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Reviews for Inside the Blackest Heart (Edit, Not Update)

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - Talene on December 14, 2005
    OMG!!! You stopped!!! NOOooooooooooo! Don't stop here!! hehe Sorry for the drama. Me and some friends never did believe Dumbledore was all that or all there. Great work!! Please continue!!
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  • From ANON - JW on December 14, 2005
    Ch 21 - Harry usually is not my favorite character, but I might be able to tolerate this one. Hmm, what if Harry defeats Voldemort (maybe with help from Severus), and Hermione defeats Dumbledore (with help from Fawkes?).... I would prefer that Hermione evade Dumbly's clutches, especially as she doesn't yet know how to use her new powers. And Severus better be VERY careful when he gets back, as she now knows what a Primordial is, and can guess that Voldy may want her as much as Dumbly! Thanks for the new chapter.
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  • From ccrawley on December 14, 2005
    12:43a More please. Liked the involvement of Harry and how he has been manipulated and is aware of Dumbledore's actions.
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  • From Ms_Figg on December 14, 2005
    Megan: I assure you, Snape is still a self-serving, black-hearted, cruel bastard. It is only your perception of him that has changed as the story continues because you can see his motivations. You can sort of understand him now. But trust me, he wouldn't care if you understood him or not.
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  • From ANON - angel on December 14, 2005
    man i how snape get to her before the headmaster dose...and that is he going to do ??? please please please more more .. the is great ... later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - a_reader on December 14, 2005
    Uh-oh, I'm worried about the Grangers...
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  • From ANON - Megan on December 14, 2005
    Damn... this is intense. I'm scared of Dumbledore. It's fascinating, but I do have to say... I think it's funny that you've manipulated the story so that Snape is actually coming off as a great person who's been very wronged. I guess it's hard to write "I'm Snape and I'm evil" for more than a couple chapters - characters develop. Anyway, lovely work. VERY interested to see where this goes.
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  • From ANON - mekareami on December 14, 2005
    I love the dark side of the headmaster you are painting ;)

    I guess we can assume her parents/family are toast now... I don't recall that she told Snape what her plans for the summer are though so I can see her making the leap of logic to not blame him for something he didn't know about.

    I am enjoying your story emensely, hope to see more soon!
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  • From ANON - aeltiera on December 14, 2005
    Ms_Figg...wow love the direction the story is taking...though I fear for Hermione's parents...by mentioning them Hermione may have brought them to notice to Dumbledore. Could Dumbledore kill them off, make it look like Snape and the Deatheaters did it, all to solidify Hermione's alligence to the Order? You know some military people and rulers throughout history have justified the use of evil tactics to make a "better" future for society...think the French Revolution...beheadings via guillotine all to "change" society for the better...doing evil things at one point in time to ensure a particular outcome in the future...the question is would Dumbledore stoop to any means to ensure the future as he sees it, much like Voldemort? Resort to any means of manipulation with Hermione...? Thanks again for the story!
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  • From ANON - MMiercoles on December 14, 2005
    I love where you're taking this! This is getting me through finals - I'm always excited to see your new chapters. And for law school, that's highly impressive. Thanks!
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  • From slygriff21 on December 14, 2005
    Oh man! Hermione better watch her back. What is she going to do? Is she going to go to Severus for help? I hope Severus will be able to help not only himself but Hermione as well. I can't wait to read what happens next. Please update again and soon.

    Your biggest fan,
    Tiffany
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  • From ccrawley on December 14, 2005
    11pm Wow!! Snape is seeming kind of soft. Dumbledore really needs to get it. Maybe him and Voldie can off each other and leave the rest of the world to peace. Hope Hermione gets her lover again and again. Looking forward to her meeting Voldie. More pretty please with sugar on top.
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  • From ANON - JW on December 13, 2005
    Ch 20 - yikes! She didn't see it - Dumbledore DID "try to manipulate her into staying and doing what he wanted" - his hints about Voldemort attacking the Muggle world, saying Harry needs her, reminding her of all her friends, saying Snape is evil. I just hope she never goes against Severus - remember the vision, girl! Dumbledore was yanking your chain! Eeps!
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  • From ANON - Aurora on December 13, 2005
    Well, there go Hermione's parents. I LOVE this story. . .yes it's dark, yes people aren't nice, yes it's fan-friggin-tastic! I absolutely can not wiat to read more! Keep up the wonderful, wonderful work. ~A
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  • From ANON - Pam on December 13, 2005
    Great post, please post again soon. Thanks.
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