Click Here!

Reviews for Inside the Blackest Heart (Edit, Not Update)

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - bewitched on December 16, 2005
    What can I tell you . . . I stopped reading Margaret Truman's 'Murder at Union Station' to see if you'd posted a new chapter!! G*d, Dumbledore is such a nasty piece of work.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - K on December 16, 2005
    verra verra good, can't wait for more.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - JW on December 16, 2005
    Ch 33 - urgh, yes Harry was indeed VERY stupid - he knew what he was seeing was wrong and yet he ignored his own feelings. I just hope Severus wasn't wrong to make Hermione wait; I think they shoud've just left, checked on her parents. Hmm, maybe the surviving Death Eaters will tell Voldy, who will summon Severus.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - angel on December 16, 2005
    ohhh sh** he is pissed .. i hope they can make it out ok .. and i hope harry doesn't get in to much trouble and i hope the remember what mione told him ... i cant wait in till the next chapter ..later for now

    angel
    Report Review

  • From ArachneNonafel on December 16, 2005
    Wow!! You update quick!!! I love it! Keep going!! WOoooooo!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Maela on December 16, 2005
    Stupid Harry! What on earth was he thinking?!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Pam on December 16, 2005
    OH, this is getting so good. Great post, please post again soon. Thanks.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Edania on December 16, 2005
    Oh damn, what next! Oh they better get running now! He seems really mad.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - a_reader on December 16, 2005
    Ch. 33: Harry stupid? :x


    Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh thank the deity of choice that you update so fast, because the stress is just too much ;)
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Talene on December 16, 2005
    Excellent!! I wondered when this would occur. Bravo!!!!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - French girl on December 16, 2005
    I thought Voldemort was the bad one, and after that it was Dumbledore. Now I have an awful doubt, you made me realize that they are so similar indeed.
    Every time I think I know where you go, you go straight in the opposite direction.
    I don't understand how you can write in two weeks what would take a year of work.I wonder if you are not yourself a witch.
    My only regret is that my english is so poor that I can't tell you how much I love your story. But thanks to you, I improve it every day in a very nice way.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - firewall on December 16, 2005
    ch 31 Well I would say that you needed to emphasize the relationship Hermione and Snape have. I think there may be some out there who think this may have a happy, fluffy ending. I can't see this happening at least not between Hermione and Snape.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - just_me on December 16, 2005
    *gasp!!!* OMG OMG OMG!!! what to do??? I'm on tenterhooks
    Report Review

  • From ANON - a_reader on December 16, 2005
    "Harry plans to tell Hermione he knows she is sleeping with Snape. He doesn't know why Dumbledore is dressed as a deatheater, it could be he is on a mission or something, that's why he's waiting. He knows nothing about Hermione's parents being in danger."


    Even so, from what we've read so far, we know Harry has deep doubts about Dumbledore allowing Hermione to make her own plans, or to let her go spend a year with her parents. ... If I were him, seeing the headmaster head out in Death Eater robes would have sent up very loud warning sirens in my head. I confess to not being a huge fan of Harry, so his sitting there and waiitng to spot Dumbledore's return is in keeping with his, um, *mumbles*
    Report Review

  • From ANON - a_reader on December 16, 2005
    Ch. 32: Ha. Snape is majorly going to have to change his tune if he wants to get anywhere with the new and improved Miss Granger. I find myself not wanting him to though. It would be too much of a cop-out for him to capitulate and turn all "i have seen the light." I trust in your superior skills, however, to bring about some change in their dynamic without getting all 'fluffy bunny.'


    I wonder how Dumbledore thinks that he could control a Primordial, even if he did orchestrate her "dependence" on him. Clearly, given this interaction with Severus, a skilled Occlumens, she can effortlessly discern thoughts -- at least those concerning her. How on earth could Dumbledore think he could pull something over her? Does he not fully understand the full range of a Primordial's powers? (Allowing, of course, that not even we do at this point). Ahhhhhh questions! I love it :)
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!