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Reviews for Inside the Blackest Heart (Edit, Not Update)

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - JW on December 15, 2005
    Ch 25 - omigosh, that was great! Poor Severus, but definitely a neat way for you to be creative yet satisfy whoever asked you for a "dream sequence." So, we can ask you for stuff, eh? Heh-heh! I want Dumbly and Voldy to BOTH get thwacked for abusing Severus - and I'd like Hermione to do the honors on Dumbly. Hey, Severus would be a good "consort" for Primordial Queen Hermione, since she can control him (sorta). Again, doesn't have to be romantic. Whatever, as long as you keep writing, I'll be very happy! Thanks for the new chapter, Ms_Figg!
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  • From dark1starr on December 15, 2005
    Have two complete stories under my belt. Serenity and The Blood of three kings. They are originals but I still think they are good, even if some people only deem Hermione/snape fics worth reading.

    I can agree that Ms_Figg does great using stories already made and twisting them around o much it adds an element of her own into them. I may always think creating an entire story is harder, but no offense, I like originals mostly. Everyone on the site has their niche. There are other ficsa I like to read that aren't. I'll occasionally read Ms_figgs pieces..as well as a few friends of mine.

    Anyways, the story is different at least. Plus youre not copying right out of Mrs. Rowlings works. I still prefer The claiming of Cassandra over your other works. I love the effort that went into making the original characters and the plot!

    Toodles!

    Starfyre
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  • From ANON - calamitysandra on December 15, 2005
    Poor, poor Snape. Hihi!
    But he was left standing not hanging, was he not? :D

    Sandra
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  • From ANON - angel on December 15, 2005
    ~lol~poor snape maybe she will come to you soon ... please more that was great ... i love it .. in till next time later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Edania on December 15, 2005
    oh thats good one. I think thats what he gets for being so rough with her. A good chapters like always.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 15, 2005
    chapter 25 - that was too funny. snape certainly got what he deserved.
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  • From ANON - a_reader on December 15, 2005
    Ahahahahaha, serves him right, indeed! I would like a bit of that primordial power, myself, lol.


    Very nice to wake up to a chapter update, and I have to echo all the reviewers of yesterday -- this fic has swiftly become one of my favorites.
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  • From ANON - fruity on December 15, 2005
    i'm glad you're taking this story further, and hope it continues. definitely one of the best i've read, i also love the pace of it.

    can't wait for the next chapter again!!
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  • From ANON - Ms_Figg on December 15, 2005
    Luci: As far as I know the line's original. But you know how things can get stuck in the back of your mind. But it's a good sentiment. By all means, share it :) Thanks for the review.
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  • From ANON - calamitysandra on December 15, 2005
    This story is getting better and better!
    A really unique one.

    Sandra
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  • From ANON - Mandy Leo on December 15, 2005
    hey! i like your stories! please write the next chapter soon!
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  • From ANON - luci on December 15, 2005
    Glad to find a writer who updates (and finishes!) stories. I sometimes don't read a posting until I see "complete" because a partial story is depressing to me - I know writers need feedback, but boring ol' readers like me need a whole story.
    I've saved your quote about friends not counting what they do for each other. It's one of those lines that should be shared (is it original?).
    About the story line itself...I really like evil Snape...and even more evil Dumbledore! Makes me wonder if JKR isn't just waiting to make her readers say "Oh no - she fooled us! The good guys are really the bad guys!". I've always seen Snape as more of a schizophrenic than really evil. This Snape reminds me of "that guy" in high school that all the girls wanted to rehabilitate.

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  • From ANON - lorelie on December 15, 2005
    More Figgy! I DEMAND it of you! You are the only thing helping me through my finals(or should i say helping me procrastinate ;) )
    This is one of your best yet.

    *Cheers*
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  • From ArachneNonafel on December 15, 2005
    I eagerly check for updates every so often during the day...so anxious am I to read your tale. No rushing a masterpiece though. *grins* Excellect!!!
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  • From slygriff21 on December 15, 2005
    So Hermione is finally controlling her powers. This is good. Can't wait for you to update again! Please do so again and soon!

    Your biggest fan,
    Tiffany
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