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Reviews for Inside the Blackest Heart (Edit, Not Update)

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - Angels_Odyssey on December 12, 2005
    I don't usually review stories (I know, shame on me) but I felt in this instance, I must.

    Please, please continue this story. I would like to see Hemione rebel against Dumbledore and even more, I would like to see her go back to her Potions Master for more domination.

    Snape will remain a dark character, but he will have a submissive Hermione as a reward for his service to the light.

    Basically, this story is feeding my own masochistic tendencies.

    PS I think I have read all your stories and I would just like to say I love them all.

    Keep up the good work...You rock!!!
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  • From ANON - Snapelover11 on December 12, 2005
    You know my thoughts already, I find it intriguing that Hermione might turn her back on what is "expected" of her. Like I said, it is acceptable for us to write fics where SS is dark but he gets turned. Since you have already scared some readers away (though I can't figure out why), you might as well go for the gold and venture into unchartered territory. A final frontier for the queen of SS/HG fics. (Yes, you retain that title with me) Why not? We can a;lways return to our loveable SS later. Perhaps reach into the darkness and continue on and let's see Hermione get darker. Not just sexually, for we already see/know her capabilities there. But in life too. This is fiction after all.

    Am I trying to sway you? Yes. I think if anyone can pull this subject off, it's you. You have developed a story line that can lead us there plausibly and do a fine job of it. I await your decision. Whatever it may be, I did like this, but it needs some relolusion. Either an epi or continue on getting darker. How dark can Figgy get? I wonder.....
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  • From ANON - SnapesPet30 on December 12, 2005
    That was great! Personally I think Hermione should rebel against the old coot, he would deserve what ever she dishes out at him. *Grins* Maybe you can write just one more chapter to wrap things up or something I don't know its up to you.
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  • From ANON - Edania on December 12, 2005
    I say keep going with it, i mean there alot more things you can explore in this story . IBut then again where it is now, is somewhat good, but i think you can explore some more ideas, , how well herm, will react to snape, the next day? will she beg for me, or stay away from him? lots of ideas
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  • From ANON - firewall on December 12, 2005
    As tempting as it is, I would seriously consider stopping here. The story stands well just here and where could you take them. Surely you can come up with another story to explore Albus's interesting side.
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  • From ANON - Carol on December 12, 2005
    Ohhhh please don't end it here. There could be so much more. Its a great fic.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 12, 2005
    If I've a proper estimation of how guys like your pragmatic and somewhat evil Dumbledore deal with things, next step is Dumbledore talks with her alone, to make sure she won't be making a fuss about what happened.
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  • From ArachneNonafel on December 12, 2005
    Please, please, pleasepleaseplease....update and continuee this story!!!! I love it!!
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  • From ANON - keesli on December 12, 2005
    I would love it if you kept the story going. After what albus said about muggleborns on training, I had it in my head that hermione had heard and would go herself as a muggleborn in order to help snape, the order, whoever. Of course, I have no idea where you were planning on going with the story, but I definitely think it has more potential and more avenues to explore as you go.
    I also liked your comment on maybe hermione having an effect on snape. Not that he needs character changes, I love reading him with how you have portrayed him thus far. And yes, I agree that dumbledore is shaping up very interestingly... when he watched snape and hermione for a minute, it really intrigued me and had me thinking that perhaps dumbledore was a dirty old man when you take everything else away

    So, basically, very, very cool story and I will keep my eye out for any further chapters if you choose to write more (or any other stories of yours, come to think of it).
    thanks
    keesli
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  • From ANON - calamitysandra on December 12, 2005
    This was incredibly hot!
    Please continue!
    I think Severus and Hermione could profit from this ones "terms" of this relationship are establihed. (Not to mention how much I could profit :D )

    Sandra
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  • From ANON - lilly on December 12, 2005
    I like the story and I hope you continue it. BUT I still would like to have a happy ending. I am a sap at heart and I would like all the stories I like and read to have a happing ending even if it is in the sequel. So please continue and think about what I am asking. I can not place my finger on why I love Severus and Hermione so much as a couple. Can you?
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  • From ANON - Megan on December 12, 2005
    Continue, please! You've kind of stopped it at a point where Snape has washed his hands of Hermione, but you could put him in a situation where she starts challenging him daily and he feels the need to put her in her place. There are a LOT of ways to dominate a person - it would be interesting to see how he could get a psychological hold over her and really drag her into the "dark side." I would LOVE to read a confrontation between Albus and Hermione. It would be a way of her gaining power in her own right even while willingly relinquishing it in the basest of ways. This all kind of reminds me of Ayn Rand - have you ever read any of her stuff?
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  • From ANON - Inspire on December 12, 2005
    Please continue. I think that there is still more interesting story to tell in this one.
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  • From ANON - Patrice on December 12, 2005
    Hmm, I say stop and continue with the #1 ~ What Was I Thinking? series (mainly because I need more,) But if you want, continue with this. Its a great story and I would like to see the whole Hermione Rebel thing also.

    Hmm I know the final decision rests with you but please don't forget about WWIT.

    Patrice
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  • From slygriff21 on December 12, 2005
    YOU CAN'T END IT HERE! AT LEAST ONE MORE CHAPTER! I HAVE TO AT LEAST SEE WHAT HAPPENS THE NEXT DAY! PRETTY PLEASE! PRETTY PLEASE WITH WHIPPED CREAM, SPRINKLES, CHOCOLATE SYRUP AND A CHERRY ON TOP! DON'T END IT HERE!

    YOUR BIGGEST FAN,
    TIFFANY
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