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Reviews for Inside the Blackest Heart (Edit, Not Update)

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - jbt on December 18, 2005
    do half and half! start sweet and comforting, and end rough and nasty. that way they both kind of get what they want. :)
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  • From ANON - Marsha on December 18, 2005
    PS, Speaking of perverse, sex scene with Voldemort, please, please, please. If you hadn't described his, ahem, sexual attributes, I wouldn't have all these really decadent images running through my head.

    You really have become my favorite author. You write, like I would want to, if I could, which I can't.
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  • From ANON - Brianne on December 18, 2005
    I've been on and off with this story...it's dark, and I'm not normally much of a dark fic person...but I find myself enjoying it none the less....I vote for letting him be himself....
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  • From ANON - Tasha on December 18, 2005
    I think Hermione should dominate Snape, it really pisses him off!! but i'm torn between seeing what snape would be like as a gentle lover, maybe he'll like it???
    p.s I LOVE THIS STORY!
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  • From ANON - Marsha on December 18, 2005
    If a Primordial has the ability to do spell-less magic, then she also has the ability to change a man's heart. I don't want to go with the fluffy, as this fic has satisfied a perverse place in my heart. I'd like to see a fluffy lemon chapter, with Snape screaming all the way, followed by Hermione's realization that she doesn't want to follow Dumbledore and Voldemort's lead by forcing/changing Snape.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 18, 2005
    I don't disagree with Hermione making Snape kiss her. However, I don't think she'd find as much pleasure in gentle lovemaking as she would in rough sex. So in my opinion, maybe Hermione could order Snape to kisss her and let her touch him, but then excellerate to brutle fucking.
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  • From ANON - Laura on December 18, 2005
    Since the true Snape turns her on he should do it his way, only he should be 'encouraged' to please her in the ways she likes and to let her also take control again. He did actually like it, after all. :-)

    I'm kind of shocked to be thinking this but....I think I'd like to see Voldy do Hermione! *sorry!* Then she can come into her powers and kill him! That whole serpent-cock thing is so very interesting!
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  • From ANON - septentrion on December 18, 2005
    ch 40 : I think Hermione could get some more control over Severus if she lets him express his true nature in bed. The way you write their interaction, I'm sure he'll kiss her willingly (or nearly willingly) soon. And I must admit I like reading smut ;)
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  • From ANON - luvssnape on December 18, 2005
    Because I love romance I would want to see Snape be gentle with her. But it would be cool to see some of his inner monologue while he is doing it. That way you can see the real severus still.
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  • From ANON - Ms_Figg on December 18, 2005
    Wow. I am really impressed with the thoughtful responses (and the little plot bunnies you guys are trying to put in). I thank you all for your opinios and ideas. I think I know what I am going to do, incorporating a bit of this and that from all of you.

    Edania: It isn't that I didn't know what to write, I just wanted to do something different and involve my readers. They invest a lot of time reading my work and its a way to feel closer to them, and let them know I care what they think. As for Harry I can't do anything with him yet because not enough time has passed yet. I don't think Lucius will jump on it immediately. He'd want to make sure it wasn't a trap. But I will be returning to Harry soon.

    Thankyou all so much!

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  • From ANON - raeann on December 18, 2005
    hmmm.. good question. i say, back out. it's too evil for her to force him, and it doesn't seem like the right mood for rough-n-tough... haha i really have no clue. awesome chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - Pam on December 18, 2005
    First of great post, you're a very gifted writer. I know that you don't want this to be romantic, but snape sometimes seems a little out of sorts if he thinks about someone else with Hermione, maybe you can explore that some here, like maybe tell him she's ready to explore her options and is thinking of looking at another deatheater...who knows, he may not be romantic, but there are other sorts of love out there...just a thought. Keep up the great work, and post again soon. I also love how you're involving Harry in this story. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - DawnEB on December 18, 2005
    Oooo, decisions, decisions. Of the various options available, I think I'd like to see something like Hermione showing Snape what she needs. At the moment he has no real idea about reciprocal feelings, having never had a chance to experience them. I think she should introduce him to the sensuality of touch through some kind of magical link. Make him lie there while she touches him, finding what (if anything) he likes, then get him to touch/kiss her in a similar way so he can feel what it does to her. Then they can get back to the hard and heavy sex ;D
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 18, 2005
    I think she should let him be himself or back out of the situation. If she doesn't, she's giving in again to that control and that's not necessarily a good thing. I think you should have her show a sense of maturity and wisdom that comes with her powers.
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  • From ANON - willa on December 18, 2005
    she should took advantage of the situation, force him to be a gentle lover. maybe he'll like it, against his will of course.
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