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Reviews for Inside the Blackest Heart (Edit, Not Update)

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - wolfen on December 10, 2005
    I sincerely love Evil Snape, but I have to admit there a kernal of Hufflepuff/Gryffindor in me that believe in the Redeemable Bad Guy underneath it all.

    By the way, do you ever sleep? Not that I'm complaining, of course, I just wonder how you manage to be so prolific.

    Cheers,

    wolfen
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  • From ANON - a_reader on December 10, 2005
    I feel a bit like Hermione at the moment, knowing that I absolutely shouldn't be finding this arousing, but wanting to know want might happen all the same.


    This is a bald-faced dark fic, and I like that your Snape doesn't make excuses for himself. I personally find it rarely believeable when writers start out with a remorseless Snape who somehow "sees the light" at the hands of a good woman by Chapt. 7. I also think that authors tend to forget that Hermione may be very mature for her age, but that she still only has a teenager's perspective and is limited by her experiences. Your H. seems believably age-appropriate to me.


    Your characterization of Dumbledore is spot-on. I tend to think of him as much of a manipulator as Voldemort, in some ways, or at the very least just as ruthless. No one who "twinkles" so much can be for real ;)


    But really, you don't need me to validate your story ;) You're a fabulous writer and I look forward to what comes next.
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  • From ANON - firewall on December 10, 2005
    Ch 3&4 - Yes, Albus, you had a part in creating that man but then you aren't exactly lily white yourself, are you? I have to admit, I feel sorry for Hermione in this one.
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  • From ANON - firewall on December 10, 2005
    Ch 1&2 - Ah Hermione honey, run, little girl, run! This professor is much more than you bargained for. Not good for your story but the truth.
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  • From ANON - snapelover11 on December 10, 2005
    Interesting view on Severus. I just adore that you are able to switch gears and see everyone from a different angle. I most enjoyed your chractersiation of Albus. I see him much the same way actually. You are an artist Figgy. Kudos to you!
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  • From ANON - bambiholmes on December 10, 2005
    Dark-Fics are my fav, sooo very glad that you are creating one :D Can't wait for an update .
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  • From ANON - lilly on December 10, 2005
    I do not mind an occasional dark fic but what i love is watching Severus change slowly from a bad boy to a caring and even twisted loving person. I think there is a a thing about making the bad boys the ideal hubby. Please continue and update soon.
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  • From ANON - dryade on December 10, 2005
    This is the best fic I've read in a loooong time. I love him dark and depraved. And you make it so believable I'm starting to check the shadows behind me. ;)
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  • From ANON - Megan on December 10, 2005
    Thank you SO MUCH for listening to my request! You've got the perfect explanation for Hermione's masochism, and Snape is actually evil! Thank you thank you thank you!!! It's an amazing story. Of course, by now I'm not surprised when you turn out amazing stories. Looking forward to the rest of this one :):)
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  • From ANON - septentrion on December 10, 2005
    ch 4 : sure your Snape is dark but he's still hot ! I'm glas you're such a fast updater.
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  • From ANON - apm on December 10, 2005
    Definitely a change from some of your others - Snape has normally just been misunderstood, but now I think he's awful! This is makihng me feel more unconfortable than most of the other fafic around, possibly because your characterisation of Snape has normally been much more sympathetic. I love how frequently you are able to update - keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - angel on December 10, 2005
    man so so close ... and it good to know that albus know the it was he who made snape a monster .... and there is all was the next time she has patrol .... cat wait in till next time ...later

    angel
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 10, 2005
    Ermm... more? Like Ch's 5-10... soon?

    ;-)
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  • From ANON - JW on December 10, 2005
    Ch 1-4 - and here I was, having withdrawal pains from an update for a Ms_Figg story, when VOILA! a NEW story!! Thank you, sweet author, for spoiling us!! It's certainly a dark Snape, but also a dark Dumbledore; Albus should treat his sole spy a lot nicer, to keep him loyal. Besides, if Dumbledore forces Snape to give Voldy false info that's not backed up, it just makes Snape's credibility drop with Voldy - which is NOT something that Dumbledore should want. So Dumbledore seems very foolish here, and I hope he smartens up. As for Hermione, well, she's 18, so if it's what she wants.... :=)
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  • From ccrawley on December 10, 2005
    Such tension. Hate Dumbledore for keeping a spy with less than honorable actions/intentions. More soon. Thanks for updating the chapters so fast.
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