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Reviews for The Return

By : LeoZodiac
  • From ANON - joey on December 13, 2005
    Oh yeah and I think both Sirius and Remus should get a chance at James & Lily (maybe not hit them) gave them a real hard talking to.... what the heck happened to that Gryffindor courage? They ran and left Harry and then didn't come back. How old is Cody is he about the right age that Lily would have been pregnant about the time the dark lord came to kill "them" and Harry? Is that why they didn't come back? They ran and left everyone.... Sirius, Remus, the order they could have been a real help in the war. They didn't show their Gryffindor courage very well.
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  • From ANON - joey on December 13, 2005
    Hey this is a great story. It is kind fo funny that all four of the Potter boys got sorted into different houses. But I remember that Harry almost got sorted into Slytherin too. So maybe the family has more Slytherin traits then James & Lily like to admit.... they did create those golems and then go and hide. They "tricked" people just like a Slytherin would. And the way James called the Weasleys Slytherins points to him that created the "hate" in his kids for that house. I know they said Peter turned them into the Dark Lord.... but maybe somebody needs to actually tell them straight out that Gryffindor
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  • From on December 12, 2005
    can't wait to read the rest ^_^
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  • From ANON - JJ on December 12, 2005
    Yea, more story!!!!
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  • From ANON - anonymous on December 12, 2005
    Glad they all got along in the end. PLease update soon good chapter
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  • From ANON - Nicole on December 12, 2005
    Aww... I'm glad Sev has some family now. And I'm glad Harry is close to his youngest brother.
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  • From ANON - NightOwl on December 12, 2005
    I love the story. please update soon. please.
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  • From ANON - momoko on December 12, 2005
    good chapter
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  • From ANON - Ari on December 12, 2005
    I thought it was sweet how Harry is getting along better with his siblings. Hope you keep at it.
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  • From ANON - litekreem on December 12, 2005
    I like the story and hopefully its a girl.Maybe Harry will give the Potter's back thier vault key I mean I wouldnt want thier money and I'm sure thier other kids would love to have it

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  • From ANON - kiara on December 12, 2005
    i would like a boy and upfate soon please
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  • From ANON - Solana on December 12, 2005
    Hey its me again I think Harry should not forgive his parents but tolerate them and also try to get along with one of his siblings as for the baby I say twins a boy and a girl and their names should be Ashling for the girl and Caspian for the boy
    one question is Ron and Mione going to be in the story because I think it would be neat to have them come back and try to earn Harry's forgiveness
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  • From ANON - solana on December 12, 2005
    I say have Snapes Siblings be nice and I also think that maybe you should have his parents be dead instead and consentrate on the siblings trying to get passed what happened through the years of sev being disowned and the two wizarding wars
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 12, 2005
    it should be a bo, i dont really like when they have a girl
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  • From on December 11, 2005
    i would love it to be a boy and love the story so far
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