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Reviews for Inside the Blackest Heart (Edit, Not Update)

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - Edania on December 11, 2005
    let it be known, i have fallen and can't get up. Man i loved this chapter!
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  • From slygriff21 on December 11, 2005
    Ohhhh! I love this story! This is probably one of your best yet! I can't wait for you to update again and soon!

    Tiffany
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  • From ANON - JW on December 11, 2005
    Ch 9 - "petrificus partialus" makes sense to me, too. He could've just held her down, but he's a wizard, so he might as well use a spell... And can you write a little faster, please? (heh-heh! joke)
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  • From ANON - Maria on December 11, 2005
    Hi Ms Figg - yes, I see what you mean about Snape seducing Hermione into evil. And you're right - you did portray hermione as having masochistic tendencies. I'm really looking forward to the rest of this story!
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  • From ANON - Snapelover11 on December 11, 2005
    Interesting and lovely. I like the dark Snape. What I like even more, would be the possible dark Hermione. Who says you can't turn the tables every now and agian? Everyone writes fics about HG turning SS. Why can't there be one where SS turns HG to the darkness? I'm down with that!
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  • From ANON - french girl on December 11, 2005
    Mrs Figg YOU are the devil, cutting the story right here is really not fair .
    I won't be able to wait until tomorrow.

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  • From Ms_Figg on December 11, 2005
    Maria: Snape is a bastard, has no redeeming qualities, but Hermione came to him wiliing and though he will more than likely brutalize her, he is not raping her in this instance. Deep down Hermione actually wants to be brutalized. Snape is into pain but also control. Pain is a tool with which to gain control. He's more interested in accessing Hermione's body right now, than beating her. Though he will do it if he has to. It was more expedient to cast the spell to gain control for what he wants to do. Remember, true evil is seductive and wins others over to it. Snape is true evil incarnate. He wants to draw Hermione into his evil.

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  • From ANON - missbug on December 11, 2005
    i've been a luker for so long but i have to say your just fantastic and this has to be one of your best stories. Hope you update soon and keep up the awsomwe work
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  • From ANON - Maria on December 11, 2005
    I would've liked to read what he'd do if she disobeyed him by moving - why is a sadistic bastard that takes pleasure from others' pain giving her a chance to escape punishment for disobedience? And shouldn't she be terrified of being physically brutalized? Yes, we all have 'rape' fantasies - that's why we're reading Snape fanfiction - but being truly forced is a horrific idea. Don't get me wrong - I love your writing and all your stories, but if this is a truly evil!Snape then this shouldn't end up as a seduction.
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  • From slygriff21 on December 11, 2005
    Awsome update! I can't wait to read more! I really love this story so far! Can't wait for more!

    Your biggest fan,
    Tiffany
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  • From ANON - dryade on December 11, 2005
    Grand chapters. I'm so happy you update so quickly. It's wonderfully dark and sinfull.
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  • From ANON - droxy on December 11, 2005
    this fic is so predatory but not as nasty as you portrayed. Poor curious Hermione, he's claiming her and she doesnt seem to have a choice. What will she do if she tries to break away after the curiosity is satisifed? Hmmm

    After this perhaps a Christmas fic? Where Snape chases a reluctant Hermione. :)
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  • From ANON - angel on December 11, 2005
    ~lol~ what was great .. i love the spell... please please update soon ..later for now

    angel
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  • From ccrawley on December 11, 2005
    Well that sucks for Hermione not being able to move and Snape's so total control. Kinda of want her to disobey to see what will happen. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - denise on December 11, 2005
    great! i like it alot! i bet my husband would like to know that petrificus.... spell lol, i never stay still when he wants me to.....
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