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Reviews for Inside the Blackest Heart (Edit, Not Update)

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - lilith on December 18, 2005
    Wow, you are a fast writer. I missed your last update, and I always thought I was a crazy fanfic junkie. Ever since you wrote that scene with Narcissa, I wondered if you would bring Lucius into this somehow. The list with the married Deatheaters really gave me ideas! Seems it wasn't meant to be. Or perhaps you could make it a threesome? I'd like for Lucius to renounce Voldemort and join Hermione. But I think she will be pissed off when he brings Harry to Voldemort. Sigh. What about Draco and Harry? They could come to Voldy together and succumb to the influence of the place...
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  • From ANON - droxy on December 18, 2005
    nicely done, youmanaged this without really compromising Snape, and yes the double standard ridden bastard is territorial. I think it is amusing HG is following Snape's advice and it torques him. Though I wishhe was more honest with her about Voldemort.
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  • From ANON - Kasiie on December 18, 2005
    That was a teriffic idea!! I can't wait to see how tender he can be
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  • From ANON - a_reader on December 18, 2005
    Interesting! I llike that she played him psychologically, and if he was going to capitulate to it at all -- at least he was upfront about his reasons *why*


    I still think that she should/may/might find that she doesn't really want what she thinks she does, and you do let both of them allow that she wants the tender *and* the hard. I like your dark Snape very much, and I shouldn't like to see him go "ooooooooooooh, this is what I've been missing my whole life." That's why I really like the two things you did here: she wonders what he may have been like before prolonged exposure to Voldermort's "carnality" (and he acknowledges that he "knows how to kiss"), and you let him, albeit reluctantly, allow that he can do what she likes as long as it is his choice to do so. Choice plays a huge part.


    All in all, a great blend of all of our hopes.
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  • From ANON - JW on December 18, 2005
    Ch 41 - PS - so was Hermione always intending to use this tactic to manipulate Severus into giving in??? Not another Dumbly, please!
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  • From ANON - JW on December 18, 2005
    Ch 41 - very good! I like the way you combined all those aspects. Definitely he'd be in big trouble if Voldy (or Dumbly) caught wind that Hermy wasn't satisfied with Severus. And it would be suicide for her to let other Death Eaters touch her, just one more thing that Voldy has on her that she "owes" him for. She really should be concentrating on developing her powers, with Harry anxious to storm on the scene any time now. And Severus should help prepare her, teaching her Death Eater tactics as well as more Dumbly tactics. If he does that, she'll have more respect for him, thus increasing his chances for survival and freedom. Umm.... I'm not anxious to find out, but what IS that Voldy doing with Pettigrew?
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  • From ANON - septentrion on December 18, 2005
    ch 41 : brillant ! I was sure Severus could be bent to Hermione's will without being forced to. And he may enjoy it more than he initially thought...
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  • From ANON - denise on December 18, 2005
    i like the idea! please update soon!
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  • From ANON - serket on December 18, 2005
    Well, we already know that Hermione is quite capable of using her power over Snape to gain her own pleasure, but at the same time she
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  • From ANON - kira on December 18, 2005
    I don't know what you should do - I wouldn't want to ruin it with my ideas. You should keep going it's really good.
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  • From ANON - French girl on December 18, 2005
    First I would like to say that I agree with one of your readers when she says she would like to read something written by you which is not fanfiction. It's not the matter of the day but it's something I wanted to ask you too.
    Concerning Miss Granger, if I was her, I would like to keep Snape for myself and try to change his manners and maybe a little part of his heart. I would use Voldemort to make him jealous.
    It's not very original, but I'm not Mrs FIGG after all.

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  • From ANON - JW on December 18, 2005
    Ch 40 - PS - even if he gives her the "gentle" for a bit, I think she has outgrown much of the need for it. She's a powerful Primordial, not a baby - she should realize that soon. Also, by demanding Severus do something he doesn't want, she should realize she's in danger of becoming a new dictator, just as bad as Voldy and Dumbly - so she needs Severus to stand up to her. Perhaps they can take turns dishing it out to the other.
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  • From ANON - JW on December 18, 2005
    Ch 40 - (I haven't read any other reviews for this chapter, so if I echo someone else's comments, it's not intentional.) I think Severus should act next - make her a deal that if she promises to not fall for Voldy's lies or Dumbly's lies, and to not try to control Severus after the war, Severus will try to give her what she wants now, but he reminds her that any "gentleness" is just an act for him. She will respect that he is still the only one who tells her the truth, so after they do the "gentle" stuff she rewards him by letting him have her the "non-gentle" way, which she still enjoys (especially with her new powers). Hopefully, Pettigrew doesn't overhear any of this. And the Grangers are still being protected? Did she ever find out that two Death Eaters died fighting Dumbly at her parents' home? 'Cuz Voldy could use that to try to curry her favor.
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  • From ANON - mekareami on December 18, 2005
    I think she should force him to be fair, not gentle. He can have his fun, but has to make sure she enjoys herself as well ;)
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  • From ANON - Mikki on December 18, 2005
    First I want to say that I have read most of your stories and they are WOW! You are very talented and I would love to see anything you have written that is not fan-fic. Sorry I have yet to review before now. As for your question to Snape and Hermione, hmm well I am thinking that Hermione wants Snape to kiss her and hold her however she likes him forceful, she wants him to be rough with her. My humble opinion only. Great job on this story. I am not usually a big fan of evil Dumbledore but you have written him well in this one, and oooh well spoken Voldemort you have here, very charismatic just the way I always pictured him. One more suggestion if you think you can work it in. When Harry is brought to meet with Hermione maybe he can succumb to the carnal feelings in the manor? Thanks for another awesome story!
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