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Reviews for Fallen Boy Wonders [Not Meant to be Found]

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  • From on December 11, 2005
    Great beginnign, but you might wanna read through it again... a huge section has been repeated?!?!?
    Can't wait for more
    Chow for now!
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  • From ANON - LadyX on December 10, 2005
    this is looking pretty interesting but from the shower scene you skipped back to where harrys song just finished just so ya know. cant wwait for more
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on December 10, 2005
    What did Dumbledore do? Both Harry and Draco are Veela? Need chapter 2? Will Severus just leave them alone? What did he do to Harry?
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  • From ANON - Alison on December 10, 2005
    Um, I think your post is messed up. It cuts off when they're stripping for the bath and then reposts some of the previous paragraphs. Great story though. I will check back to read the rest when it's fixed. Oh, and please update soon! =o)
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  • From ANON - Lady Desu on December 09, 2005
    Very interesting, dear. I am usually not too fond of Draco/Harry fan fiction, most of it is really horridly written. Well. Not the style. But the actual relationship. Like. They hate each other then they all of a sudden love each other thing. I think that you made a good choice by skipping it, because I know it is problably very hard to write an actual esclating relationship well.

    Anyway, I shall definally have to check on this one. Also. At the end the chapter repeated itself. Like it had the scene where Draco and Harry are in the tub then it starts again back where Draco and Harry get off the stage and Harry knows Severus is there. Just a simple error, really, but I felt the need to point it out.

    Anyway. Good luck with this and I hope you update sometime soon.
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  • From ANON - Amessis on December 09, 2005
    Great start to this! Looking forward to more.
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  • From dmalfoy on December 09, 2005
    I enjoyed this story the last time I found it on another site. Still just as entertaining.
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