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Reviews for Inside the Blackest Heart (Edit, Not Update)

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - Myrkrida on December 22, 2005
    I just read chap 49... big, beautiful nose. Hahahahaha! I love it. what a perfect detail to add. this is such a good story. you are a wonderful author. and do i detect a hint of influence from our good friends Rocky and Bullwinkle? Truly classic.
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  • From ANON - just_me on December 22, 2005
    *awww* kind of went off w/ a whisper, not a *bang*. Ok, I'm a romantic & sentimental fool who wants to see Hermione ride off into the sunset with her soulmate Severus *sighs* No chance of that, right? maybe one or two alternate endings, pretty please???
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  • From ANON - LemonLover on December 22, 2005
    A fitting end to this story, and I think it concluded where it needed to, how it really needed to.

    I await your next work with bated typing fingers. :)
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  • From ANON - beetle juice on December 22, 2005
    This needs a sequel, or some form of continuance! The conclusion doesn't cut it, there has to be more to the story when taking into consideration the title 'Inside the Blackest Heart'. Hermione has yet to skim the surface, let alone break into Snape's sordid soul. Opposed to the tragic attempt at a close for this piece the story has been very entertaining and could only possibly be rated any higher with a much more adept ending. Good work though, so far! ;)
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  • From ANON - JW on December 22, 2005
    Ch 55 - AUGH!!!!!!!! There had better be an epilogue, kiddo, 'cuz this is not an adequate conclusion. "...his black heart. There was nothing anyone could do to breech that broken, twisted part of him." Well, she's a Primordial - that means she CAN do things to him, reach "inside the blackest heart" - and who else can understand what she has been through??? Only Harry watched what happened, and even he doesn't fully understand her. (Plus he's too much like a brother.) Perhaps Severus needs a walkabout or something. She needs him!!!! (And I need S&H together in the epilogue...... reader sends author a chocolate-covered fruitcake as bribe....)
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  • From ANON - Megan on December 22, 2005
    *Standing Ovation with lots of clapping* Wow. I don't even know what to say. That was beautiful. You literally just wrote a book. Miss Figg - I wish I could give you a trophy. And good luck with the job-at-home search; I agree with the person that suggested you get paid for writing erotica. Please keep all of us posted if you decide to go for it :)
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  • From ANON - Jen on December 22, 2005
    I don't like your ending, it seems like you just gave up. It seems like there was so much more you could have done. Quite disappointing, yet the story was good. Maybe you could make a sequel?
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 22, 2005
    Awww that's a sad way to end it. Kinda disappointing. :(
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  • From ANON - Maela on December 22, 2005
    Man...i just can't stop thinking about this ending. It's so sad! Actually...you know what I hope will happen. I hope Severus will see how she kept her promise and didn't try to enslave him. And that ultimately, he'll come back to her.
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  • From ANON - denise on December 22, 2005
    chp 55: very interesting end. i cant say wether i liked it or not...i mean it was well written but a bit sad.definatley sadder than any of ur other stories, but then again this story is definately different and by far the best too. well, im sorry this is such a confusing review, but i think it will take me a bit to see how i really feel. maybe the epilouge will help...
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  • From ANON - nessie on December 22, 2005
    i loved it so much i cried.
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  • From ANON - luvssnape on December 22, 2005
    Oh! I wanted so much for them to end up together. No one can measure up to Severus. But a very good story indeed!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 22, 2005
    You always have wonderfull stories and I also love how quickly you post. You never leave me hanging. Thanks, I can't wait to read the epilogue.
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  • From ANON - Maela on December 22, 2005
    So good! But so sad! I can't make up my mind if I want her to eventually find someone else or be content with what she had with Severus. In some ways I can kind of see her has an Elizabeth I, who ultimately chose to be alone and make her kingdom the focus of her life. But...I really like a happy and lovey ending. Can't wait to see what you'll do
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  • From ANON - willa on December 22, 2005
    i loved it. incredible story, so well written. im so sad its over..
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