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Reviews for Inside the Blackest Heart (Edit, Not Update)

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - JW on December 16, 2005
    Ch 34 - and the Grangers' house is unprotected (Dumbly could kill them in retribution?), and Harry is still unconscious at Hogwarts unless someone - Dobby? - finds him and wakes him up. I will assume Severus packed up his stuff, 'cuz he has no Hogwarts job now! I think Hermione will need to go out for breaks, rather than be cooped up all day and night with Death Eaters. And she needs to develop her powers more. Hmm.... does she have room in hre quarters for Severus to sleep at her feet? Heh! No, seriously, if I were her I'd want someone I can TRUST with me at all times - Delilah won't cut it.
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  • From ANON - firewall on December 16, 2005
    Ch 34 - This is going to be interesting...I wonder if Hermione will be able to tap into Voldemort's thoughts. Will Lucius be able to restrain himself in her presence? I can just see him inviting a Cruciatus by mouthing off or perhaps a little Primordial retribution.
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  • From ANON - MMiercoles on December 16, 2005
    I enjoy this story more and more with each chapter. I do love an unrepentantly nasty Snape. Thank you so much for writing and sharing it with us!
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  • From ANON - Pamela on December 16, 2005
    www.bill-me-later.com
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  • From ANON - Mayken on December 16, 2005
    I'm rather glad you didn't stop this story after the shaging, it's starting to turn in to something rather interesting and different.

    I'm glad with all of Hermione's incoming powers you havent made her mary sue ish, that would be a bit of a sad thing for such a good story.

    please please keep it up..
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  • From ANON - firewall on December 16, 2005
    Ch 33 - Darn it Harry where is your head? He was showing such promise in this story...he indicated that he didn't trust Dumbledore and paid the price...Now Hermione has lost valuable information. He needs to show a littleof the Slytherin the Sorting Hat saw years ago.
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  • From ANON - Annabel on December 16, 2005
    WOW! Well I'm well hooked now..reel me in.
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  • From ANON - droxy on December 16, 2005
    EEP! evil dumbledore! EEP!
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  • From ANON - firewall on December 16, 2005
    Ch32 - Okay, he is one sneaky son of a gun. Making sure the muggle sees him in the light so she can report what she saw in the night. Hmmm can't wait to see if the deatheaters take him alive or if he takesthem out.
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  • From ANON - Ramos on December 16, 2005
    This story is freaking AWESOME! I love evil Dumbledore stories, and this one is a corker. Poor Harry is just a step too late in his suspicions, just a touch too trusting in the Headmaster... hasn't he been listening to Moody at all?
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  • From ANON - droxy on December 16, 2005
    it takes a deft hand to do dark severus and pullit off with hermione... this line says it all


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  • From ANON - Snapelover11 on December 16, 2005
    Ahhh! You can not stop there! You must continue! Please......
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  • From ANON - droxy on December 16, 2005
    finally had timeto read this. Interestinghow Snape is still dark but in his own way is helping Hermione.
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  • From ANON - pax on December 16, 2005
    how could you make dd such a wicked one,he died for the light by snape's hand for goodness sake!
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  • From ANON - Julia on December 16, 2005
    This is an amazing story. Snape is in character and Dumbledore is evil. What an amazing plot. I love how often you update and I wish you to update some more.
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