it to the opinions of other people. Even if I was horribly rude to the author, it's still the risk she took by putting her work out there.

    I go out of my way to not be offensive when I review stories I'm a fan of, because, of course, I want to see them continue. But, please, milkie, forgive this insolent reader for trying to make the world of D/Hr fiction a more pleasurable read. God forbid a rabid person like you with no respect for other opinions, and possibly without the capacity to understand the idea of improving something good, should spend half a review wasting an authors time and attacking me.

    I apologize again, kissherdraco, for wasting this review on another reviewer. I have nothing further to say to milkie on the matter of my reviews. If you wish not to hear from me again, simply email me, my address ea959@yahoo.com.
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  • From ANON - Dreamweaver on December 17, 2005
    I really enjoyed this, the sexual tension, the realisation that there actually might be something there between them besides hate and the acknowledgement of feelings that both boys have that Hermione is totally clueless about. I can't wait to read more. I hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - kurtcouper on December 17, 2005
    I can't breathe. I can't fucking breathe. I've never known, read, listened to an author who writes such dramatic... in the moment, damn, i can't even describe it. But emotions are flowing everywhere and it's so thick I can breathe it in and it's wonderful. Refreshing. Gut tearing wonderful. I love how they hate but they dare to do anything and Draco doesn't want to feel this way and he has it worse than anyone else. And beautiful. You're amazing.
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  • From ANON - Brianna on December 16, 2005
    As I said before I LOVE ur story I agree with Anon it is so intense and you really do hold your breath through it... will everything end happily ever after?
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