Click Here!

Reviews for The Return

By : LeoZodiac
  • From ANON - manx on December 11, 2005
    I think they should have a boy. Most of the stories have them with a baby girl. I think Sev's siblings would be intelligent enough to know that Sev was on the Light side and helped win the war.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - bookwyrm on December 11, 2005
    Go Sirius! Damn, I love the idea of Sirius turning on James because James bailed out and left everyone else to deal with the fall out. In general I don't like the character of Sirius, immature bullies have never appealled to me, but I just might make an exception for YOUR Sirius.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - anonymous on December 11, 2005
    please make the baby a girl, for names can't think of one. Update soon. good chapter
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Bumble_Bee on December 11, 2005
    Considering that the other Potter children seem to be a tad... uncaring towards their older sibling I think that Snape's should like him. You don't want to have the whole blood family against them! As for the sex of the child - a boy, definately a boy!!! Marcus maybe???
    Report Review

  • From ANON - ginseirei on December 11, 2005
    I think they should have twins, a boy and a girl. Sev's sisters should get along with him but not his brother.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - DawnDoss on December 11, 2005
    I think they should be nice. I've always found perants don't see past your mistake even though you do somthing to make it better like with Severus being a spy for the light.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - peniquedeplata on December 11, 2005
    Yay, you wrote more :) Sirius still needs to get a shot at decking James. No preference on the baby, but heres a couple of names that can be for a boy or a girl : Sevilen- Turkish for Loved, Bennett- Latin for Little Blessed One, Kaelin- Celtic/Gaelic for Rejoicer, Keeran- Celtic/Gaelic for Little Dark One, Merritt- Latin for Deserving Good Fortune. As for Sev's siblings they should be a little stand-offish until the one meets Sev at Hogwarts and starts to warm up to him and Harry, then they should make the effort to get to know what his life has been like and just who his family is now.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - JiyuHatellKodai on December 11, 2005
    Very wonderful story dear. Definitely keep it up.

    My votes/ideas:
    Severus' siblings: Have his brother and one sister (younger seems better) like him but the other sister be a total... "female dog" towards him.

    Baby:
    Oh, girl definitely, but I can see a boy two. XD True Weasley fashion and make it twins. XD AH-HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! *cough*

    For names:
    Boys/meaning: AIDAN/Fire; ALDEN, ALDIN/defender; BEARN/son; GODRIC/rules with God(Thought this might be interesting); JEFFREY/peaceful gift; KENRIC, KENDRICK, KENDRYCK/fearless leader;
    Girls/meaning: FARAN, FERAN/advances; GERMIAN/enrages; WHITNEY/from the white island; ALODIA/Rich(Variant, Alodie); ARDITH/Good war; ELLETTE/Little elf; ELSWYTH/Elf from the willow trees; ELVA/Elf(Variant, Elvia);ELVINA/Friend of the elves(Variants, Elwine and Elwyna)

    For many MANY more names, just check out 20000-names.com for names and meanings.

    Report Review

  • From ANON - Leaf on December 11, 2005
    I love your style and idea of "loving potters". Beautiful^^ About child... girl. And about the Sev' family - it would be nice if his siblings be nice and understanding. After all, sometime we much more believe our brohers and sisters then parent. They could at least try to catch with Harry and Sev marriage.

    Don't stop writting, you have a really good conception ^^
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Suzanne on December 11, 2005
    Hey, I like your story. I had a little trouble getting used to James and Lily being there but that's the fun of it. I think the baby should be a girl. With black hair and green eyes. I read a story ones with snape being married to selena. Maybe that is a good name SELENA POTTER-SNAPE.

    Well. The question about Severus family. He payed his price for taking the Dark Mark so i think that the siblings shouldn't have anything against Severus.

    I hope you will update soon.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - momoko on December 11, 2005
    good chapter, Sev to get along with his siblings, and the baby, a girl named Hannah, bye
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Aamaya on December 11, 2005
    I really like your story. Awesome Job!!! How about have either Sev have a twin or the brother and the sister twins? (and gets along with them or his twin). But anyaway, it would be nice if he got along with his brother and one sister, but the youngest is stuck up because she is favored by her parents. As for Harrys baby, it doesn't matter much, both are cute.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - anonymous on December 10, 2005
    good two chapters. A few grammatical problems, but nothing really major. Please update soon.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - mysticsong on December 10, 2005
    You're writing more, right??
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Hambares on December 10, 2005
    Wonderful! Harry and Severus both want children!
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!