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Reviews for Inside the Blackest Heart (Edit, Not Update)

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - JW on December 15, 2005
    Ch 26-27 - I am SO glad that he got to re-do the dream the right way! Hmm, now will she use this method to give him more "previews of coming attractions".... She needs to be more careful about showing her powers; those two kids she caught will be telling all their friends about it, and even if they exaggerate, it'll arouse suspicion from Death Eaters' kids at the school. Thanks for posting!!! (PS - I do hope Severus has her parents protected by now - Dumbly is not to be trusted!)
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  • From ANON - Pam on December 15, 2005
    Great post, please post again soon. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - Arden Rose on December 15, 2005
    This is one of the best fanfics I have ever had the pleasure to read, Ms Figg. Your work has a sense of plot that so few writers lack, but the blend between romance and reality is perfectly mixed. I believe you have whetted my appetite for S & M, fortunately. Keep writing, and I will keep reviewing.

    Very Impressed,
    AR
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  • From ANON - Hypatia on December 15, 2005
    I've held off on writing any reviews for this story as I wanted to see how it progressed, but after reading Prince Dmitri's comment, I really blew a gasket. Does this guy know the meaning of "Fan Fiction"?? There are professional writers on this site who have indeed written original works of fiction, but who choose to write fanfic just for the fun of it, and for the satisfaction it gives other readers.

    JKR is a supremely lucky lady in that she happened to grow extremely wealthy by giving us all a wonderful world filled with magic and populated by characters which sprung from her head, but let's face it, she'll probably never win the Booker Prize. I think she is probably supremely flattered (and I've heard that she does read fanfic, if not the smutty ones) that there are gifted writers out there who take the initiative to borrow her characters and give them a depth which is often missing in the HP books (perhaps due to space limitations, or perhaps because she would never want children excluded from her primary audience).

    I doubt that there are many fanfic writers here who live in their own castle in Scotland, or whose personal wealth surpasses that of the Queen of England. They're not making one dime from the literary gifts they bestow on others, and that is precisely the point.
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  • From ArachneNonafel on December 15, 2005
    You too are heartless and cruel to end this here! ARGH! hehe More?
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  • From ANON - angel on December 15, 2005
    hmm will she be there .. please please more ..

    angel
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  • From ANON - ccrawley on December 15, 2005
    Loved what happened in the dream where Snape was powerless. Oh such a set up for vengence. More please.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 15, 2005
    i'm not in this for the lemons either b/c the dynamics b/t the characters are sooo good! can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - calamitysandra on December 15, 2005
    If you can`t I will call it Lemons for you.

    Yay Lemons!!!

    Maybe the juice will be sqished a bit bruttally, but Lemons none the less.

    Great.

    Sandra
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  • From ANON - willa on December 15, 2005
    i absolutely love your story. its one of the best ive ever read on this site. please please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Edania on December 15, 2005
    Oh another hot chapter, really i have to say, i don't care much on the sex, really. I'm just caught up with the drama between these two. For the next part, i don't maybe a lemon , but with one or not, its still damn good and i want to know, will she do something get snape back for what he made her do. i say little payback on her part is in order.
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  • From ANON - Inspire on December 15, 2005
    "He had just had forced disembodied sex with a Primordial. And she had left him hanging."
    I would have expected him to storm her room and wake her up by impaling her in retribution. :) Great chapter!
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  • From ANON - dryade on December 15, 2005
    Uhhhh! Sounds like he'll make her pay for it!
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  • From ANON - beeky63 on December 15, 2005
    How dare you lay claim to JK Rowlings characters! One would never expect to see such a thing in a Severus and Hermione sub-catagory of a Harry Potter fan fiction website. (If Prince Dimitri is reading this, please note the very heavy use of sarcasm).

    Anyway back to reality. This is fantastic as usual. My personal opinion is that this is your best story EVER, and that is saying something because all your stories are GREAT. Keep up the great work.
    Toodles.
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  • From ANON - denise on December 15, 2005
    NICE CHAPTER! i lke the whole dream and hermione's double thing! update soon.
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