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By : redclawjbq
  • From ANON - momoko on January 13, 2006
    good chapter
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  • From ANON - asta on January 13, 2006
    Well, with Severus having now equal possession of all Potter's assets too the relationship should get balanced! Because if the wedding contract makes him Potter's property he has just gotten his own independence back. And is so to speak being now "his own man" again!
    Good move from Harry and the only one possible if he wants to keep Severus. Because for an IC Snape based on JKRs portrayal, for such a very proud man who values control over himself above anything else the only realistic reactions to such a total loss of freedom and dignity could be imo flight (even into the muggle-world) or suicide - and that would make for a very short and tragic story...

    Which is a relief to me and of course a base for a healthy relationship instead of a coerced one violating one's dignity and basic human rights, however much the other partner might try to prettiefy that nasty fact. It should also make for a much more in character Severus (since blushing, shy, submissive Severus is about as far from canon as Bellatrix and Neville falling in love and visiting his, tortured into insanity by her, parents on sundays!) who can now be as snarky, sarcastic, domineering and impatient with stupidity as we all love him from the books. ^_^
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  • From ANON - xikum on January 12, 2006
    Yes, that would be * quite * absolutely satisfying, rubbing their face in their hypocracy!! Nicely done!! Made me happy not only for Severus, but for their relationship!
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  • From ANON - Abraxis on January 12, 2006
    Way to go Severus with that nasty bitch of a store owner.

    And their fist kiss - just so tender.

    More please.
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  • From foxygirl on January 12, 2006
    You go Sev! Sour indeed!!!!! Love it!^^

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  • From ANON - lady gray on January 07, 2006
    wow, this is a really original plotline, Sev being forced into marrige is few and far between, i like it.
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  • From ANON - Katherine on January 05, 2006
    Hello I just wanted to write and say I love this idea. I have enjoyed reading what you have posted so far of this story and hope you update again soon.
    K
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  • From harryhollow on January 04, 2006
    yeah!! i love reading this over!!!
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  • From harryhollow on January 04, 2006
    pppppppppppleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaassssssssssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeee update sooon!!!!! *grin* i am so looking forward to your next chapter or chapters *giggles* pout hate cliffhangers!!! *grww*
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  • From ANON - Sapphire on January 04, 2006
    I just finished reading the first four chapters, I must say that I am certainly hooked!
    I know how authors love reviews, therefore I felt it my duty to leave you a many thanks, keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - holli on January 03, 2006
    I love this story, and am very glad that you post updates on snapesmut, because i would hate to lose track of this story. keep up the great work and please update soon!!
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  • From ArchNemesis on January 03, 2006
    The last chapter was very heartfelt. I was getting misty eyed. Severus, it would seems, is starting to come around slowly. I hope that he and Harry will be able bond before the week is up. By the way, how old is Harry and how long ago did he defeat Voldemort?

    Excellent work! Can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon!

    Nemesis ^_~
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  • From ANON - Kelley on January 02, 2006
    I love this story, I can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - dancin' monk on January 01, 2006
    i really like this story. please continue writing!
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  • From ANON - Ditzy on December 30, 2005
    This is wonderful. I can't wait to read more.
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