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Reviews for Harry\'s New Dad

By : LeoZodiac
  • From ANON - anonymous on December 23, 2005
    Ok first off i wanted to say that i just finished reading all fifteen chapters and i must say i'm impressed. I've read almost all your other stories, but was very hesitant about this one because of the x- men crossover (Never into it). But i must say this is an amazing story i loved it, please update soon. I'm sitting here waiting for another update. Hats off to you.
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  • From ANON - Rachel on December 21, 2005
    CONTINUE. I COMMAND IT. LOVE THE STORY. i really want you to continue it.
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  • From GML on December 21, 2005
    Whoop! lol! This... is... better then I expected. *titls head* I normally don't read crossovers 'cause they tend to get a little too 'messy' for my liking, but... this is really clean. The facts are clear cut and you haven't tried to mix too much. I like it. *grin* I'm glad id ecided to give this a look. Honestly, it was the title that drew me in, the summery only helped. I LOVE X-Men and Harry Potter. Add twins, a younger sibling, and James and Lily bashing, and hey! You've got a perfect fic here! *grin* Great! More Please!! ASAP!!!
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  • From ANON - jay on December 19, 2005
    lovely i wan more keep it coming !!! this is good stuff !!!
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  • From ANON - Athena on December 19, 2005
    Good update! Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - lisa on December 19, 2005
    Um, if Logan adopted Harry, wouldn't Harry's last name change to his? It's not like Harry owes anything to the Potters after they abandoned him. I would think that he would want the name of his Real father, and not the sperm donor. Just a thought.

    Really like this story. I like the way that the xmen are interacting with the wizards. Thanks!
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  • From ANON - plotbunnybrat on December 19, 2005
    I usually don't read crossovers, but I decided to give yours a try. I am glad I did. Logan makes a great overprotective dad.
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  • From ANON - Storm on December 18, 2005
    Great chapter, I couldnt' wait for James to get on the wrong side of Wolverine's claws. Great work. Can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - JJ on December 18, 2005
    Logan to the rescue!!!
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  • From ANON - Vudu on December 18, 2005
    GO LOGAN
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  • From ANON - Draeconin on December 18, 2005
    This could be a rather interesting story. Could be. From the style of writing, I'd say you're between twelve and fourteen years old. Not bad, for that age. But I suggest you read some of the better authors, and try to copy their styles of writing. You're a bit choppy, and could use some smoothing out. Who does what and when is important, but so is setting the scene, and that alone can help smooth things out. Descriptions of surroundings, feelings, motivations, reactions, and other factors are what I'm talking about. But do examine HOW some of the better authors write, not just the story line.

    I also suggest you proofread your work after the spell-checker gets done with it. Just because it's spelled correctly doesn't mean you have the right word.

    Good luck with your writing. Sincerely.
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  • From ANON - Draeconin on December 18, 2005
    Never thought to look here, did you? Just remove the spaces. Original name: James Howlett, changed it to Logan. Apparently only the one name, now, but...

    http:// www. marveldirectory. com/individuals/w/wolverine .htm
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  • From ANON - jw on December 18, 2005
    great update keep it up
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  • From ANON - cyn on December 18, 2005
    another good chapter. I like your story and I just want to punch a few people. Don't give up because of a few people...there are others that still like it.
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  • From ANON - KittyWolf on December 17, 2005
    *laughs and claps* This is so cool. XD Love X-men and combining it with HP makes for an awesome fic!
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