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Reviews for Inside the Blackest Heart (Edit, Not Update)

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - calamitysandra on December 12, 2005
    Go, kick Dumbledores ass, Hermione!
    And while at it, get Moldieshorts, too!

    Thanks for continuing this story, I am impatiently waiting to see were it is going.

    Sandra

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  • From ANON - Edania on December 12, 2005
    ohhhh what next..will snape go over the edge and push her to dark side, or will he end up, fucked up in the ned. no one knows.
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  • From ANON - aeltiera on December 12, 2005
    Interesting how this chapter has refocused the story...glad you decided to continue with it past a PWP. I think it has great potential, especially for introducing the dangerous dichotomy between Snape and Dumbledore for Hermione's alliegence. Who will win her over and whose side will she ultimately end up on. I love the thought of an evil Dumbledore since I have read very few where he is portrayed that way...the way you are setting up the story is almost like Hermione is caught between a proverbial "rock" and a hard place. If she is starting to come into her own powers and starting realize other people's manipulations of her, how is she going to react to Dumbledore, to her friends and teachers, and most importantly, to Snape, who is really the only one who has been honest with her. Can't wait to see where you take the rest of the story!
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  • From Ms_Figg on December 12, 2005
    sodomisos con Severus: Er...thank you for that? I seriously considered deleting this lengthy er...I don't think review is the right word...but maybe someone will get something out of it??? I've never yet deleted a comment from anyone unless it was doubled so...it will stay. It has to be one of the strangest comments (outside of Voldy) that I've seen so far.
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  • From ANON - angel on December 12, 2005
    man ... how is that happen .... the polish dry up ... mione rebelling .... and what will happen to snape.....please please more.. later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Snapesslave on December 12, 2005
    Hey Ms_Figg, doing good so far. I was on the fence about you continuing but I'm glad you did. I do like the occasional angsty story and this one is fitting the bill nicely. The polish is her Primordial powers beginning as Dumbledore feared. She thought it and it happened, right? I can't wait unitl Hermione realizes her true potential, providing of course that Dumbledore doesn't get his way and have her turn all goody-goody again. Maybe another "session" with Snape would cement her mind?

    Snapes slave
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  • From ANON - ccrawley on December 12, 2005
    10:05am Would be nice to see how far Hermione can take her darkside. It would be really nice to see her mess with Dumbledore's plans for her--of course, in a sneaky way. What will the Potion Master do to her for getting caught?
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  • From ANON - septentrion on December 12, 2005
    ch 13 : your PWP is certainly worth a PWithPlot ! I would be curious to see how Hermione will react to Albus' "management" of people and if she'll explore her dark side further...with Snape of course. That idea of blackmail has potential you see.
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  • From ANON - Iris on December 12, 2005
    Dear Ms Figg, I'm so happy that you have decided to go on with this story. I would like to know if Hermione will become more.. evil, or dark perhaps. A slytherin act of Hermione indeed, will Snape confront her with her actions, and will she 'mis-use' her good name to do some things.. and what then? And will she stand up against Dumbledore? You should keep writing this story because I think there is a bigger issue to be written in this tale. A female voldemort is maybe a bit 'over the top' but I see her as a much more greater wizard than Voldemort was when he was young, and maybe she will be a greater Slytherin than everyone 'cause of her gryffindor nature, maybe the sortinghat should re-sort her, and everyone she knows to see whether she really is gryffidor.. well just keep writing!! You are so good at it and this story is just going somewhere deeper, just getting better, love, Iris
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  • From ANON - Lady_dark_star on December 12, 2005
    I like how this has been going, every time I come here I look and see if you've wrote any thing new.
    Keep it up :)
    your writings make me come back every time :)
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  • From ANON - angel on December 12, 2005
    oops you got busted .... so what is snape going to do to mione.. please please more ....later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - LemonLover on December 12, 2005
    In a very odd way, I like this, and I'm usually not a fan of the really-really dark stuff.

    Please, Ma'am, may I have another?
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  • From ANON - JW on December 12, 2005
    Ch 13 - yes, yes, yes!!!! The story continues! Ooh, I am looking forward to Dumbledore (and Lucius) getting their just desserts. And I bet Hermione can be very creative in leaving "evidence" to support Severus' planted false info, although he will have to remind her to not get caught. Hmm, what kind of "rewards" will Severus give Hermione.... THANK YOU for continuing this story!
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  • From ANON - beeky63 on December 12, 2005
    Wow! That was incredibly HOT. I would like to see more smut with our favourite couple, but it seems to me that this would be a good place to end this story. However it opens itself up nicely (no pun intended) for a sequel. Whatever you choose to do will be good anyway.
    Toodles.
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  • From ANON - bridges2 on December 12, 2005
    Please continue the story so we can see just how they can get back at Albus.
    bridges2
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