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By : LeoZodiac
  • From ANON - anon on January 27, 2006
    Cool update this is a great story. Thx for posting your great stories at this site.
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  • From ANON - JJ on January 27, 2006
    Wow! That stomach flu thing was very scarey. So Severus has gotten his parents back and Ron and Herm. have begged forgiveness from Harry. Do you have ANY unfinished business left in this story????? Oh, yea. The boys are having babies!!! Makes you wonder if James' behavior towards Snape was genetic. It also makes you wonder what has been going on in the family that the brothers could 1. turn on their other brother that way, and 2. think up a prank like that at just this time. Some how you keep us from liking James and Lilly. Did you set it up that way on purpose??? Are we looking at the next dark lord in training?
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  • From ANON - joanna on January 12, 2006
    hi , i just read your story and i really really love it
    i hiope you do a other one
    i can't waith to see what's
    going to have been next time
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  • From ANON - Emerald Snape on December 25, 2005
    that a wonderful story... i dont read many Lily & James return stories but the writing was great so i couldn't stop. Hope to get more soon. :D
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  • From ANON - Ari on December 23, 2005
    Nice work
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  • From ANON - Rubber_Duckey_ur_the_1@hotmail.com on December 23, 2005
    Wow, no offense but you need some serious work on this hun. It's an intersting plot and very diffrent from what i am used to seeing but its like your telling a story to a bunch of four year olds. You need more detail and you need to work on the flow. If you wouldnt mind, i'd like to help, i need something to do. My e-mail is at the top, hit me up if you'd like me to help.
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  • From ANON - LazySnake on December 23, 2005
    Ahh...what domestic bliss.
    ^_^
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  • From ANON - JJ on December 23, 2005
    Appease everyone???? What about Harry who has to carry two babies???? He will be big as a house! So Snape will forgive his parents, but not forget them. Sounds like Harry. Of course, Harry is an extreme case. More???
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  • From ANON - anonymous on December 22, 2005
    Yay!!!! An update. great chapter. I love how Severus is so protective of Harry. Please update soon
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  • From ANON - momoko on December 22, 2005
    good chapter, I like it, bye
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  • From ANON - PJ on December 22, 2005
    Another cool update. I am glad Sev was able to clear things up with his family. I see Harry told his "parents" how he felt that is good. I am glad he is willing to try a friendship but I can see why he wouldn't see them as his parents. It was just too long I suppose and they did leave him even if they thought he was dead (I hope you will explain why they were told he was dead by that ministry guy later in the story) for like 14yrs they could have come back then but didn't. I also don't understand why they didn't know about Sirius I mean he was wanted by both wizards & muggles... it was all over the "news" it looks like they would have seen something. Anyway nice update keep writing!!!
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  • From pendecardiel on December 21, 2005
    this is brilliant. i vote a little girl cos a whole family of males would get a tad tedious. i have three names that i like; Meriel, Sienna and Adrienne. althou7gh if its twins than a boy and a girl would be nice. possibly Raven for a boy that or River (i know i have wierd choices in names). you don't have to use my ideas they are just that, a adoring fans suggestions. anyway please u[pdate this wonderful fic.
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  • From ANON - sassygirl on December 18, 2005
    please update soon...am dying to find out what happens next
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  • From ANON - absinth on December 14, 2005
    yay, an update. update more please, oh, and as there seem to be twins in the snape family, then i thing twins, one of each, would definitely suit our beloved pair

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  • From ANON - alix on December 13, 2005
    this is a great story!!! Wow James & Lily really showed their Gryphindor courage... hahahaha!!! They left.... everyone.... weren't they part of the Order? They could have helped during the first war. I mean after they heard Harry was dead why didn't they come back.... guess they were afraid. But that Minister of Magic told them Harry was dead... whats up with that was that guy evil or something? Glad to see Harry get along with one of his brothers... it figures it would be the one sored into slytherin considering Harry was almost sorted into Slytherin himself. I guess the 'hatred of the parents' is passed onto the children in the case of the tow older boys since they don't like Slytherin and only James (and maybe Lily) are the only ones that could influence the boys into not liking Slytherin house. Someone needs to really talk to those 2 and explain that the dark wizards didn't only come from Slytherin. I also think Sirius should get another chance and decking James. I don't think Harry should forgive them or if he does he should explain that he forgives them for he would never consider them his parents and probably not even friends. I can see why he wouldn't want to hold hatred in his heart that isn't good. but I don't think I would let them have a relationship with my kids. Also what about the Potter estate I don't think Harry should have to give anything back. They left and changed their names, etc they should have to make do with whatever they have now or earned or whatever they were able to take with them. Mabye Bill or Charlie (whichever works with the goblins) could do something about that.
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