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Reviews for Something Much Darker II

By : beccaky
  • From Angie30 on January 09, 2006
    Cripes McGonagall needs to lighten up! I mean Hermione is of age! Yeesh that old bitty needs to get "some" lol Great chapter by the way.
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  • From ANON - angel on January 09, 2006
    ohhh noo she know what is going to happen now ... please please update soon i would love to read what will happen next ...later for now

    angel
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  • From slygriff21 on January 08, 2006
    Uh oh! Busted! I can't wait to find out more! Please update again and soon!

    Tiffany
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  • From ANON - Edania on January 08, 2006
    ohh someone is going to get caught in here.
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  • From ANON - Applekissis on January 08, 2006
    This story is sooo soooo soooo soooo(did I say so) good!
    I love it..the drama,the romance and desire..the secrecy..everything
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  • From ANON - JW on January 08, 2006
    Ch 9 - yikes! Caught by McGonagall! And how will Severus sneak in.... Please hurry with the next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - Guinnevere on January 07, 2006
    Sorry I posted 'nearly' the same review twice, and didn't include my e-mail address either time. A little Technical Difficulty with my DSL connection.

    I loved this story, in spite of the tone of my previous posting. Lemons are always lovely in fanfic, but I really do cringe whenever Unwise Practices are included in a story. It's a bit like Rape Fantasy. Anyone who acts out such a fantasy had better be damned clear in advance with his/her partner that 'fantasy' is what it is, and exactly what is okay and what isn't. Otherwise, it's a roadmap to disaster. I don't know whether or not the sexually inexperienced read fics like these for research, but I hope they have the sense to understand the difference between fanfic fantasy and actual Things It Might Be Okay To Do With A Partner.
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  • From ANON - Guinnevere on January 07, 2006
    If there are any men reading this fic, looking for pointers on how to give a woman pleasure, don't try this teasing game that Severus plays with Hermione. All you'll end up with is a furious, frustrated woman and perhaps your 'nads hexed off if she happens to be a witch for real. Girls, you can tease a man like that, and he'll probably like it as long as you finally do what needs to be done. But when a woman is balked that close to climax, it has a chilling, need-to-start-all-over-again effect that makes the woman feel cheated and rejected. I am not fooling about this, and it makes me shake my head in sorrow everytime I see this 'pleasuring technique' included in a story. DO NOT TRY THIS AT HOME... Or in the backseat of your car, or at the No-Tell Motel, or wherever you're trysting. You'll regret it down the road, even if she smiles and pretends it's okay - the first time you do it. Keep doing this enough and she'll either leave you for someone less stupid and cruel, or she'll slip arsenic in your tea some fine day and you'll never do it again

    I'm just saying...
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  • From ANON - Miepje on January 04, 2006
    I agree with Hermione: "more" So please update soon!

    Very hot...
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  • From Ami on December 29, 2005
    Oh, wow... Becca... Another excellent chapter! I'm still trembling with excitement after reading that... Oh, wow...

    ~cuddles~

    ~Ami
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  • From Applekissis on December 27, 2005
    OMGOMG...That was the best-most erotic love scene I have read...It was great and if u dont update again really soon I think im going to burst!!!!
    I love this story so far
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 27, 2005
    OK, OK. THIS has got to be the best in this category.
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  • From slygriff21 on December 26, 2005
    Great updates! Is this the end or is there more? I hope there's more! This is a great story! Please update soon!

    Tiffany
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  • From Angie30 on December 26, 2005
    Very hot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - angel on December 26, 2005
    wow ..please please more ... what will happen next ... please update soon in till next time later for now

    angel
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