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Reviews for Dreams do come true (COMPLETE)

By : kelliechar
  • From ANON - Emmylovedraco on November 28, 2006
    oh my god you have to keep going pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeee! I love it I need more, ''hehehe''
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  • From ANON - Gaps of Misery on February 07, 2006
    Once again, I forgot the most important fact.... a threesome with Severus!!! OMG!! *faints* ;) You won't believe it, but it's so rare to have him and Lucius in a threesome. One should thing it should be natural! *lol*
    Uhm, yeah, that's it. Just wanted to let you know it... ;)
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  • From ANON - Gaps of Misery on February 07, 2006
    My deepest regrets for not having reviewed lately. I had no internet and quite some exams to do, but now the internet and I are back, and I have three things to say: 1) Jesus, that last chapter was just HOT!!! WOW!!! *lol* 2) The other chapters were really good and full of tension, too (see? I told you poor Voldy would be pissed if no one invited him... that's what already happened to Sleeping Beauty when her parents didn't invite all fairies...) and 3) Thanks so much for you sweet review on my own fanfic!! I'm not very fond about Narcissa by normal standards, so I use every single chance to get her and Lucius divorced! ;) Although I have to admit that she is quite a caring, lovely character in my other fanfic ("Secret Bliss")... so maybe you want to check out that story some day? :)
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  • From ANON - Gaps of Misery on January 11, 2006
    By the way, thanks for you nice words! :) I could never lose my interest in this story, it's just that I don't always have time to properly read and review, so don't worry. Yeah, the last few chapters were definitely easier to read... I'm absolutely content! *lol* ;)
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  • From ANON - Gaps of Misery on January 11, 2006
    Whoa, lots of troubles ahead. ;) Of course Voldemort is pissed now that's official he isn't invited to the wedding - what did you think?? *lol* As for Pansy, I can't say I'm very sorry... never really liked her at all. There are a few things in the last chapters (like Lucius' dark side) that strongly remind me of my own fanfic, and I'm glad that finally someone sees that side in Lucius as well. :) Oh, and did I get that right? A threesome with Severus?? Christmas is coming early again... *lol* ;)
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  • From kelliechar on January 09, 2006
    Thankyou again Gaps Of Misery, I was starting to think I had lost your interest in the story, hopefully this update is up to your standards Thank you :-D
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  • From ANON - Gaps of Misery on January 07, 2006
    Sorry that I didn't review for quite some time - was busy (christmas, new year, birthday)! But here I am, back with a lot to say:
    Especially chapter 13: AWWW! That was SO sweet! I hate Lucius for proposing to her when he should do it to ME!! *lol*
    As for the rest... well, dear Voldy seems to be a little pissed off (no wonder when there are happy couples and weddings around him, but he never gets invited to any party! *lol*), and I'm afraid Lucius will have a load of hard times ahead with both Voldemort and his parents-in-law, but the plot gets even better, though! And I really liked the french side of Lucius... I can see him pretty well in that with all his arrogance and ruthlessness. ;)
    So... where's the next chapter???? I'm hungry for more!!! *lol*

    Just one little thing, though: Could you maybe try to use more commas? Cuz sometimes your sentences are kinda hard to read when you put too few commas in it. I thought maybe that suggestion could help... ;) Thx anyway.
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  • From ANON - Gaps of Misery on December 19, 2005
    I'm completely content - hot smut with Lucius and lots of fun in general. Nothing to complain here! *lol* Except that Lucius is ALL mine!! *hehe* ;)
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  • From InfernalParadise on December 14, 2005
    Oh my, "Accio Harry Potter"... that was so hilarious!! *lol* I liked how you switched the POV, but it was a bit confusing at times. Nevertheless, great chapters (and great smut!!). ;) Hopefully more smut with Lucius in the next updates?? :)
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  • From ANON - Gaps of Misery on December 11, 2005
    I can't believe it - this could amost be MY fantasy!! *lol* If Lucius truly showed up in my life, however, he'd probably regret it... lots of work to do for him, then. *if you know what I mean* ;) Excellently written - I can't wait to read more of it!!!
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