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Reviews for The Return

By : LeoZodiac
  • From ANON - Ari on December 11, 2005
    Make them stuck up. Hmm, a girl. Always could see Sev with one.
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  • From potionsmistress on December 11, 2005
    I think the baby should be a girl...as for a name..how bout Keeley or Kiera

    now on to the rest of my review. I love this story.. it's great~
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  • From MidnightLilly on December 11, 2005
    I'm surpised Lilly and James aren't against homosexuality, I think the kids should be brats. Harry and Severus should have a baby girl, Remus and Sirius should have a woman they both knock up.
    I just think Lilly and James should be bad and their son shouldn't forgive them ever. two of my cousins kinda grew up like harry did.
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  • From ANON - PJ on December 11, 2005
    This is very interesting. As far as Harry forgiving James & Lily I think he should just treat them as someone he is not friends with and just have to put up with them since they "work" together. As for the three kids well he shouldn't take the sins of the parents out on them. Harry should explain that he would be nice because he works with them and that is all... they are not related, not friends they are nothing... is there a way for Harry to disown them legally/magically? Maybe do that but then that would disown him from the kids as well. I know that sounds cruel but did they even try to find out after they saw the picture of Harry. Did they not see anything about Sirius being in prison? As for the baby I don't care what it is as long as it is ok. I am glad that Harry does have a family and that they are all there for him. Keep writing update soon
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  • From ANON - wind on December 11, 2005
    I say twins or triplets. if twins a boy and a girl. if triplets i don't know.
    names hmmm

    Rose
    Daven
    Troy
    Tasha
    Tristian

    Just some thoughts.
    keep writing its good.
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  • From ANON - Donnie Rose on December 11, 2005
    Hi, I just love this story so far. As for the vote, I vote for a boy and for his name I have two that I just can't decide between, either Chris or Dale. Let Snape get along with his brother and his sisters he could have taken the mark to protect them if they were at school with him and were in danger from the others (future Death eaters). Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - JJ on December 11, 2005
    A boy. This way they can give him the love they never got. If it's a girl, that's O.K. too, in a way it would be easier. They would be starting from scratch. But emotionally, a boy would make them face their own pasts. Snape's family should go to hell. But I hope his siblings will be nice to him. They deserve some peace, especially with what is going on with Harry's family. About time someone hit the Potters' over the head with what they did. Sure, they had to mourn the loss of their first born, but the tragedy was it was not necessary - he was alive.
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  • From ANON - Jenn on December 11, 2005
    God this story is great!!! I hope it is a girl, I also hope that severus can have some good family. He deserves it. Keep up the good work!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - phantomcomplex on December 11, 2005
    Great story so far. I think they should have a girl. Just because. I do have one question though, it's the only thing that bugs me about this story. Why don't the Potters recognize Molly and Arthur? They were, after all, in the order together before they "died." It also seems strangely out of character for our twinkly-eyed meddler in chief to sit idly by while all this drama is unfolding around him. I think it's time for a major intervention, Dumbledore style. I'm seeing chains and veritaserum. ::evil grin:: OK, maybe just veritaserum. What ELSE have the Potters been lying about all these years?
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  • From ANON - jadziakittycat on December 11, 2005
    Twins...one of each. No, Sev's siblings and their children should be on the outs with him. I could see the Potter children and Snape children trying to make Sev's and Harry's life miserable. No harming the baby, though. i still don't want the Potters getting any of the money. I think that James is in abandoment of his birthright. It should be Harry's. Was it my imagination or did you really write the Potters not really caring about his life at the Durselys. It seemed like they did not even care about what happened or what they have been told. They act like it is no big deal that he was beaten, starved, or raped and that doesn't include Voldy. Also what is the REALK reason they suddenly showed back up Please update soon
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  • From ANON - methoslover on December 11, 2005
    I personally would love to see Harry have either a boy or twins with one of each. As for his family, I would like Severus's siblings to at least want to reconnect. It will be a gradual thing as there are issues. I would also like to see at least a gradual thawing of attitude from his parents when they see what Severus has made of himself and his marriage with Harry.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 11, 2005
    it sould be a boy and a good name would be nicholas severus snape
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 11, 2005
    I think the baby should be a BOY and that sev's family will accept him.since harry don't get along with his parents severus should at least get along with his family.
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  • From ANON - Nicole on December 11, 2005
    GIRL!!!! The Potters have three boys, the weasly's have a tribe of boys, lets get a Potter-Snape girl!!
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  • From ANON - En4cerMax on December 11, 2005
    I'd say a boy. And for a suggestion for a name, Derick? I dunno. But keep writing please. :)
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