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Reviews for Inside the Blackest Heart (Edit, Not Update)

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - JW on December 23, 2005
    Ch 59 - I agree with Lorelie. I've actually read and enjoyed a few Lucius/Hermione/Severus fics, but the characters in this particular story have turned out very unique. I agree that Hermione doesn't have to sit around waiting for Severus, but she still has standards - there must be other guys besides Lucius. You know, single guys who don't think Muggleborns are Mudbloods, who are discreet about her shagging them, who aren't status whores using the Primordial to increase their status, who respect her, and who helped fight against Voldemort. She just deserves better than this Lucius. If I could pick another character for her to shag in this fic besides Severus (in addition to Severus?), I'd hope for someone like your Marcus Delaluci. Whatever, you know I love you and your fics!
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  • From ANON - Selena on December 23, 2005
    With all these epilogues maybe you should just title them...hehehehe
    Getting really steamy indeed!!
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  • From ANON - lorelie on December 23, 2005
    As much as i really like the idea of a possible LM/HG/SS Lemon extravaganza....I just don't think it fits here. Hermione (although dark in her own right) still seems...whats the word for it....too good, i guess, for polyamory. Maybe thats not the word, but it just doesn't seem to fit with the Hermione in the story.

    Just Voicing an opinion. I'll read the next chapters no matter what. I'm really hooked on Figgy

    Anyway, Ta Ta

    ~Lorelie
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  • From Ms_Figg on December 23, 2005
    Edenia: I appreciate all your thoughtful reviews. They are very clear and well expressed. You take a lot time writing them and that means a lot. Thank you so much.
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  • From ANON - Edania on December 23, 2005
    just saying to ya. Not saying bad about your story with my review. i like hows its coming out now..way differerent from many i read.
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  • From ANON - michelle on December 23, 2005
    why can't she have BOTH of them?!?!
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  • From Ms_Figg on December 23, 2005
    Ok. This is the part of the story where I lose some readers. Thank you for sticking it out this far. In the beginning of this story I said it would be darker than my others. This Hermione and Snape are not a loving couple, no matter how much we wish it were so. Sanpe screws every woman he can and likes it that way. I don't think Hermione should have to adhere to being a good girl while he's a bad boy. I refuse to have every story end the same way. It's boring to write and boring to read. If you want pure HG/SS then you have that up to this point. Go no further. I can't please everyone, so I might as well please myself. (and the panting readers who want Hermione to flip the script) Thanks
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  • From ANON - Edania on December 23, 2005
    oh freak, turn her into a freak. I think what they do is get the drop on her.
    Let me give a better review on this:

    I have to say that i love this story is coming along. I have to also add, i love how you have snape.. not to dark, but not to soft really. What i enjoy in your story, it had alot of action, sex.. yet not to much, but when it did. I was well written and very good and hot! * tries to cool off* And it also has its funny moments. Another thing what i like about you. you finish a story! I have read good SS/HG stories, some good but not finished. I also like ..unlike some stories i read...I do enjoy i nice soft type of snape..I'm a romatic at heart. But i liked how you didn't make too romatic, with the stories i read. some are good, keeping a limit on the romatic.some kinda do a mouse and cat type while others just nothing but romance and make snape too soft..to soon in the story or just too much.
    Though i will say that i enjoy the other snape story you did, that was just, not making him too soft but like the dark hero..Anyway that my full review on what i think of this story so far and my thoughts on it. so well in short, enjoying your story.
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  • From ANON - usagistu on December 23, 2005
    I hope not to see Hermione turn into a total freak. I am a sucker for just SS/hg. NO LM in the picture. But I am sure what ever you do will be good.
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  • From ANON - readme on December 22, 2005
    DONT BE CRUEL. dont be mean. DONT MAKE HERM INTO A WHORE COZ THAT IS WHAT SHE WILL BE IF YOU PLACE THAT NASTY ASS (LUCIUS) WITH SV AND HM. THAST TOO CRUEL. HERM WAS ALWAYS MEANT FOR SEV. I DONT CARE HOW SAPPY THAT SOUNDS COZ ITS DA TRUTH
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  • From ANON - reader on December 22, 2005
    I AGREE WITH JW DON'T RUIN IT AND PLACE MALFOY WITH THE BEST DARN CHARACTAS. LUCIUS SHOULD BE KILLED OFF.






    SEV AND HERM 4 EVA.
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  • From ANON - betwitched on December 22, 2005
    The way this plot is developing you might consider changing the epilogue(s) into a sequel! LOL I don't care for Malfoy much (in fact not at all) but it would be funny for Hermione to wind up with TWO consorts. That would surely take care of her itch!
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  • From ANON - lovethelab on December 22, 2005
    I knew Lucius was more than just a pretty face! I know I would LOVE to be in the middle of that Syltherin sand"witch"! And just imagine the possiblities - - Oh, I better not let me imagination runn away from me, but Lucius and Severus - At the SAME TIME is just about enough to make me faint! Where are my smelling salts??!!?? Please go on with this story (or a new one that is a follow up) I am sure a good time will be had by all. (And I am sure that Severus, being the good friend that he is to Lucius, will have no problem kepping Narcissa company on those evenings Lucius is away from home with Hermione!)
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  • From ANON - beetle juice on December 22, 2005
    I'm kind of a little perplexed by the turn this piece has taken. Still an excellent story mind you, and being an adamant fan of yours, l would have to conclude that this happens to be the best, as l feel the plot has more to offer. However, some of my concerns in relation to the pairings, or should l say groups and possible orgies .. are a tad disturbing. I'm not one to incriminate against LM, as he is a probable favourite of mine, but HG and SS Fan Fic is much more titilating when it deals pre-dominantly with their, and l mean just their .. relationship; which in a nut shell proves to be very complicated on its own.
    Of course l have realised that the majority of the reviewers are most interested in a HG/LM/SS fuck fest, and the idea does seem somewhat appealing, yet l still can not grasp this notion, even though the characterisation is ultimately satisfying, especially Hermione's .. it kicks ass, as an indifferent hermione is an ultra uuber sexpot :P I have read so far everything, and anticipate further posts ..... Hopefully your decision is the best one that will consequentially lead to major creamage ;) lol! Your stories undoubtedly integrate the vital occurrences necessary within a SS and HG Fan fic! Personally l HOPE that HG turns the tables on both despots, SS gets over himself, and LM falls over a cliff >_
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  • From ANON - ccrawley on December 22, 2005
    Yes, both.
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