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Reviews for The Return

By : LeoZodiac
  • From ANON - myniephoenix on December 09, 2005
    i can't believe those parents of his!!!!!!!!! oh my god... you better deal with this soon...
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  • From ANON - kit on December 09, 2005
    One word: UPDATE
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  • From ANON - Nicole on December 09, 2005
    I'm actually really pissed off with Lily and James. I mean.. I don't think I'd be able to forgive them. Especially with the way James is acting
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  • From ANON - Ari on December 09, 2005
    Hmm, your writing seems very formal, I have had the same trouble in the past but it is truly hard to fix. Reading it out loud to yourself might help you understand what I am saying about the style.

    I like the story so far, though I truly do not believe James and Lily should be forgiven until a MUCH later date.
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  • From ANON - Alex on December 09, 2005
    Why, Leo....slow of course....no one in their right mind would just forgive them.
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  • From ANON - kari on December 09, 2005
    make it slow progress please
    they have to suffer
    good story by the way
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  • From ANON - En4cerMax on December 09, 2005
    I say a slow process. Please keep writing. I'd like to see the reaction on James' fave when he finds out Harry is married to Sev. :)
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  • From ANON - peniquedeplata on December 09, 2005
    James and Lily have a lot to answer for, Harry should take a while before forgiving them . The relationship between Severus, Sirius & Remus will be the true test of friendship and family to see Harry through the latest turmoil in his life and will show James that things cant stay the same forever.

    Excellent job, I cant wait for the next chapter
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 09, 2005
    personally i think it has to be slow especially if you have abuse in his background past the negelct that is actually in the book. Not to mention you have the fact that they willingly left their child with golums when they knew they were targets, the fact they didn't check into what was happening to their friends (Sirius has basically been through hell cause of their 'deaths') Remus was left alone... it has not been good, and the idea that he would just up and forgive them, well that is beyond understanding that is beyond sainthood. what they did messed with a lot of lives, and after voldermort was 'gone' the first time they could have come back or at least contacted their friends.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 09, 2005
    slow process
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  • From ANON - Huntresss on December 08, 2005
    Forgiveness should be a long time coming.. Since they haven't been around for 18 or more years the
    Porters should have to earn everyones trust and friendship... the old fashioned way.
    And James should really have to work to win over
    SEV... and there fore Harry because of their close personal relationship and pasts..
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  • From ANON - anonymous on December 08, 2005
    good start! i hope you update soon, because i'm damn curious to know where lily and james has been for the past 17(?) years. They sure got some explaining to do
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