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  • From ANON - Anon on June 18, 2006
    come on pleace don't make us wait another year for you to finish this story.
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  • From ANON - Artemuschaos on June 07, 2006
    the story is really great i love reading it . if u could email me when the new chapt. is up my email is serene_legolas@hotmail.com
    thank u

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  • From ANON - tomarlia on February 09, 2006
    hurry with the next chapter please
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  • From ANON - michelle on February 02, 2006
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  • From ANON - sofisss on January 29, 2006
    Hello!
    I'm new on this site;
    I enjoy this story... The characters fit well. (I do not know if I express myself clearly beacause I'm French so I'm not writing or speaking English so well... but I read it pretty well!).
    Can we have more of this story pleeeeeaaaaaaassssseeee?????
    As you say, plaese feel free to e-mail me when you edit a new chapter(s????)
    With my best XOXO...
    Sofisss
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 27, 2006
    I'l like to get an email when you update:) really interesting story
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  • From ANON - sweettee on January 27, 2006
    please up date soon I would like to find out how the dinner at mione's goes and I would like to see how their relationship progresses.
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  • From ANON - nessSachiel on January 26, 2006
    hmmm...why wait? Is unbeted one still on net?
    I am going to read it! :*
    wonderfull chapter, love, wonderfull :*
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  • From ANON - Lil Nezumi on January 25, 2006
    Gads! I like the way that this story is progressing, but if you cliff it again I'll hunt you down with Fluffy's help. Just kidding. I love this story, update soon. Thank you.
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  • From ANON - oddjob103 on January 22, 2006
    I'm enjoying this story. Whirlwind courtship indeed. And Severus not sharing his brandy. Tsk tsk. lol

    A small con/crit. When someone is speaking and another person reacts to whatever was said, they need to be separate paragraphs.

    Bad Ex. "Potter, what do you think you're doing?" Harry winced. (The first thing I think is 'Why is Harry calling himself Potter?' Which makes for confusing reading.)

    The example should read:

    "Potter, what do you think you're doing?"

    Harry winced.

    There are a good many sentences that need to be separated in your story. But, a problem easily fixed. Keep writing. Is Severus' family going to pull something? Will the Potter-Snapes survive the Weasley Inquisition? Will they ever get to have sex without interuption? ;)
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  • From ANON - magalud on January 21, 2006
    I am loving it. Loved especially thepart when harry asks severus if he killed everyone who gave him the scars! I'm wondering about Sev's horrible family. Will there be anymore of them? I don't think people like them will keep quiet. Hum, did I alreayd tell you I LOVED your story? Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - witching on January 21, 2006
    SO cute! Wonderfully written, and an absolute delight to read! Adorable is not something I read often, but this is just too well-written to ignore. I eagerly await your next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Sahira on January 20, 2006
    UPDATE for Albus' socks sake!!!!!
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  • From ANON - ella on January 20, 2006
    i love this story, i like the fact that Harry bought himself a husband that he already loved an it makes a nice change from the Harry is forced into bonding stories, i do hope that Severus learns to love him back though. please will you e-mail me when you update? thanx huggles and candy ella xxxxxxx
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  • From ANON - ramona on January 19, 2006
    this story is great i love the protective harry and shy snape keep 'em coming
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